Poetry Thread

Aldo Moreno

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Everytime I get a text, I really hope its from you.
I look at it and realize my hope doesn't kome true.
I really miss talking to you everyday.
I remeber ever time I would see you we would always play.
Espically when you use to always walk away saying ,"oh okay!"
Damnit man I wish you never sent you away.
I still have all the pictures of us somewhere deep in my computer files.
It makes me wanna kry when I see those pictures and I see your smiles.
I would do anything to get you back, shit even run a billion miles.
I promised you forever and thats something I will never break.
I just want you to please forgive me for my mistake.
It will make me feel better for my sake.
I still got you green hair thingy on my jacket.
I had to get it from you but it took so much racket!
If you ever take me back, I will not **** up or do anything bad.
I don't want you to be another had.
And make you so sad
I still remeber you kalling you grapes.
It sticks to my head like duct tape.
I just want you to answer my text.
I am not like these other boys just loking for sex.
I don't like being another one your ex.
Then you going out with another dude like he is your next.
You always use to make my happy.
Without you right now I feel so freaking krappy.
Remember when I as sat on your lap?
And your arms will be around me so wrapped.
Or when we go to dances and I dance with you all night?
Or before we went out and you were sad over a boy and I use to tell you its gonna be alright?
I remeber our 1st kiss.
I want one right now kause I feel like its something I miss.
I always make fun of your head.
It use to be mine, something I kept!
I made you do the right thing and not do something shit over something someone said.
We kall her The Great Whore and when people knew I didn't let you fight they would tell me ,"***** that ain't your wed."
I miss having you in my arms.
I worry about you everyday and hope you aren't in any harm.
You are something more than a lucky charm.
I hope one day you will khange your mind.
We kan kheck up on things so we won't be behind.
I use to be always happy with you everywhere I went.
I have to talk to you, a message to you has been sent.
Looks like I got something new.
I look at it and realized me hope doesnt kome true.
Everytime I get a text, I really hope its from you.

EDIT:
D: This is a short as poem"/.
 
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Re: Poem I wrote.-Aldo Moreno

Oh, Aldo, this is so sweet. I especially like how the ending ties into the beginning. Really nice, heartfelt stuff. :)
 
Re: Poem I wrote.-Aldo Moreno

Too long, didn't read :/

Jk, great job Moreno.
Aldo, get a ****ing life. . .
 
Re: Poem I wrote.-Aldo Moreno

Aldo my boy, you never cease to amaze me. Excellent work. What I gather from reading it is that you're a lot like me. Respect for woman bro, that's the way to go.
 
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I love it man, really, mind if i use it? All credit to you of course

Yeah go one ahead man. I really wanna be a author. If you want I kan write poems for you and give them to you. Just give me a PM and tell me the subject you want and tell me how you feel about it and I will do it for you.

Oh, Aldo, this is so sweet. I especially like how the ending ties into the beginning. Really nice, heartfelt stuff. :)

Thanks Alisa. I been told many times I am good at that.

i like it :) its very sweet, warmed my heart just reading it <3

Thank you Goddess. I hope to improve more:).

wow. thats whats bruh.

Lol I don't understand what you said.

Didn't know you could write poems, man! Really nice!

I been writing since the 7th grade. This is my 1st public one. Haven't wrote in a while tho.

Too long, didn't read :/

Jk, great job Moreno.
Aldo, get a ****ing life. . .

Lol shall sayth sorry for ye said.

Aldo my boy, you never cease to amaze me. Excellent work. What I gather from reading it is that you're a lot like me. Respect for woman bro, that's the way to go.

Thank you Outworld IMP. I will be writing more since I got a lot of good comlipments from people I kare for.

Nice work, Aldo!
Thanks:DD/.

Not a bad attempt at a poem, Aldo, but I think this part wasn't necessary. It's offensive to some people.

Actually, this poem is for my ex girlfriend I miss a lot and want back. I said it kause it is a memory, not really for the hell of it. Thats why it has emotion in it. I did it on facebook and I wanted to show you guys as well to show the world instead of my town.

I hope you understand Jade.

haha nice poem man... didnt know you were so creative!

Thanks man! Haven't seen you on here in a while.
 
Re: Poem I wrote.-Aldo Moreno

Actually, this poem is for my ex girlfriend I miss a lot and want back. I said it kause it is a memory, not really for the hell of it. Thats why it has emotion in it. I did it on facebook and I wanted to show you guys as well to show the world instead of my town.

I hope you understand Jade.

Well, Aldo, it doesn't matter who the poem is for, it's the content you used. You could have said 'when I act stupid' instead of 'when I act gay'. You are using 'gay' in negative context.
 
Re: Poem I wrote.-Aldo Moreno

Well, Aldo, it doesn't matter who the poem is for, it's the content you used. You could have said 'when I act stupid' instead of 'when I act gay'. You are using 'gay' in negative context.

Sorry"/. Next time I write a poem, I will find a word to replace it or just take that part out. Thanks:).

EDIT: I took it out mam.
 
Re: Poem I wrote.-Aldo Moreno

Sorry to hear about you and your GF, Aldo, is that the one in your pictures and dancing videos?
 
Re: Poem I wrote.-Aldo Moreno

Sorry to hear about you and your GF, Aldo, is that the one in your pictures and dancing videos?

Yeah thats her. My stupid-self left her for another girl who I thought was perfect. I had to write the poem to let my feelings out since I am going to try to concerntrate on other things now thats not girls. She will be on my mind still but I gotta find something else to get it out.
 
Re: Poem I wrote.-Aldo Moreno

Yeah thats her. My stupid-self left her for another girl who I thought was perfect. I had to write the poem to let my feelings out since I am going to try to concerntrate on other things now thats not girls. She will be on my mind still but I gotta find something else to get it out.

I'm really glad to see that you are trying your best to make a change. You will be happier in the long run. :) I've had to learn that the hard way, trust me.
 
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