My Mortal Kombat 11 Story.

GLoRToR said:
Here's a little sketch, been trying to catch the mood of the character.


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Wow it looks epic mate, you really captured the descriptions well =D. I think his lips in the face sketch require a little tweaking , other than that it is awesome!!! Thanks alot mate! Wished rep was still here :(.

EDIT: nvm the lips, they look perfect, after reaading Goddess's post I realised those were his teeth lol. This is what happens when you view pics on ur phone. And LOL that expression is epic.
 
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Thanks for the lubz youse guise! <3 XD
Yeah that's a - "I tried auntie Jade's green cigs and I think I like it" - grin.
 
Hey guys! My apologies for not updating the story for a long time. I have finished writing up the blueprint for this and plan to continue the series till MK 14. Unfortunately I won't be able to resume writing, till late November due to other commitments. Just thought of letting all readers know that I have not abandoned the series and I promise I shall finish the MK 11 story before this year ends. :)
Also before I take my leave of absence, I wish to compile a list of all fan made characters I will be using in the story. I have listed them below, and do let me know if I missed out anyone or if you want your characters to be included, you can post them here along with the links for their bios.

Lucious (Elder God's Enforcer) ~ Wraith

Syphonius ( Edenian Protector) ~ Tenkai Hyabusa

Attilio (Liu Kang and Kitana's son) ~ Outworld's Goddess

Female Bounty hunter (yet to be named) ~ Outworld's Goddess

Mirage ~ ND4

Tarkatana (Female Tarkatan Warrior) ~ Armageddon

Abel (Shirai Ryu member) ~ Liukang234

Sand Ninja (yet to be named) ~ Trilogy

I add update this list when new entries come in. Thank you for all your feedback so far guys, it has helped me a long way in improving myself as a writer. :)
 
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Well, until I get a new ac adapter for my laptop, I can't get a chance to finish up my own story, and I'm almost done with it. Just need to do one more chapter in the rough draft before posting the final two chapters of my BloodSport War series.

After that, I'll brain storm about the alternative timeline's version of Deception, mainly fleshing out on Onaga's return. I feel like in Deadly Alliance, Reptile's sudden transformation was to quick, without a struggle. Plus, I bet Blaze could've encountered both Nitara and Cyrax, then Reptile, all the while, the descendants of the Dragon King's holy men would reappear and do an unusual ceremony, marking the time for Onaga to return to the physical world as soon as Shujinko placed the final kamidogu in the Nexus.
 
Flying Jinko said:
Hey guys! My apologies for not updating the story for a long time. I have finished writing up the blueprint for this and plan to continue the series till MK 14. Unfortunately I won't be able to resume writing, till late November due to other commitments. Just thought of letting all readers know that I have not abandoned the series and I promise I shall finish the MK 11 story before this year ends. :)
Also before I take my leave of absence, I wish to compile a list of all fan made characters I will be using in the story. I have listed them below, and do let me know if I missed out anyone or if you want your characters to be included, you can post them here along with the links for their bios.

Lucious (Elder God's Enforcer) ~ Wraith

Syphonius ( Edenian Protector) ~ Tenkai Hyabusa

Attilio (Liu Kang and Kitana's son) ~ Outworld's Goddess

Female Bounty hunter (yet to be named) ~ Outworld's Goddess

Mirage ~ ND4

Tarkatana (Female Tarkatan Warrior) ~ Armageddon

Abel (Shirai Ryu member) ~ Liukang234

Sand Ninja (yet to be named) ~ Trilogy

I add update this list when new entries come in. Thank you for all your feedback so far guys, it has helped me a long way in improving myself as a writer. :)
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Glad to hear that. It has been a while since an update. And if your Mk10 is Mk4 (Original story line) then is it going down the line in MK Games, or is it skewing off into new ideas of enemies?
 
