I re-read the first chapter, and noticed the huge differences, lol I wasn't expecting the fan-fic to be this long, becoming a serious project.
So when I'm completely done, and decide to upload it to somewhere like DeviantArt or Fan-Fic.net, I'm rewriting the first few chapters.
I'm also going to re-write some of the serious chapters but take out the girl-on-girl action, lol. Like I said, I didn't expect for it so get so far.
Also, how did you guys like this update? Critiques would be appreciated, since I feel a bit rusty with fan-fiction.