Alright man. Remember, this is all constructive criticism.
First off, this doesn't feel like Jill, at all. During all the segments with Jill, I kept thinking of Ada. Snooping around in the president's office and stealing cars? That sounds all like stuff Ada would do.
You brought Jill into the story way too fast. It really devalued her "death."
Story transitions are okay though, since you labeled them accordingly.
It was a decent read. I can't honestly say I enjoyed it. Just criticism man, don't take it to the heart <3