Poetry Thread

[BBBLP]

Eternal Lover, by B,B,B, LP

It took you years, to reveal your love
I can still remember, when we first touched

You never yell, you never shout
I know you babe, inside and out

Baby the way you act, is just so nasty
I wouldn't trade you, for ANY ass cheek

You know when I want it, and when I don't
When I say you will, you never say you wont

I lather you up, with only the best lubes
Together we watch, all the porn tubes

You be my b!tch, I'll be your man
I'll forever love you, my right hand


:laugh:

 

[Aldo Moreno]

you like all these lovey-dovey poems eh?

And yes I did? Whats wrong with that?

 

[DarkSideOfTheMoon]

And yes I did? Whats wrong with that?

I never said theres anything wrong with that. Im just not into that latin lover stuff though. Thats your feel & style of poetry and thats cool

 

[Aldo Moreno]

I never said theres anything wrong with that. Im just not into that latin lover stuff though. Thats your feel & style of poetry and thats cool

Lol my parents are from Mexico but I was born in Waco, Texas.

I am not really good a poems about other things. Well, I haven't tried. Maybe I should.

 

[Phil River]

Rated Ao for Adults Only

Spoiler:

Hickory dickory dock,
Some chick was sucking my c0ck.
The the clock struck two,
I dropped my goo and dumped the b1tch on the next block!

Eenie meenie miney moe,
Suck my dick and swallow slow!

Roll, roll, roll your c*nt
Gently down my prick.
Merrily, merrily, merrily, merrily,
Then you'll suck my dick.

Jack and Jill went up the hill
And Jack would try to hump her.
Jill said No / and Jack said So
I'll ram it in your dumper.

"Poetry" by Andrew Dice Clay.

 

[nemesiswontdie]

I'm bumping the shit out of this thread.

As of late, I've been going through my phone reading a lot of my poetry/lyrics from over this past year. While reading, I figured with the necessary changes to my writing, I don't think they're bad at all.

I would also like to say this first of all.
These are MINE and not STOLEN like the last time someone decided to make a poetry thread lol (you all know what I'm talking about ).
Also, these aren't as 'pretty' or uplifting either. That kind of writing isn't in me.
These are more or less lyrics to the music I make, but I guess they can be taken as poems too.

Spoiler:

Written on July 20th 2012 8:42PM

Walk beyond what is known
Hidden from what is not shown
A power of trust and bond
Lying to cover what is truthfully wrong
The answer is without meaning
If hidden by the shadows
It's not worth seeing.

Stained glass and lying eyes
It was now the time for me to realize
I was hypnotized
Through the glass is darkness and sea
This was never meant to be
For you or me

Lost in thought
Forgotten time
I now know what is mine
Important as air
I don't seem to care
Hard as steel
Now that I finally feel
Black as the bottom of the sea
There was a purpose to a degree
A pinch of ash with sand and snow
In this room alone
This is the beginning but don't let it show

Reach out and grasp what's there
Drown in lies only to collapse in air
Crushed snare
Never arrived
Its still not here

You made me believe.

Spoiler:

Written on July 27th 2012 12:08am

High[er] and [a] gone[r]
Destroyed and nothing left
Why on God's stupid earth
Would you expect anything less?

Strings pulled and picked
So simple and strict
Was so obvious and yet was missed
Out of socket
Into the golden locket
Around your neck
Misguided into disillusion
"Insane" at best

Look in the fog
What you see isn't really there
Sealed and shut
Locked in your own nightmare
Shadow pierce
Leading the lingering stench
Falling into a dead ditch
Blood smears
Evil sneer
Losing hope to what humanity holds dear
But even she doesn't know which is which

Matters are shattered
Emotionally immobilized
Wor[l]d['s] dead inside
What was wrong is right
What was wrong is still wrong
All this smoke
Losing sight
Empty mind
Deserted parts
Given the chance, I'll restart
We've [I've] reached the "mark"

Begin again
Like always
The rules bend
Remember when it was fun to pretend?
At this point in time
You'll have to decide
to rot inside
Or to stay away and reside

What a wreck
Such a mess
Why would you even expect anything less?
"Insane" at best

 

[YungQ94]

Not bad poetry at all my man!
Liked the rhyming and I could understand the meaning for each piece

 

[nemesiswontdie]

Not bad poetry at all my man!
Liked the rhyming and I could understand the meaning for each piece

Thanks buddy.

