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Shirayuki Mizore said:
OH REALLY? :mad:

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It had been 6 months since Chris Redfield left on his new operation, issued to him by the BSAA. His vendetta against bio-terrorism kept him away from home, fighting bio-weapons overseas at any opportunity he could find. He was renowned for his experience in the field ever since the Arklay Mansion Incident so the BSAA was quick to call for his assistance when an issue arose, keeping him away from his home and his wife, who was always waiting for him. But his most recent operation had ended two days ago and he was arriving home in a taxi he had called at the airport. Luckily, the captain had not lost any of his men this time and the mission was a success so his mood was no less than satisfied, as he rode home in the backseat with a smile on his face, looking out the window and thinking of his wife.

The taxi finally arrived at his residence before he paid the cab driver, getting out of the taxi and closing the door carefully, showing his appreciation. He then walked over to the trunk, popping it open and grabbing his bags from the trip. He closed the trunk, waving the driver goodbye as he went up to the front door, grabbing his keys. Chris unlocked the door, pushing it open slowly, trying not to alert his wife inside. He creeped around the corner, placing his bags down quietly, not spotting her anywhere on the first floor. Even though his size was muscular and bulky, he managed to stealthily climb the stairs, hearing noise from the bedroom. He smiled wide in anticipation of reuniting with his wife as he put his hand on the bedroom door, pushing it open slowly. After opening it he stepped in quickly, yelling, "I'm home!"

His smile soon faded away to shock as he saw his wife Jade, laying on the bed next to the WWE Superstar, CM Punk with an embarrassed expression on her face.

"...Dammit Jade, not again..."

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LMAO


I just got the message you left me for this, my computer has been an idiot the last few days, and I can't believe I missed such a gem!

OBVIOUSLY THE BEST STORY EVER
 
Finale to "An Emerging Warrior Spirit: Li Mei, The Ghost of Sun Do" is up now!

A remake of the first chapter without dialogue will be put up tomorrow; that will be the final work that I do on that fanfic before going on to my future projects (Fei Yen prequel, Chapter 2 of my Reiko fanfic). The remake will be edited into the OP and I will probably either just keep and save the original version to my PC or post it in this thread. Hope you all enjoyed it!
 
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Re-write of Chapter 1 is up now in the OP!

Here's the original version just in case:

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Chapter 1: Reminiscence[/center]

A surprisingly peaceful and lighthearted late afternoon in Sun Do betrays the thick fog that envelopes the village, as the villagers are all outside happily carrying out their daily routines and holding casual conversations amongst each other. Large mountains surround the small village and the main entrance is located to the northeastern portion of the village. A tall, fair-skinned and well-built middle aged man, in actuality Jinhai, makes his way through the main entrance. As he had just returned from his work as a weaponssmith, Jinhai is covered in sweat and blisters all over his hands.

He wipes some of the sweat from his forehead and walks towards the middle of the town, where a stone statue of Fei Yen resides. As he walks up to it, he looks at his surroundings, smiling to himself at the warmth and friendliness displayed at the villagers. Finally arriving at the statue, Jinhai stops, closes his eyes and bends down on one knee, paying respects to his deceased wife by having a moment of silence for her.

As he stays there in silence, Jinhai starts to have memories of his life with Fei Yen, in particular a vivid memory of him and Fei Yen in the local grass fields observing a younger Li Mei together. Li Mei stares at the familiar pink sky, observing the dragons and other winged creatures flying in the distance. Hoping that she could knock one of them out of the sky, Li Mei picks up a nearby rock and launches it into the air. Her wide-eyed stare quickly turns into a look of disappointment and a sigh as the rock simply drops back down to the ground, the dragons remaining unharmed, causing both Fei and Jinhai to let out a warm and hearty laughter.

Li Mei then turns around to Fei and says, "Mommy... can I ask you something?"

"Of course, Li Mei. What is it?"

Li Mei then looks down for a moment and then looks back up to her mother and asks, "Do... do you think I can ever become strong? As strong as you and daddy someday?"

Fei walks up to her daughter, bends down and places her hand on Li Mei's right shoulder. "I believe that you are already as strong as any other person around here.", says Fei while smiling.

The memory then fades out in favor of another memory, this time much more vague than the previous one. It is dark and raining hard outside as an older Li Mei and Jinhai are both in a remote location, apparently unable to pass through a wall of transparent light of some sort. Li Mei is shown crying and pounding on the wall of light as Fei Yen slowly walks away from the two. Jinhai himself is shown to be visibly shocked and speechless by whatever is happening in his memory.

