MKHS: First Semster

I'm liking this series more than MK:Logic. Keep it up!

Hey! Like both series equally ;)

Its good because you're not restricted to the personalities of the MK characters. In this series you can toy around with their personalities and make it way more interesting.. But Mk Logic is still good ;)
 
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Wait, am I writing next? We were talking about it in the chat room. In either case, I don't think I can match the greatness of this series. And I quickly become serious in most of my writings.
 
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Wait, am I writing next? We were talking about it in the chat room. In either case, I don't think I can match the greatness of this series. And I quickly become serious in most of my writings.

No it's Mr. Ermac's turn. And don't worry about matching, write in your own style cause I know you have an amazing style :-D
 
Why are they going to school on Saturday and Sunday?

They're not at school. There at the dorm rooms which are next to the school

This is really funny! Keep up the good work!

Thanks for the feedback :D

Its good because you're not restricted to the personalities of the MK characters. In this series you can toy around with their personalities and make it way more interesting.. But Mk Logic is still good ;)

Well I'm glad that you like both of them. It helps a lot when you give yor feedback Exemery
 
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Well sh*t. Don't expect magical unicorns.
When you read this, compare it to flaming dog shit... it's about equal.

*Open Scene on Monday Morning, Liu Kang/Kung Lao's dorm room.*

**Liu Kang is wearing a plain white shirt, black pants and a red belt, Kung Lao is wearing an outfit similar to Liu's without the belt and a blue t-shirt.**

Liu Kang: You honestly can't expect me to ask her that.
Kung Lao: Why not? It happened before, it should happen again. Besides, you obviously find her hot.
Liu Kang: *Blushes slightly and looks away from Kung Lao, grabbing his backpack.* Let's get to school.
Kung Lao: It's 7:30. You can easily wait another ten mi *Liu Walks out the door*nutes.. God what a pansy.

*Following Liu*

*NOTE: Words in parenthesis are thoughts unless in scenery, then it's side notes. (Or some such ********.)*

Liu Kang: (I wish everyone would just stop meddling in all of this relationship sh*t.. It's seriously getting ann--)

*Jax and Johnny Cage both walk out of their dorms, greeting Liu Kang. No-So-Surprisingly Johnny had his sunglasses on (in the hallway), wearing plain black jeans and a white shirt with a leather jacket. Jax was wearing a purple tee shirt and blue jeans, sporting fake dogtags.*

Johnny Cage: I swear, you should just take off those dog-tags, you look like an idiot.
Jax: Yeah right! You're just mad because I kicked your ass at CoD!

*Johnny rolls his eyes.. (not like you could see that, or anything.)*

Liu Kang: So why are you guys leaving so early?
Johnny Cage: Scorpion and Sub-Zero are still passed out.
Jax: *Cuts Johnny off* Their f*cking snoring is loud!
Liu Kang: Oh that makes sense I guess.
Johnny Cage: So why are you leaving so early?

*Johnny Cage looks at Liu Kang*

Liu Kang: Oh. Kung Lao was pestering me about Kitana.

*Johnny once again rolls his eyes and looks straight ahead*

Jax: What's going on with you and her anyways?
Liu Kang: I'm not sure. (God why can't people just leave it be?)
Jax: I was thinking about talking to Sonya..
Liu Kang: About what?
Jax: I think I really like her, man.

*Johnny Cage starts to laugh*

Johnny Cage: Y-..You can't be serious! That's klassic!
Jax: I can kick your ass right here and right now, Cage.
Johnny Cage: Hey man, relax... These are expensive glasses.

*Liu Kang, Jax, and Johnny arrive at school, running into Kitana and Mileena*

Jax: *Whispers a bit too loud to Liu Kang* There's your chance, talk to her.

*Jax shoves Liu Kang towards Kitana softly*

Liu Kang: H-Hey Kitana!
Kitana: Oh, hey Liu.
Liu Kang: Why weren't you at the party over the weekend?
Kitana: Oh.. Um, my parents wouldn't let me..
Liu Kang: Oh.. I see.. Well, I'll see you in class.
Kitana: *smiles and nods* See 'ya there.

*Kitana and Mileena both walk into the school*

Johnny Cage: Who was that girl in pink?
Jax: How do you not remember? That's Mileena.
Johnny Cage: Mil-e-who?
Jax: Nevermind.

*Johnny Cage, Jax, and Liu Kang enter the school.*

**Scene back to Scorpion and Sub-Zero's room.**

Scorpion: Ah.. sh*t.. what time is it?
Sub-Zero: It's.. ugh.. 7:40?!
Scorpion: You're f*cking me, right?
Sub-Zero: No! That was just a dream.
Scorpion: Shut the f*ck up.
Sub-Zero: Gay.
Scorpion: I'm going to get ready.

