uKER
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Well, if you actually have a version that has that melody I'm not gonna argue.
My suggestion is still, give that instrument more presence and a meaner, less bright tone.
Lower an octave and raise volume maybe?
Try a slapped bass maybe? Something that while still defined, sound more like actual bass.
I think I pay more attention to it than the actual main tune and I'm not feeling it has the same presence as in the original.
Other than that, yeah, I think the song is great.
That empty feeling from the last version is sure gone.
EDIT: I also miss that electric stringy thing that sounds every 8 beats and then goes on to echo on every beat. See 0:14 and 0:18 here.
Maybe throw in some of those elec guitars that you've been adding to your songs?
My suggestion is still, give that instrument more presence and a meaner, less bright tone.
Lower an octave and raise volume maybe?
Try a slapped bass maybe? Something that while still defined, sound more like actual bass.
I think I pay more attention to it than the actual main tune and I'm not feeling it has the same presence as in the original.
Other than that, yeah, I think the song is great.
That empty feeling from the last version is sure gone.
EDIT: I also miss that electric stringy thing that sounds every 8 beats and then goes on to echo on every beat. See 0:14 and 0:18 here.
Maybe throw in some of those elec guitars that you've been adding to your songs?
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