Whats this? Whats this?! ~ TRMK Drawings thread

BBBLP

Robot Rock
Hey Flawless, what do you think of the forehead?

Is it too large? I'm trying to make it look like his head is slightly tilted downward.
 

FlawlessVictor

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Hey Flawless, what do you think of the forehead?

Is it too large? I'm trying to make it look like his head is slightly tilted downward.

Hmmm....I thought the head was in neutral position, turned slightly to the side. The forehead would be okay in that instance.

If the head is tilted, you need to change the position of the entire head. That also means you need to realign all of the features.

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Notice when the head is titled the downward, the lines for the eyes, nose, etc. start to shift downward as well. The top of the head becomes more prominent while the chin starts to "vanish".
 
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BBBLP

Robot Rock
Well, considering how long it took me to get this far, the head is now in neutral position :)


I'm going to work on this more tonight.
 

Shirayuki Mizore

New member
Congrats BBBLP! It looks good!

The only thing I could say is to put a little more detail into the jacket. Like, the collar looks great! But everything else looks a little plain. So I'd say add a little more wrinkles in there and you're good to go so it looks the jacket is falling on him more naturally.
 

FlawlessVictor

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Wrinkles occur very often near the joints. The wrinkles that are on the upper part of the sleeve don't make sense to me though. Don't add wrinkles for the sake of "more detail". There has to be a reason why the cloth is being compressed.
 
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Robot Rock
Ugh, it hurts, because I know its true.


I was having trouble with that part.





But what about the rest of it?
BB do good?
 

FlawlessVictor

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Something is amiss with the pointer finger. It seems to be too pointy. Granted, he is wearing gloves, so it may not actually perfectly mold with actually the shape of actual fingers.

Creases around the mouth should start near the nares, like this:
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I think they should be further apart, considering the bridge of the clown's nose is pretty broad.

I would say it's a big improvement. You are getting a hang of proportions and placement of facial features.
 

BBBLP

Robot Rock
Is that you?


I see what you mean. Looking at that picture, I should have made the mouth creases a bit higher. Made the nostrils too high it seems. All in all it seems as if I made the face a bit too long.
 

FlawlessVictor

New member
Is that you?

No, it's just something I pulled from a website that hosts public domain images.

I see what you mean. Looking at that picture, I should have made the mouth creases a bit higher. Made the nostrils too high it seems. All in all it seems as if I made the face a bit too long.

Some people do have long faces, so I don't know if that's a big issue. I'd say move the nostrils down, halfway between the eyes and the mouth.
 

FlawlessVictor

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I normally avoid double posting, but the time gap is quite long....

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Drawing itself is months old, but I recently filled it in and went over the lines in markers. Also, I failed at drawing a Luger.
 
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