My Mortal Kombat 10 Story.

back said:
Sorry you had to see it.

The thing threw me off guard when I first fought him.
It wiggles when you hit him.
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LMAO, I can only imagine how much of a distraction it can be.


P.S-Please ignore this convo MkDaz and try to not to incorporate about what was discussed above in your version of Lucifer.(lol jks man =D)
 
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back said:
Thats the Lucifer from Dante's Inferno.

Don't know if any of you have played that game, but holy shit.
He has ****ing HORSE dick.
Play the game if you don't believe me.
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Lol
I have seen the video now I I know what you mean, but oh well I will still use this as part of MK Lucifer's face :)
 
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Before I just skimmed through your story, and liked it.
But I just sat down and read it.

Holy
****ing
Shit


This doesn't even belong in a video game.
This is a block-buster movie plot you've just came up with!

The HUGE build-up, multiple massive battles, strong setting and perfect visualization.
I was seeing everything in my head, your ultra descriptive words left nothing to the imagination.
It was like you were projecting the images to my mind.


Very few people on this site have the balls to do fan fiction.
But goddamnit, I'm confident when I say you're the best of us.

Only thing I would change is instead of Johnny, have Shujinko release all of the warriors' power (His included) to destroy the monolith, sacrificing himself in the process.
Kind of a zero to hero type thing.

But you may have just ruined MK10 for me.
Because if the story is exactly like this, I may be disappointed ;)


But I aint tryin to ride yo dick or nothin'
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back said:
Before I just skimmed through your story, and liked it.
But I just sat down and read it.

Holy
****ing
Shit


This doesn't even belong in a video game.
This is a block-buster movie plot you've just came up with!

The HUGE build-up, multiple massive battles, strong setting and perfect visualization.
I was seeing everything in my head, your ultra descriptive words left nothing to the imagination.
It was like you were projecting the images to my mind.


Very few people on this site have the balls to do fan fiction.
But goddamnit, I'm confident when I say you're the best of us.

Only thing I would change is instead of Johnny, have Shujinko release all of the warriors' power (His included) to destroy the monolith, sacrificing himself in the process.
Kind of a zero to hero type thing.

But you may have just ruined MK10 for me.
Because if the story is exactly like this, I may be disappointed ;)


But I aint tryin to ride yo dick or nothin'
boondocks2_riley.jpg
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Thx a lot Bro! I always wanted to make a near perfect Mk Story which a majority of fans would like ever since Mk9 got released. Although I liked the story certain parts such as Kung Lao's abrupt death, Sindel killing off everyone etc were a let down to me. Also the enthusiam you and some members showed on the story led me to take all of ur ideas along with my own and make up a prospective story on a lazy Sunday afternoon.

As far as this story is concerned I feel fulfilled now as you liked it cause in my opinion, you are the best critic for story ideas over here. Also members such as Mel, MkDaz, Armon24 have made be feel my efforts did not go into waste. Thanks a lot again Bro and thanks to everyone for your feedback and ideas once again.
 
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Been a few days and I have made some progress on Lucifer but cannot post up the preview yet since my scanner is playing up and wont work for me. If I take it with my camera it will make it look wierd so I will probably have to wait until next week for a preview but I will keep posting updates on it :)
 
MKDaz said:
Been a few days and I have made some progress on Lucifer but cannot post up the preview yet since my scanner is playing up and wont work for me. If I take it with my camera it will make it look wierd so I will probably have to wait until next week for a preview but I will keep posting updates on it :)
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Hey MkDaz!! Glad to hear about ur progress! So were u able to get his face correct? And dont worry about it, u can put up the preview when all is ok=D.
 
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Flying Jinko said:
Hey MkDaz!! Glad to hear about ur progress! So were u able to get his face correct? And dont worry about it, u can put up the preview when all is ok=D.
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Hey! Yeah, I was able to get it correct, just need a small adjustment to it :p and Ok about the preview it wont be long until I will be able to post it up.
Oh and have you or someone got a piece of artwork of Quan Chi and Shinnok. I need to see Shinnok's and Quan Chi's full body to find out how to draw it...
 