Just as tears start to form in both of Jinhai's eyes, a nearby woman's voice is heard.

"... Father?", says the woman.

Jinhai, recognizing the voice, turns around immediately. "Yes?", he says.

The woman is revealed to be none other than his now fully grown-up daughter Li Mei and a young boy accompanying her.

"Ah, it's only you, my daughter!", says Jinhai as he starts to recognize her.

He stands up to face her while Li Mei walks up to embrace him.

"Welcome home, father.", says Li Mei while smiling.

"You know, you've grown up so much over the years that it takes me a while for me to recognize you now."

Jinhai then notices the young boy by Li Mei's side. "I see you've acquainted yourself with some of the neighborhood children in my absence."

"Oh, this is Jianyu, I've been teaching him how to do practical work around the village. He's been with me all day so I thought it would be best if I just took him with me this time instead of leaving him out in the fields by himself.", Li Mei said.

"In fact, your grandmother is around here somewhere Jianyu so you should head back to her now, I'm sure she's worried sick about you."

Jianyu simply nods his head and runs off. After seeing him off, Li Mei turns back to her father and says, "Now father, I have something important to tell you."

She goes on to say, "Shang Tsung and his men paid us a visit earlier today. They came to me and asked where you were, I told them you were still working at the foundry and that you wouldn't be back until later on in the day. They then told me they had some "private business" to discuss with you and left. They haven't come back here since then."

Jinhai thinks for a moment, and then says, "If Shang Tsung wanted to talk to me personally... then it's almost certainly going to involve me participating in the next Mortal Kombat tournament."

"Really? That's what you make of it?", she says.

He reasons, "Absolutely. Rumor has it that the emperor is looking for warriors all over the realms to stand up against the new Earthrealm threat. He knows what I've done as a weaponssmith and could use that kind of versatility to his advantage in combat. I'd even wager that he is also considering doing the same with my colleagues."

"I don't want to have any part in Shao Kahn's conquering over another realm... but if I refuse, there's no telling what Shao Kahn might do to me, the others or even you as a response. Shao Kahn may have let us live for this long, but he isn't the type of man who would take a simple no as an answer.", says Jinhai.

"Are you absolutely sure about all this? Or any of this for that matter?", says Li Mei.

"I fail to see how it could be anything else. Whatever the case may be, there's definitely cause for concern.", says Jinhai with a look of assurance on his face. After having the same stern look on his face for a few moments, he finally comes to a conclusion:

"Tomorrow morning I'm going to journey to Shang Tsung's palace. I'm still not certain of whether I should participate in the tournament yet or not, so hopefully discussing things with him tomorrow can provide me with some answers. I'm able to do it now but I'd rather be well-rested so that I can think this through and not make a rash decision."

"With all of that said, Li Mei, I trust that you'll look over the village and take care of things in my absence?"

"Oh yes, of course, father."

"I expected no less from my daughter.", says Jinhai. "Now come, let us go home."

The two walk back to their village home, Jinhai eager to rid himself of the blisters on his hands and drink only the finest rice wine ever produced in Outworld.[/QUOTE]
 
I could write that Kazuya fic, but tbh, i'm lacking motivation. I have like the first paragraph done but I really can't be arsed at the moment.
 
About the Fei Yen prequel that I'm working on this week, I was going to have her battle Lucifer as the main conflict, but I'll pass on that because it kind of conflicts with what I'm planning to do

I'll still mention it in her bio/prologue though that comes along with the story
 
Metal Overlord said:
About the Fei Yen prequel that I'm working on this week, I was going to have her battle Lucifer as the main conflict, but I'll pass on that because it kind of conflicts with what I'm planning to do

I'll still mention it in her bio/prologue though that comes along with the story
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You said Lucifer, ILLUMINATI!!

The world Battle has 6 letters, ILUMINATI!!

If I quote your post, the first number in your post (Before the actual quote) is 6, ILLUMINATI!!

That's 3 key points I pointed out, and what's the 3 multiplied by 2? 6!

It's evident that Metal Overies is the seed of the Devil himself

In other news...

It's going to be a while before I update anything, I have another Speech to write and my of my time is going towards that this week, Again.. But after the 30th (Of this month) I'll be good to write some other stuff, but more than likely it's going to be something new or updating the Last Sample.. Inner conflict isn't my main priority as of now, I really want to finish the Last sample first.
 
Nope, it's not my fault you're the seed of the Devil..

ANYWAYS!!

I'll try to squeeze in some time for writing, but I'm not sure what Fic to work on though.
 
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