The beginning - a SF fanfic by Kzaoo

[iViTal]

k fewl i crae boot you Sexy* ass Jiill Valentine*

D:

You can't mess up her beautiful name

 

[YungQ94]

Man that shit was emotional :|

Nice pun Vital. Kzaoo forget the mother, nobody gives two shits about her non talkative ass. I'm really liking your updates so keep em coming por favor

 

[Kzaoo]

Man that shit was emotional :|

Nice pun Vital. Kzaoo forget the mother, nobody gives two shits about her non talkative ass. I'm really liking your updates so keep em coming por favor

Thank you. I think the mother needs something, maybe a reason why she doesn't talk much. Kzaoo has an idea.

 

[YungQ94]

Got her throat slashed by a broken bottle messing up her windpipes. Boom story development

 

[Kzaoo]

Got her throat slashed by a broken bottle messing up her windpipes. Boom story development

:rofl:

I was thinking of a more psychological reason.

I got something in mind.

 

[YungQ94]

Saw a dick in a sink, boom plot advancement

 

[Kzaoo]

Saw a dick in a sink, boom plot advancement

What the f***? :rofl:

That sounds like my favourite hentai 8)

 

[iViTal]

Saw a dick in a sink, boom plot advancement

:???:

DaFuq? o-o

 

[YungQ94]

What the f***? :rofl:

That sounds like my favourite hentai 8)

Bible Black? i knew it

 

[iViTal]

Bible Black? i knew it

..................

 

[Kzaoo]

Not entirely sure where to go with this now.

 

[iViTal]

Turn that shit into a Dirty Erotica, Juri x Bison.

 

[Kzaoo]

Turn that shit into a Dirty Erotica, Juri x Bison.

Nahhhh

Juri x Tentacles

 

[iViTal]

Nahhhh

Juri x Nemesis' Tentacles

Fixed that for you, now he can leave Jill alone. She's mine

 

[YungQ94]

Well, you can write about the aftermath of the rape and write how she got organized with Seth. Don't forget she lost her eye along the way

 

[iViTal]

^ That, and you could write a short side story about her mothers demise or show the relationship between the two with a flashback.

Just throwing out ideas.

 

[Kzaoo]

Well, you can write about the aftermath of the rape and write how she got organized with Seth. Don't forget she lost her eye along the way

The eye twas what I was going to cover next

@Vital

Maybe.

 

[Shirayuki Mizore]

DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:

Juri :whine:

 

[Kzaoo]

DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:

Juri :whine:

As I said, I didn't want this to be happy, or like a shounen when they always beat the bad guys somehow. Any tips or thoughts?

 

[YungQ94]

While she's recovering implement a very twisted psychological memory involving such things as her alcoholic dad and non talkative mother in a very disturbing atmosphere. Turn her memories into surreal experiences is what I'm saying