I don't know man. The fact that someone has great intelligence and considers suicide is very dark.
And then you kinda implement yourself in the writing...
My overall point is that if you're going for a moody tone then you're doing a good job
Yeah, I guess we should.Ah I see what you're driving at [MENTION=11963]Kzaoo[/MENTION].
We better stop before this thread becomes too dark to see.
Kzaoo that snippet was so damn smooth! Wasn't corny and flowed beautifully.
Liked the overall message and tone
Yeah of course.
Didn't you have a Kazuya fic planned at some point prime minister?
Oh I am definitely reading that bro.[MENTION=10945]YungQ94[/MENTION] Makoto and Akuma fought in a match that left her in a near death state, but Juri (for spoiler reason) nursed her back to health and is training her for a rematch against Akuma. Eventually, she learns that she may be able to utilize the Satsui no Hado (won't explain for spoiler reasons) and that it may give her an edge in her rematch. It has a lot more action than my Mortal Kombat story did. Oh, and there are some deaths in the story, so you could say it's a bit dark.