MKDaz said:
Hey! Yeah, I was able to get it correct, just need a small adjustment to it :p and Ok about the preview it wont be long until I will be able to post it up.
Oh and have you or someone got a piece of artwork of Quan Chi and Shinnok. I need to see Shinnok's and Quan Chi's full body to find out how to draw it...
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Thts awesome mate! I have seen a few good concepts for Shinnok and Quan Chi, Ill link it up here for you when I find them soon. Also anyone else who finds good concepts do post it up as well. Keep up the good work mate =D.
 
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I found some pictures for you, MkDaz. Hope it will help.

Shinnok from Mk Armageddon in the primary costume.
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A full body pic of Shinnok from Mk armageddon. Also since he is mercilessly tortured you could show him in tattered clothes.
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Shinnok in his Mk4 costume taken from Mk comic.
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This is a really cool concept I found for Quan Chi. Since he was originally a demon in the Netherealm, he looked more savage and beastly before he started using sorcery. Once he started using this magic, he gradually started tranforming into a more human like appearance. Perhaps this would have been a perfect look when he helped shinnok to defeat Lucifer thousands of years ago.
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Flying Jinko said:
I found some pictures for you, MkDaz. Hope it will help.

Shinnok from Mk Armageddon in the primary costume.
shinnok.jpg


A full body pic of Shinnok from Mk armageddon. Also since he is mercilessly tortured you could show him in tattered clothes.
shinnokfullybody2.jpg


Shinnok in his Mk4 costume taken from Mk comic.
shinnokfullybody.jpg


This is a really cool concept I found for Quan Chi. Since he was originally a demon in the Netherealm, he looked more savage and beastly before he started using sorcery. Once he started using this magic, he gradually started tranforming into a more human like appearance. Perhaps this would have been a perfect look when he helped shinnok to defeat Lucifer thousands of years ago.
Quanchi.jpg
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Thanks for the help :)
Shinnok: I will show him in ripped or tattered clothing and I wont use the MK4 Costume, too old :p I'll use the MKA one :)
Quan Chi: That concept is so awesome!!! Probably use that becauseit is so cool :p
 
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Very beautiful. I almost cried. Absolutely wonderful. All the chapters were amazing and it was well thought. I hope MK11 will be awesome as well with the return of Onaga.
 
Vigilante_FireDragon said:
Very beautiful. I almost cried. Absolutely wonderful. All the chapters were amazing and it was well thought. I hope MK11 will be awesome as well with the return of Onaga.
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Thanks alot VFD! Im really glad that an amazing writer like yourself found my story good=D. Some of the credit goes to you as well for I have used your ideas which you dropped around the forums.

Thanks a lot again mate! =D
 
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As much as i dislike you for killing of Shinnock... JK... But seriously my favorite character.. dead... :(
I love the story good job. :)
 
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Kintar027 said:
As much as i dislike you for killing of Shinnock... JK... But seriously my favorite character.. dead... :(
I love the story good job. :)
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Thank you for your feedback!! Sorry your Favorite character had to die :(. But hey, every story needs a bad guy, rite?

Anyways An Edited versions of this story with more vivid descriptions and extended fight sequences, done by Armon24 will be up soon. Do watch out for it. =D
 
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Hey Guys! Armon24 was kind enough to edit and improve my story by adding more details and extended fight scenes. He has done an amazing job! Do read and give him your feedback guys! :)

MORTAL KOMBAT 10​

Rereleased, Edited and Improved by Armon24

INTRODUCTION



Shinnok's Fall From Grace.

Thousands of years ago, when all the realms were created, an Elder God, Shinnok desired to rule Earthrealm, which in turn would grant him immense power. However in order to do so without the other elder gods being aware, he created a powerful golden amulet which weakened the dimensional barriers and entered Earthrealm. During the war against his fellow Gods, he came directly in contact with Raiden and after hundreds of years; Raiden with the help of the Elder gods managed to defeat Shinnok and banish him to the Netherealm, stripping him of his amulet and Elder God status and confining him to eternal damnation.

A Trustworthy Ally.

