Yours has some circular shake motion when he goes into the pose which looks as if he had hit the camera or something, and I don't see it in the original, but oh well.
Also, in the original, looking at the background wall, I see like the camera guy took two steps forward and to his right, while keeping focus on Raiden, and then took a long one backwards and slightly to his right.
Guess it's not that important anyway.
Another thing I thought I'd point out is that the camera you're using has a much wider angle than the original, which causes the left hand to be about twice the size of the right one in the final frame, while in the original it's just barely larger.
I'm aware though that fixing this would not only require fixing the lens angle, but also scaling the path along which the camera moves to compensate, which I guess you won't bother with either, but I just had to point it out.
What you could do however is increase the saturation of the blue cloth in the background.
Overall, your scene seems slightly more saturated than the original, yet that cloth appears almost grey in yours, while its shadows are clearly blue in the original.