*Sub-Zero and Scorpion are practically ready in two minutes, skipping showers as Scorpion dons a yellow t-shirt and black jeans, Sub-Zero wearing a black t-shirt and blue jeans.*

**Kung Lao leaves his dorm about five minutes after Liu Kang, running into Sub-Zero and Scorpion who just left their dorms.**

Kung Lao: Hey you two.
Scorpion&Sub-Zero: Hey Kung.
Kung Lao: Why are you guys up so late? You guys smell like B.O.
Scorpion: I couldn't sleep 'til later in the night.
Sub-Zero: I just like sleeping in.
Kung Lao: *Takes a pause for second.* Right.. So anyways, you guys ready for the first day of real sch-- You know what, I'm not even going to ask. You're obviously not ready.
Sub-Zero: Hah! You're a comedian! Shut up.

*Scorpion, Sub-Zero, and Kung Lao make small talk until they reach the school, just as the bell rings*

Sub-Zero,Scorpion,&KungLao: Sh*t! We're gonna be late.

*They all run to their class.*

**Now to Mileena and Kitana.. a bit earlier.. Let's just say like, 7:25 or something.**

Mileena: Why don't you just tell him?
Kitana: Tell who what?
Mileena: *Dries her hair out, looking at Kitana with a smirk.* Liu Kang. You don't like him.
Kitana: It's not that I don't like him, Mileena.
Mileena: Right. But every chance you get you avoid him and lie to him. You sure sound like you like him.
Kitana: *Sighs slightly before speaking* You know what.. maybe I should tell him I'm not interested in him.. at least not yet.
Mileena: Yet? *She says as she slips over her shirt.
Kitana: Yes, yet. I think he's cute and all, and I'd like to be with him.. but he really likes me and I don't want to hurt him that bad.
Mileena: So, are you gonna wait 'til you're thirty to ask him if he wants to "go out" with you?
Kitana: If that's how long it takes.
Mileena: Okay, whatever you say, sis.

*Mileena and Kitana both leave, arriving at school with the others*

**Now we're in the classroom.. YAY FOR WRITING!**

Shang Tsung: Okay, class, today we're putting you in partners for your science block. I don't know why they have ME doing this, but I'll do it because I have to. I want you all to stand up, and when I say your names, fill in the rows sitting next to your partner. This will be for today ONLY. Okay, ready?

*The class stands up, awkwardly looking around at each other.*

Shang Tsung: Jax and Hydro. Mileena and Johnny Cage. Kabal and Reptile. Ermac and Skarlet. Noob and Jade. Rain and Kano. Sonya and Cyrax. Kenshi and Sub-Zero. Scorpion and Stryker. Sektor and Smoke... Wait.. This isn't going to work.. there's not an even number of kids in this class... Well, there's going to be a group of three. Kitana, Kung Lao, and Liu Kang.
Liu Kang: (Yes!)
Kitana: (Oh god, why?)
Kung Lao: (I wonder what's for lunch..)
 
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*Kids sitting at tables in groups at three tables. Seating is Jax, Hydro, Mileena, Johnny Cage, Kabal, Reptile, Ermac and Skarlet at table one. Noob, Jade, Rain, Kano, Sonya, Cyrax, Kenshi, and Sub-Zero at table two. Scorpion, Stryker, Sektor, Smoke, Kitana, Liu Kang, and Kung Lao at table three.*

**Table One**

Kabal: Say, Hydro.. Why was your folder so short?
Hydro: Because I was hardly in the main .. adventure.. or something.
Kabal: So why are you here now?
Mileena: Stop being a d*ck, Kabal.
Kabal: I'm just sayin'!
Skarlet: *Skarlet looks at Johnny Cage* Why are you wearing sunglasses?
Johnny Cage: *Look around before looking at Skarlet* What do you mean, "Why am I wearing sunglasses?"?
Skarlet: It's cloudy out.. you can't even see the sun.
Jax: That's Johnny's.. "look" as he likes to call it. Even though it makes him look blind.
Johnny Cage: Don't diss the shades, man!
Jax: Yeah-yeah.. whatever.

*They continue chit-chatting as our attention moves to Table Two*

Noob: Hey, Jade?
Jade: What do you want?
Noob: How was Smoke?
Jade: What about him?
Noob: You know.. the feel-up.
Jade: What?!
Noob: He told me you went to the movies with him last night.
Jade: Oh really?
Noob: Yeah, so how was it.
Jade: You're an idiot, aren't you?
Noob: Hey, what's that suppos'ta mean?