In the Netherealm, Shinnok faced constant torture from Lucifer, the ruler of the Netherealm until he met the Sorcerer Quan Chi; who could travel the realms at will. With Quan Chi's, Shinnok overthrew Lucifer and took control of his throne and became the ruler of the Netherealm. He rewarded Quan Chi for his efforts with immense power, making him Arch Sorcerer of the Netherealm.

The Netherealm Revamped.

Together Shinnok and Quan Chi began building an army of Darkness with the inhabitants of the realm and also created a fanatical cult of demons known as the 'Brotherhood of the Shadow' dedicated to worshipping Shinnok.

Retrieval Of Shinnok's Amulet.

Years passed and Shinnok had amassed a large enough army to assault Earthrealm once again but without his Amulet he could not exit the Netherealm. However Quan chi was aware of Shao Kahn's need for a Sorcerer who could resurrect Sindel, his fallen Queen (formerly the Queen of Edenia before Kahn invaded it and claimed her as his wife after killing King Jarod) at Earthrealm so that he could cross over and invade it. Quan Chi with the help Shinnok promised to master the sorcery required for her resurrection in return for the information on Shinnok's amulet, the whereabouts of which were known to Shang Tsung.

The Amulet had been hidden in a Temple guarded by the four elemental Gods. Quan Chi enlisted the help of the Lin Kuei warrior Sub Zero and retrieved the Amulet. The quest was long and endearing, at this time Quan Chi started mastering the spell required to open a portal for Shinnok to exit with the help of the amulet.

A few years later, Quan Chi, having finally mastered the spell to resurrected Sindel, bought her back to life in Earthrealm and brainwashed her into serving Shao Kahn. With the resurrection of Sindel, Shao Kahn started invading Earthrealm. Shao Kahn had also formed a pact with Shinnok, for his allegiance in exchange for souls of all those who die in the battle.

Shinnok's 'Allegiance'.

Although Shinnok swore his allegiance to Shao Kahn, he merely saw it an opportunity to expand his army with the souls of powerful warriors such as Kung Lao, Kuai Lang, Jax, Nightwolf, Sindel, Smoke, Kitana, Jade, Stryker and Kabal and the souls of millions of other people that died in Earthrealm during Kahn's invasion. He was also aware of Shao Kahn's ignorance of the Elder God's prohibition against merger of the realms which had ultimately leaded to his defeat and death.

With the death of Shao Kahn and with Quan Chi in the final stages of opening the portal for his exit, Shinnok prepared himself and his armies for his all realm domination.

EVENTS AT EARTHREALM



Rebuilding of Earthrealm.

Meanwhile back at Earthrealm, Raiden, Johnny Cage and Sonya, the sole survivors of the last battle tended to all the wounded.

Raiden instructed Sonya to report back to her superiors and explain to them the events that happened and track down Kano and exterminate the Black Dragon Clan, whose members were still wrecking havoc in the realm by attacking the law enforcements and supplementing the efforts of the remenants of the outworld invaders.

The Blind Swordsman.

While on the search for Kano, Sonya came across the blind rogue swordsman, Kenshi, who was also a participant in the previous Mortal Kombat tournaments and was on a mission to find the one who had blinded him and enslaved his ancestors souls. (Ever since he was blinded, the power of his ancestral sword and the power of the warrior in him helped him master the control of his other senses. During his training he discovered that he had an inbuilt ability of telekinesis. He nurtured and improved upon this ability and after a decade of training, he joined the Mortal Kombat Tournament in hopes of finding the betrayer and defiler of his ancestry). Sonya informed him that the one he was searching for was probably the Sorcerer, Shang Tsung, who has already been killed. Kenshi debated however, that his sword has still not sensed the freedom of his ancestors souls. Sonya agreed to help Kenshi solve his dilemma in return for his help in pushing back the Black Dragon clan. Kenshi readily agrees and helps the Special Forces exterminate the remnants of the Black Dragon and Tarkatan hordes that remained in Earthrealm.

Johnny Goes Beserk.

Ever since the death of Shao Kahn, Johnny Cage felt that he had lost control of body and his powers. Powerful bursts of energies started erupting from his body frequently destroying everything around him. Raiden did everything in his power to help stop the random spasms of energy bursts but to no avail. Desperate, Raiden transported Johnny to Seido, the Realm of Order and enlisted the help of Master Bo Rai Cho, to teach Johnny to control his power and to transform him into a powerful warrior. With the help of Bo Rai Cho, Johnny began his intense training and gradually started having control over his powers and his transformation began. His training was intense, he worked on his patience, control and his power.

