My Mortal Kombat 10 Story.

Hey if I'll blackmail him if he doesn't read. Or kill his pet goldfish. ... Either way I really hope he reads it.
 
YungQ94 said:
Hey if I'll blackmail him if he doesn't read. Or kill his pet goldfish. ... Either way I really hope he reads it.
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Lol I too hope so mate, but kind of unlikely though, also we have the MKAK frenzy going on now. Eitherway Ill try re tweeting him and Ninjaboy as well when things calm down. :)
 
Awesome story, I liked it a lot, and the layout was nice. You clearly took a lot of time and effort to put it together, nice job =)
 
Hurry up Ed Boon.

Read. Our. Story.

*droools*

:viking::viking::viking::viking::viking::viking::viking::viking::viking::viking:
 
Sounds like a great story. I could definitely visual the battles as they happened, although MK10 might take a different approach, this definitely sounds like the most predictable way to go about it.
 
subzerosmokerai said:
Sounds like a great story. I could definitely visual the battles as they happened, although MK10 might take a different approach, this definitely sounds like the most predictable way to go about it.
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Some things were predictable some were not. Thanks for the feedback!
Oh and I am glad you kould visualize the battle. I did as I kreated too. :D
 
Oh man if they were going to steal your work, *cracks knuckles* let's just say some of them would not make it to their next family reunion,
 
YungQ94 said:
Oh man if they were going to steal your work, *cracks knuckles* let's just say some of them would not make it to their next family reunion,
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Lol yea, in the unlikely event of it happening, I really won't mind though, as long as we get an epic storymode similar to this tale or better for MK10. :cool:
 
Alright Flying Jinko.

My Pros:
1.)Super nice grammar. Felt professionally written
2.)I didnt' sense any staleness in the use of words
3.)had a epic tale feel to it. Nobody felt like the main character.
4.)MK realism approach. I could see MK going in a direction such as this.
5.) delightful read, I was eager at 85% of the time what would happen next.

My Cons:
1.) To be honest man It's sort of set up like a wikipedia page would do if they were summarizing MK10, to let me know the MK10 story so I can look back and make sense (If we were in the future.)
2.) (not sure If I consider this a con as I think it flowed better w/o it because of your style) But not much dialogue
3.) I couldn't feel or relate to the characters in any way, because it had a storyboard feel to it.

Those are my only gripes.

It was a really good read and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Those cons I listed are more of a preference for what I like in a story, that your story felt like it was lacking. But you did the rest of it so well done. It made up for it IMO.

Perhaps one day we could co-author a story :D
I think with our powers combined in the right way, A broken story of epic proportions could take place.
I think we cover eachothers weaknesses if we were a team. The things I got problems with you don't, and I think I can handle using words people can relate to make the audience FEEL for the characters.
 
One of the biggest reasons I liked this story was the little to no dialogue.


I still love this shit after all this time :love:
 
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