They might not be as happy feeling and what not like some others, but I just can't write happy stuff. Never been good it.

Looking at those ones from this year and then looking back to when I was in a metal band quite a few years ago, I can say my writing has improved a shit ton. The stuff from then was laughable. Awful. Just awful.

These on the other hand, I actually do enjoy these ones though.

Too bad I only remember writing the first one.

Pretty positive the second one was written under the influence. The only thing I did was edit spelling mistakes and add a few things that were necessary to both.

 

[Critical-Limit]

Pretty average...... pretty average...

Spoiler:

For a poetic genius

 

[nemesiswontdie]

Ha! thanks, dude. I'm nowhere near as good as say Maynard James Keenan from Tool/APC or Nevik Ogre from Skinny Puppy. But they definitely do inspire my writing a lot.

 

[C-Sword]

Some stuff I wrote

Gran, you were no stranger
To my random bursts of anger
Your fight versus cancer
Had this gook searching for answers
Lord, what have we done wrong
For her to be taken away
Although you seem long gone
I'm feeling heartbroken today
Shame got the best of me
My whole life was in jeopardy
Since I tried desperately
Being left out of your legacy
Wasn't it obvious
Emotions were held hostages
Come back to offer us
Your expertise and knowledges
My goal was always to
Bring the most beautiful girl home
And proudly say to you
Nana, my music is world-known
I failed you in the end
Reason why I removed myself
From family events
No one knew how I truly felt
Acting shy was a cover-up
For my psychotic depression
I would not bother much
Displaying facial expressions
Putting on my headphones
Daydream of your resurrection
I refuse to head home
Take my soul with you to heaven

 

[nemesiswontdie]

Re: Some stuff I wrote

Stuff I wrote V.2!

I like it!

 

[Shirayuki Mizore]

Re: Some stuff I wrote

It flows very well!

 

[nemesiswontdie]

Human moral
Disregarded for oil
Killing is now a game
Enemies are just the same
Numbers
A life springs
A beautiful beginning
To a sudden brutal end
Dirty and mean
Evil lies covered in 3
Colors to represent
Many dead in a gutter
Believing the state
Thinking we're so great
Ending the many, many fates

A freedom they cannot win
The same words over and over again
Any god, any color
Any choice
Speaking loud without a stutter
Death are many in the world
Faces gone, bodies hurled
Agony caused by we
Way too selfish too see
Because what we want is what we need
Families killed
Because we believe
We're the greatest

God bless.

 

[Freyith]

That's all well and good, however, behold.


Roses are red;
Violets are blue.
|3itch, better watch out...
I'll cut you.



Move along.

 

[nemesiswontdie]

One of my favorite stories is the story of Orpheus and Eurydice.

Orpheus loved Eurydice and were supposed to get married but on their wedding day, Eurydice was bitten by a Viper and was killed. Orpheus finds her and was overwhelmed with grief and played such sorrowful music that even the gods wept. So Orpheus went down to the Underworld to bring Eurydice back to the world of the living and Hades agreed on one condition. On his way back to the world of the living, Orpheus had to walk in front of her and could not look at her until they were both in the world of the living. While walking, Orpheus felt that Hades deceived him and she wasn't behind him but kept walking. Once he made it to the mortal world, he turned around to just to see her vanish back into the Underworld forever because she wasn't on the other side with him yet.

Another version is that Eurydice wasn't killed just because, but for dancing with the Naiads on her wedding day.

I like to think that 'dancing' was more or less cheating on Orpheus on their wedding day and she wasn't ever in love with him in the first place but was using him and she felt guilty for doing so.

I made two poems, one from each perspective. One from Orpheus and one from [my version of] Eurydice. I've been debating on whether to post them or not, but finally decided to.