The Forgotten Monk.

Meanwhile Raiden, went out on a mission to find capable and powerful warriors to reinforce the highly crippled Earthrealm defenses.

He first went searching for Kai, a Shaolin monk and former member of the White Lotus Society. This was a society which Raiden along with the Order of Light (an order of monks) created many years ago after the defeat and death of the Great Kung Lao by Goro, to select a group of champions from among the best fighters in the world, who would dedicate their lives to learning and understanding how to defend the independence of Earthrealm from the threat of other worlds. Kai had left the society to pursue his own goals of honing his skills and self enlightenment. He had journeyed to through Asia for many years and learnt many skills from numerous great masters.

Raiden found Kai meditating deep within the Himalayan Mountains. Raiden informed and explained to Kai all the events that had taken place. Kai was grief stricken on hearing that his Shaolin brothers and friends Liu Kang and Kung Lao were no more. Kai with his heightened sense of greater good and belief in the Elder Gods realized that Raiden had to do what he did to stop Liu Kang. Kai agreed to travel back with Raiden and train with him to help fight off and foreign future invasions.
 
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The Adventurer-Warrior.

Next, Raiden along with Kai went searching for Shujinko, another former member of the white lotus society. As a young boy, Shujinko was a big fan of the Great Kung Lao and had always wished to join the Mortal Kombat tournament and fight Shang Tsung. He used to attend the martial arts classes that Master Bo Rai Cho conducted to help his village defend itself from outside threats. Master Bo Rai Cho saw a lot of potential in the young Shujinko and trained him personally to better his skills. With the help of Master Bo Rai Cho's training Shujinko gains enough confidence and approached the Master Shen,(a recruiting member for the White Lotus society at his village) wanting to join the society, eager to prove himself a worthy defender of his home. Shujinko was ordered by Master Shen to rid his village of a band of mystical warriors who had invaded earthrealm from another realm. His success would increase the likeliness of being nominated to represent the White Lotus in the Mortal Kombat tournament and thereby fulfilling his childhood desire. Though Shujinko succeeded in driving off the foreign invaders, Master Shen realized Shujinko's soul was tainted with an unexplainable evil which prevented him from representing the goodness and purity of the White Lotus.

During his early training with Bo Rai Cho, Shujinko was visited by a being known as Damashi, claiming to be an agent for the Elder Gods. Damashi entrusted Shujinko with the mission of finding sacred relics known as the 'Kamidogu', one of each found in every realm. To aid him with the quest, Damashi mystically instilled in Shujinko, the enhanced ability to observe and then wield the combat abilities and powers of warriors he came across. Shujinko then left his village and trained with Master Bo Rai Cho for many years till he reached adulthood and learnt every skill his master had to teach. Done with his training Shujinko continued on his quest for finding the Kamidogu of Earthrealm. He joined the Lin Kuei and helped them defeat their rival clan, The Shirai Ryu. The Lin Kuei was conducting an ambush on the Shirai Ryu, who were on a mission to find a rogue member who left the clan. It was a small group of the Shirai Ryu, made up of ten warriors and assassins. The Shirai Ryu had not known that the clan member that left the clan was taken hostage by the Lin Kuei. The Lin Kuei stripped the member of his clothes and donned it upon one of the fastest runners of The Lin Kuei, Hayai. They also took his map and found out where the Shirai Ryu was meeting that night. Hayai was instructed to run across the designated area where the 10 Shirai Ryu were meeting and have them chase him. The Shirai Ryu fell for the trap and Hayai led them right into the clutches of the Lin Kuei. Hayai was fast enough to dodge arrows and other weapons so this was no problem. When the Shirai Ryu were ambushed, there was no chance. The Lin Kuei killed them all without losing one of their ranks. This win for the Lin Kuei could be thanked by Shujinko, who thought of the plan himself.

