Your editing is alright. I just have a gripe with cameras aimed at screens. you don't have a capture card? Look into DAzzle to improve your video quality if you want to advance your skills in the music video population.
Also because I love this song for it's REAL intended purpose. Although a few lines do match the video (future is fading, is there any hope to survive). The other ones make me lol. Like "Still we ravage the world that we love" As far as I know in the mortal kombat universe earthrealms least worries are polluting/destroying their own planet when it's about to be destroyed NOW by shao khan lol. ect ect.
Just some constructive criticism for you to think about next time.