Orpheus

Searching and searching
Looking for your bright beautiful light
But I feel your presence fleeting
only to find your sudden release
Vanished into this unforgiving night
An abrupt ending that's so undeserving

Overwhelmed with grief
By life's ever changing tune
Will crawl down to hell
Pull you up to see our stars and our moon
I'll face Hades
Drown in dead's eternal empty sea
Anything at all
Anything to set you free

I'll hold on to your lifeless existence
I can't look at you
But I'll always be here
No matter the distance
Forever.


Eurydice

Fangs of a Viper pierce the skin
Swept away into the infinite suffering
The only thing that lies within
Stripped of all the living
Kept by the dead
But it's what I wanted

Our dance was not bound to be sacred
Your were never my 'one'
Such is a life that's wasted
I will sever our bond
To be tainted
Living in my own hell
That I've made vacant

I'll follow you to the world we know
For your own freedom
Vanish in front of your eyes
And wipe me from your mind
To rid you of me
And my luring demons.

 

[Kzaoo]

I'm necroing this thread. I don't even care. I don't write poetry often at all... but it can be a good outlet, so I decided to give it a go.


Nomad
A gust of wind
Blows seeds of dandelion astray
The sun grinned
And said everything would be okay

One flower grows
Pretty and nice
Another follows
Dandelions don’t only grow twice

Seeds of deceit planted
There are too many to count
At first I was enchanted
Now I’m consumed by doubt

The sun blinds my eyes
There is too much to see
Hope within me dies
I can no longer see me

So I search for a place
Where I can reside
Wear my own face
Hold my head high with pride

Countless opportunities
But I remain a nomad
A million communities
But no home to be had

Too much light
Fate’s noose tightens
Eyes forsake sight
so the world never brightens.

Spoiler:

It's about how hard it is to find a place in the world. The seeds are opportunities and the sun is life, basically. There's so many opportunities that they completely consume you and you don't know what to do with them and just like weeds, they slowly overtake the garden that is you and they aren't wanted.

The sun, which represents life, is killing you. You're stuck in darkness, which too much light brings and you find you can no longer see. You lose sight of yourself and you can't recognise your own place in the world.

 

[stoneforest]

Lots of creativity and inspiration to be found in here. Far out.

Spoiler:

KAORI UP A PLUM TREE
it's like remembering
your boyfriend always had a thing for me
but who am i to judge because he gives you everything
your boyfriend hits you in the exact right place
well who the hell am i because i don't see anything
my vessel thinks it sinks in a bad star
you put flowers in my beard will you wake up and marry me
please take my hand let's find kaori up a plum tree
who am i again oh it's all coming back to me now
how much for your point of view
on the subject on the matter dark and light
cradle at the bottom of the ocean
i set my entire body alight
ain't nothing left here but ashes
and those too for you will foam under a blue moon
i think it's like remembering
i think it's like remembering
i turn to stone you turn to everyone else
lovers in disguise casting bedroom eyes everywhere
you rip me open and i reach through the wound
in place of my heart is my celtic calligraphy
i can't forget carrying rhett's casket
our firstborn and our love and our lives came to an end that day
absolute 0 in a wooden dome
my sister lives at home to take care of mother and father
how much for your point of view
on the subject on the matter dark and light
cradle at the bottom of the ocean
i set my entire body alight
ain't nothing left here but ashes
and those too for you will foam under a blue moon
under a blue moon
we're a narcissus garden underwater
holds my head down grows my beard out
time heals nothing we're just older
narcissus garden underwater life

Spoiler:

ORGASM ORGAN
kinetic hits frenetic kids dependent on attention
a morse code node inside the robe of suburban harlequins
but as you know there's room to grow your orgasm organ
hashtag lightning finger strike down masses of generation x
the war on drugs was won uh-huh by the cartels with a government paycheck
what can i say there's hell to pay for your orgasm organ
hey young gay american still savor all you're craving
an otter right now one day a wolf so that's the life you're paving
first cum first serve
rock out c*ck out
loving me is like pulling teeth
loving me is like pulling teeth
loving me is like pulling teeth
loving me is like pulling teeth
debbie be down while i try on my crown lay a backhand on her firstborn
a lolita eye-rolling well duh i got my last check from internet porn
now all you see when you look at me is your orgasm organ
aids may be the reaper of gays until it visits someone in your family
hand in hand did you hear that man what spirit are you channelling
you'll find your faith within a wraith it's your orgasm organ
hey young gay american we won't wrap what we're packing
you're at peace when you're dangerous it's karma that you're lacking
first cum first serve
rock out c*ck out
loving me is like pulling teeth
loving me is like pulling teeth
loving me is like pulling teeth
loving me is like pulling teeth
cataclysm written in a hymn some people call it a life spell
an ocean groans on dinosaur bones a black box is centered on a blood cell
meteor swarms stay true to form your orgasm organ
hey young gay american your furry chest keeps burning
sticker on the tongue gonna have some fun is this the page you're turning
first cum first serve
rock out c*ck out
loving me is like pulling teeth
loving me is like pulling teeth
loving me is like pulling teeth
loving me is like pulling teeth

Spoiler:

DOUBLE VISION
i'll dig for fossils in your body hair
leap through the fire that's freezing in you
leftover makeover melting metals down
thirst quench off a tip of a stem at the root
see double vision a line is drawn
know no such borders we'll all carry on
charge your electronic heart deep in the caves of me
it's your love saving nothing but what's left of me
climb floating gardens with hard-ons cast cure-all on me
skin of my teeth brushed up underneath the beast in me
see double vision a matter of time
the black of the forest that grows in my mind
cry 0s and 1s until power is restored
landlocked your bare feet meet waves in my ocean
soft spot or not your bare feet in my ocean
who knows if we'll see the same ghosts
there's no easy way around it
who knows if we'll see the same ghosts
there's no easy way around it
the dark horse is forever neatly polishing
blind eye to keep our hearts from breaking
there there now you're only in your head
embalm a moment share a poison with a friend
the dark horse is forever neatly polishing
blind eye to keep our hearts from breaking
there there now you're only in your head
embalm a moment share a poison with a friend

Spoiler:

SINKING STONE
strip it of all its coats of paints
point blank double elemental elastic
test ballistics pump iron through cobweb veins
size up on occasion hold my hand in smoke and mirrors
you make it up to break it up awaken a geometry
i'm stoned growing mold you make maps of my geography
heat-seek love ain't hot enough burn me with calligraphy
now it feels like you're loving me the truth is you're leaving me
i'll dry liquid metal dripping from your bearded chin
i'll cull season harvest blooming fruit from your bearded chin
get by a skinning grinning my growing branches in a chimera camera
calm a storm in naked stride make yourself a meadow
you turn me on to turn me in enlighten super symmetry
i'm alert inert inserting genetics it's not rocket science
slow-burned turn a leaf aloof your fire burns my heart
standing by your ocean demanding your water washes over me
i put my clock in your clever temperamental wind
i lock myself in the center of your sinking stone
silence the sorrows well we both know how that story goes
disperse zero dissolver who were you when this all started
i'm as high as sky is wide do i look dumb enough to try
i'm as high as sky is wide do i look dumb dumb dumb dumb dumb
i'm as high as sky is wide do i look dumb enough to try
i'm as high as sky is wide do i look dumb dumb dumb dumb dumb
i'm as high as sky is wide do i look dumb enough to try
i'm as high as sky is wide do i look dumb dumb dumb dumb dumb
i'll put your needle in my honeycomb lungs
why linger longer look there's nothing but you in everything
outlast the last mirage
you're far too powerful
true to form
a legend born

Spoiler:

2 WRONGS
keep it together
keep it to yourself won't you
a bundle of joy by mistake
you feel it kick you right where the doctor sticks you
if it goes in then it must come out
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
have heart halfhearted make room for incidental
have something to be thankful for
worse things have happened
you used to believe in it
i guess i have no room to talk
hardly hereditary bad genes termites eat through my family tree
you'll figure something out if i don't show up online for two weeks
they'll put me in some cheap box before they make the drugs to change my mind
what is it is it a
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
2 wrongs make a right depending on who wronged you
2 wrongs are always within reach
but if you shut up for long enough to listen
then you won't know what you're missing
i started off with thicker skin this chrysalis is breaking
your nightmare isn't over yet but soon you will be waking
my father is in my eyes was he there when i was molested
i run away from my body but somehow it catches up
now when i'm old enough i'll pick some trendy way to get you off
am i even half a man you never stop thinking about your ex
the sex was better then the world is tearing at the seams believe me
what is it is it a
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
boy or girl
i'm almost in love you almost wish i wasn't
you'd think that it would change but it doesn't
it sounds pitiful from the lesser of two evils
does this mean i got the 2 wrongs right
2 wrongs right
2 wrongs rite
2 wrongs write
2 wrongs right
2 wrongs rite
2 wrongs write
2 wrongs right
2 wrongs rite
2 wrongs write
2 wrongs right
2 wrongs rite
2 wrongs write
2 wrongs right
2 wrongs rite
2 wrongs write
2 wrongs right
2 wrongs rite
2 wrongs write

Spoiler:

TERRORIZE
sex it sells sleeping with your boyfriend
white blood cells attacking my red ones
every time baby bear don't feel right
baby bear is ready to get some
for what it's worth i give you everything
all of me all of my riches everything
kids on drugs kids are alright all night
are you close or are you just faking
money cures whatever makes you feel worse
easy boy i'm smoking it slowly
mark my words my high is natural
i don't want synthetic substance
don't they say something about what goes up must come down
don't they come running when i crash back into the ground
i can see it coming with my third eye
so when it happens it ain't no surprise
earthquakes swallow me whole
a patch of wildflowers brings my grave to life
time's hand caresses my cheek i age overnight
in some lives i'm a warrior in this one i'd rather love you
i can hear the people praying
hallowed name hallowed name your kingdom come
will is done on earth and in heaven
forgive me and daily bread daily bread
don't tempt me and save me from evil
the tree of life withers beneath the sky aren't we all bytching and moaning
a cute decay with fillers and vitamin a
bummer man we could've been married
time will tell time he tells everything
terrorize
don't they say something about what goes up must come down
don't they come running when i crash back into the ground
i can see it coming with my third eye
so when it happens it ain't no surprise
earthquakes swallow me whole
a patch of wildflowers brings my grave to life
time's hand caresses my cheek i age overnight
in some lives i'm a warrior in this one i'd rather love you
i still hear the people praying the lord's prayer in my ears when i lay my head down to rest
'cause i don't care what you did
and i don't care who you are
i'm not one to make believe
and i'm seeking out a cure
for this sickness that is love
which decimates everyone
i'm terrorized

Spoiler:

TITS
is there a chance
a strand of hair
your 4x4 your sigil stone
what's relative what's new with you
sexually ultraviolent
nuh uh uh
nuh uh uh
nuh uh uh
i must have known [i must have known] that's your begging bone [that's your begging bone]
yet overgrown [yet overgrown] adorned with blood runes [adorned with blood runes]
your typecast [your typecast] iconoclastic [iconoclastic]
sexually ultraviolent
nuh uh uh
nuh uh uh
nuh uh uh
i wonder what's the difference in-between reciprocation and molestation
we're all asking for beatings from our boyfriends get over it or get over here damn boy aren't ya fit
aw let's just go our separate ways
the go-sees [the go-sees] the going-ons [the going-ons]
your eyes are new [your eyes are new] your skin is firm [your skin is firm]
they'll use a coat of arms [they'll use a coat of arms] all natural no additives [all natural no additives]
sexually ultraviolent
nuh uh uh
nuh uh uh
nuh uh uh
i wonder what's the difference in-between reciprocation and molestation
we're all asking for beatings from our boyfriends get over it or get over here damn boy aren't ya fit
aw let's just go our separate ways
aw let's just go our separate ways
i'll survive if
you'll survive
i'll survive look at those tits
i'll survive if
you'll survive
i'll survive look at those tits
aw let's just go our separate ways
aw let's just go our separate ways

 

[Mr. Ice]

Ermac is red,
Sub-Zero is blue,
Noob Saibot is black,
but, Chameleon,
what are you?

Sorry, couldn't resist lol

 

[Kzaoo]

Le dank maymays lel