Later he was asked to retrieve an artifact from a Red Dragon hideout which was in fact the Kamidogu of Earthrealm. He travelled to their compound, located in the mountains. Shujinko went through very stealthy, a technique he learned from the Lin Kuei. Once retrieved, he exited Earthrealm and placed the Kamidogu on its pedestal at the Nexus and continued on his quest to find the Kamidogu of Netherealm.

The deeds of Shujinko during his time with the Lin Kuei, tainted his soul enough for him traverse the plains of the Netherealm without a problem. During his travels in the Netherealm he came across a demon slayer by the name, Ashrah, who was being pursued by members of the Brotherhood of Shadow. Ashrah was a former member of the Brotherhood, who was being pursued by them for disobeying the orders of Quan Chi and slaying many of its members with her heavenly sword, 'The Kriss'. Shujinko helped fend off the demons and in return Ashrah taught him the art of demon slaying. It wasnt only skill that it took to kill demons. It was the will. Through watching Ashrah in the battle and learning from her, he developed the skills to become a Demon slayer. However Quan Chi sensed Shujinko's presence in the Netherealm and he too was pursued by the Brotherhood. Ashrah and Shujinko together fought off many of the Brotherhood, but there were too many. Ashrah Spin Cycled through dozens of the Brotherhood. While Shujinko bested one brother at a time with his martial arts. But, still there were too many. So Shujinko started freezing them, to no avail. Ashrah quickly instructed,Shujinko, you must leave. Now! Shujinko obeyed and ran into the portal that separated the Netherealm and The Nexus.

It was here where Raiden along with Kai found Shujinko and helped him fight off the few demons who dared followed him to the Nexus. Raiden fried five of them at once with his electricity. While Kai shot white fire above one brother and under another. After the fight, Raiden then asked Shujinko's assistance to help him preserve and protect Earthrealm and secure it. Shujinko, realizing that the safety of his home is of more importance at the moment, abandons his quest for the time being and travels back to Earthrealm with Raiden. There Raiden begins personally training Shujinko and Kai preparing themselves for any unforeseen events that may occur.

EVENTS AT OUTWORLD



The Return Of The King.

With Shao Kahn dead, Ermac the amalgam of souls created by Shang Tsung was no longer bound to the dead emperor. Anarchy erupted within Ermac, as the many warriors, whose souls comprised his being struggled for dominance. However only one soul had the strength and will to quiet the chaos erupting within Ermac. It was the soul of the former Emperor of Edenia, King Jarod. The shadow priests of Shao Kahn saw the transformation in Ermac and began to subdue him. However, he was freed from their grip by blind swordsman, Kenshi, who had intervened in the nick of time. Kenshi had travelled to Outworld in search for Kano under the instructions of Sonya. Ermac repaid Kenshi by helping him hone his telekinetic abilities and training him to use his abilities in kombat ,to feel the flow of energy between him and the objects they are moving and to embrace it.

With Ermac's inner conflict solved with the dominance of the soul of King Jarrod, he travelled to Edenia to reunite with his past. He was grief stricken to see that his realm was under a strict military regime and his people enslaved, ever since his death by the hands of Shao Kahn. Ermac then travelled to Earthrealm seeking Raiden to help free his realm and people. Raiden saw the transformation in Ermac and interacted with the soul of his once close ally and friend. He agreed to do all he can to help free his realm and suggested Ermac to travel to Outworld to negotiate peace talks with those who were in charge.

Ermac then travelled back to Outworld, seeking the freedom of his realm.

The New Emperess.

Back at Outworld, Mileena, Shao Kahn's 'true' daughter too was undergoing a transformation. The dark magic of Shao Kahn and Shang Tsung no longer held her mind in shackles. The insanity and rage which used to direct her actions were slowly beginning to fade. She began feeling the emotions of guilt, love, hatred like a normal being. Mileena then decided to undo all the unspeakable acts of the former emperor and claimed the throne of Outworld as new queen under the guidance of Goro, Kintaro and Sheeva. She together with the Shokan, began rebuilding the realm putting away the harsh rules of the dead emperor.

She was then approached by Ermac.

Ermac seeing the transformation in Mileena saw more hope in efforts to free Edenia and commended peace talks with her.
 
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