*Jade ignores Noob*

Noob: Ugh, whatever.
Kano: So how was my party, guys?
Rain: You had a party?
Kano: Shut the f*ck up.
Rain: Just sayin'.
Cyrax *To Sonya*: Hey, what's up?
Sonya *Looking downtrodden*: Nothing really, just upset, I guess.
Cyrax: What's wrong?
Sonya: I don't know.. I'm just confused.
Cyrax: ..Alright..
Sonya: Do you think I could change seating.. for science?
Cyrax: I don't know. Why?
Sonya: I don't want to sit next to Kano.
Cyrax: I wouldn't want to sit next to him either. He looks obnoxious.

*Attention goes to Table three*

Liu Kang: Hey Kitana.
Kitana: Oh hey, Liu.
Liu Kang&Kitana: I have something to tell you
Liu Kang: Oh. You go first!
Kitana: ..I don't want to go out with you right now.
*Liu Kang sits there quietly, as does Kung Lao.*
Kitana: What were you going to say?
Liu Kang: I was just going to say.. uh.. you have a loose string on that shirt of yours..
Kitana: Oh.. Thanks.
Smoke: Dra~ma.

*Sektor hits the back of Smoke's head.*

Smoke: Hey what the--

*Sektor stares at Smoke, stoically.

Smoke: Right.
Scorpion: So what's up Stryker?
Stryker: No.
Scorpion: Okay, jeez. (What a d*ck.)

*Kast all heads back to their classes, finish up school and head back to their dorms.*

**Kung Lao and Liu Kang, walking to dorm**

Kung Lao: You alright, man?
Liu Kang: As alright as you expect.
Kung Lao: So perfect? *Kung Lao says with a smile, trying to lighten the mood.*

*Liu Kang stares at Kung Lao, an obvious "Hell Motherf*cking no" look on his face.*

Kung Lao: Okay.. well.. let's do something on friday, make you forget about it.
Liu Kang: Like what?
Kung Lao: We could always go out to a bar or something.
Liu Kang: We're 17.
Kung Lao: We could do SOMETHING.
Liu Kang: *Shrugs* Okay.. invite some other people though.
Kung Lao: Sweet.

*Kung Lao and Liu Kang reach their dorm, do homework, watch TV and eventually goto sleep. (Apparently everyone else does too, because I don't feel like writing out everyone's situation AS they goto bed, but here it is in short. They do homework, eat, sleep.)*

Now someone else do Tuesday.
 
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not bad! just wanna point out that you mentioned "god" too many times, so if you found another word to replace that it would be less repetitive..
 
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That was awesome! The way you twisted the plot with Kitana and Liu was none the less amazing. It had really good humor in it, well written and overall very, very good.

Kano: So how did you guys like my party?
Rain: You had a party?
Kano: Shut the f*ck up!

My favorite line :-D
 
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I know what ya mean liu. Doesn't matter how long it takes you to write it, as long as its a good read
 
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Woop. I like the feedback. This is the first time I've written any sort of fan fiction. :D. MOAR CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM...And moar flattery ♥

not bad! just wanna point out that you mentioned "god" too many times, so if you found another word to replace that it would be less repetitive..

Now that you point that out, isn't there more than one god in that world? WHATEVERLOL.

That was awesome! The way you twisted the plot with Kitana and Liu was none the less amazing. It had really good humor in it, well written and overall very, very good.

Kano: So how did you guys like my party?
Rain: You had a party?
Kano: Shut the f*ck up!

My favorite line :-D

-snickers-

Been loving the writing from all of people helping you :)

-bows- Thank you, Thank you.
What could be missing?

Yeah, what is missing?.. Even though the story's not done yet.
 
Why do I keep coming here to check if someone posted a new story ever 2 minutes >_<

Calm down, I'm working on it, LOL. Here's a tiny spoiler: Safety day!

No, but seriously, we had a safety day at our school today, so I'm trying to go that path. IDK How it will end. And, I haven't written anything for a few months, so I may be a bit rusty, then I'll continue work on my main project.

its not that Im impatient, its more that Im so anxious to hear your story :D!

I understand. Should be out later 2day.Kinda stuck though, either let Kahn have a bit of a talk or go to the characters while he's doing his speech. The Kahn path is a bit more boring (probably, anyways) but it'll be easier. The characters have a more vibrant personality, so it'll be a bit better to read, but it might be a bit harder, storywise.
 
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WHAT THE HELL MAN? You should have put Freddy in here since you were talking about "wet dreams" and "nightmares"....

So sad now!

:(

Why would Freddy be linked to wet dreams?
*Thinks about it*
EWWWWWWWWWW!!!! :O

lol on-topic: Well do I have a surprise for you guys. of course I'm not going to tell. ;)
 
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