Vigilante_FireDragon said:
Well, until I get a new ac adapter for my laptop, I can't get a chance to finish up my own story, and I'm almost done with it. Just need to do one more chapter in the rough draft before posting the final two chapters of my BloodSport War series.

After that, I'll brain storm about the alternative timeline's version of Deception, mainly fleshing out on Onaga's return. I feel like in Deadly Alliance, Reptile's sudden transformation was to quick, without a struggle. Plus, I bet Blaze could've encountered both Nitara and Cyrax, then Reptile, all the while, the descendants of the Dragon King's holy men would reappear and do an unusual ceremony, marking the time for Onaga to return to the physical world as soon as Shujinko placed the final kamidogu in the Nexus.
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Thats great to hear VFD! Hope you get your adapter soon :). Can't wait to read more of your story.

Those areas you mentioned really do need some fleshing out and I can't wait to see how you interpret them.I roughly estimated a 10 yr time gap between MK4 and Mk:DA and perhaps Reptile could have undergone his transformation in this time. Also Blaze encountering Nitara, Cyrax and Reptile is quite a good possibility as well.

liukang234 said:
Glad to hear that. It has been a while since an update. And if your Mk10 is Mk4 (Original story line) then is it going down the line in MK Games, or is it skewing off into new ideas of enemies?
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It is going to be a combination of both actually:p. Since alot has changed in my MK10 story as compared to the Mk4 storyline some future events will change drastically, some will remain unaffected and along with that I plan to bring in new elements as well. Also all the fanmade characters I introduced will have a major role to play.
 
Is this a project that will involve MKDaz and I? Because I would love to get in this!

I might be writing Rebuilding Hydro thread sometime, so IF you want my addition in that sort of turn you may. I really want to join!
 
Armon24 said:
Is this a project that will involve MKDaz and I? Because I would love to get in this!

I might be writing Rebuilding Hydro thread sometime, so IF you want my addition in that sort of turn you may. I really want to join!
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Sure mate! I don't mind additional help and also at the same time others will get a chance to improve their writing skills as well. However Ill be resuming most probably at the end of November, I shall let you know the plans when I begin. You could also work on some rebuilds and I shall include them if they fit into the story. :)
 
Flying Jinko said:
Sure mate! I don't mind additional help and also at the same time others will get a chance to improve their writing skills as well. However Ill be resuming most probably at the end of November, I shall let you know the plans when I begin. You could also work on some rebuilds and I shall include them if they fit into the story. :)
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Sounds interesting. This month is Brony writing month according to Equestria Daily, so I might work on that, since you're resuming around November, but if I hvae any ideas, I'll gladly write them down.
 
Flying Jinko said:
Thats great to hear VFD! Hope you get your adapter soon :). Can't wait to read more of your story.

Those areas you mentioned really do need some fleshing out and I can't wait to see how you interpret them.I roughly estimated a 10 yr time gap between MK4 and Mk:DA and perhaps Reptile could have undergone his transformation in this time. Also Blaze encountering Nitara, Cyrax and Reptile is quite a good possibility as well.
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Yeah. The holy men forced Blaze against his will to guard the Egg of the Dragon King inside the Lava Chamber until the time it hatched. So Blaze would appear and fight against those who disturb the chamber, but not before asking the intruders their reason for entering the area.
 
Vigilante_FireDragon said:
Yeah. The holy men forced Blaze against his will to guard the Egg of the Dragon King inside the Lava Chamber until the time it hatched. So Blaze would appear and fight against those who disturb the chamber, but not before asking the intruders their reason for entering the area.
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If you need help with fight scenes I am your man!
 
F Jinko i think my character flow, could fit in, being a water...
u could make her into a goddess, or a creation made by magic,
u know if u want!
 
Armageddon said:
F Jinko i think my character flow, could fit in, being a water...
u could make her into a goddess, or a creation made by magic,
u know if u want!
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Ill think about it mate! We already have two water based characters Rain and Syphonius. But still, lets see how it goes.:)
 
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