My Mortal Kombat 11 Story.

Chapter 12-The Streets of Pripyat.

Back at the streets of Pripyat, more of these unexplained deaths started occuring on a frequent basis. Tomas, carefully observed and studied the bodies and realised that the bodies were very similar to the descriptions of the victims of the Japanese Myth on the smoke demon, about whom he had only read about in stories.
The Necromancers and Cultists of the Brotherhood at Earthrealm, sensed the demon's presence in at Pripyat and proceeded to the Ghost town. There they promised the various gangs that they would get rid of the horror in return for the living body of a young child, who would be sacrifised. Although the Cultists seemed to have good intentions, it was not really so. They had sought to enslave the demon during the ritual and force it to serve them as per their will. Tomas was captured and given to the cultists as part of their ritual, as he was the sole surviving child in the city. As he was tied to the pyre, he screamed with anger and pain as he was being burnt alive while cultists performed the ritual to trap the demon. The Enenra was pulled into the bonfire along with Tomas as the ritual progressed. Rage and anger filled the Enenra's very being, as his captors tried to enslave him. However, the Enenra saw the tormented body of Tomas screaming in pain and since their emotions were in tune, the enenra fused into Tomas's soul before the body burnt away fully leaving behind a black charred skeleton. Almost immediately a thick black smoke started hovering around the ritual site and started lashing out with rage at the cultists, mutilating them and filling their bodies with diabolic smoke and burning them inside out. The shapeless entity after having its revenge, withered away into oblivion.

Tomas latter found himself at the shores of an island, not remembering is name or who he was.The Lin Kuei had found the boy and codenamed the nameless boy as 'Smoke' due to the powers he exhibited. He then formed a friendship bordering that of brotherhood with another boy of his age codenamed Tundra (Kuai Liang who laters becomes Sub-Zero) who had powers of Ice. The two boys were able to connect and understand each other well as neither of them remembered their past and had extra-ordinary powers. The two grew up to be the deadliest assasins and warriors for the Lin Kuei and they had entered the Mortal Kombat tournament, at the end of which they were killed by Sindel, influenced by Shao Kahn.

When Smoke got revived back as per the wishes of Spectre Liu Kang, his rebirth triggered the oldest of his memories and he realised that he infact was a living demon. He then helped Sub-Zero to infiltrate the Lin Kuei Headquaters and defeat Sektor and together, they began changing the clan for the greater good. During this time the Lin Kuei Temples were being attacked more frequently than ever before by the Brotherhood of the Shadow led by Noob Saibot. Sub-Zero asked Smoke to seek out Spectre Liu Kang, who had knowledge about the city of Nekros(where the Brotherhood was stationed) which he had gained while he served Shinnok. Smoke also sought to learn more about his powers and he along with Spectre Liu Kang departed to the Netherealm to infiltrate the Brotherhood and learn the reason for their increased attacks.
 
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Thanks for your feedback guys=D. This part was a tough one to formulate but Im glad that you guys liked it and it came out well.
 
Very intrigiung backstory and if I recall, according to his bio, the Lin Kuei recruited him due to extraordinary abilities to evade capture, when using his smoke powers, but whatever. Anyways, it was very good.

And it looks like Bi-Han wants revenge on his former younger brother, Kuai.
 
Chapter 13-The Prince of Edenia.

(Special thanks to ~Outworld's Goddess~ for helping me to formulate this chapter with her wonderful ideas.)

Liu Kang had once again emerged as the Mortal Kombat champion after the defeat and death of the fallen Elder God, Shinnok. Since Liu Kang helped defeat a foe that even the Elder Gods could not subdue, they had granted him back his orginal human form from the Spectre he had become when Quan Chi ressurected him. Liu Kang however, shameful and full of regret about his actions as a spectre, declined the offer and said that he wishes to remain a spectre until he can forgive himself and claim redemption in some way or other.

He departed from his friends and Kitana wishing to live in seclusion. During the first two years after Shinnnok's defeat, he travelled Earthrealm, Edenia and Outworld, remaining in hiding and silently training his mind and soul to make peace with his hellspawned body. He emerged from hiding only to protect the innocent and those who were in trouble. The Netherealm powers imbued in him allowed him to teleport from one location to another with ease. Due to his vigilante-like activities, he became a hero and a legend for the local people of Edenia, Outworld and Earthrealm. His interferences thwarted the efforts of Baraka, Sektor and Kano who sought to obtain power and wreck havoc among the civilians. He also secretly spied on the activities of the Brotherhood at the city of Nekros.

During these first two years, he was regularly visited my Kitana, the Princess of Edenia. Before she had died at the hands of Sindel, Kitana had always felt a strong connection of happiness and peace whenever Liu Kang was close. The compassion and love he demonstrated even when she had tried to kill him on the orders of Shang Tsung, had changed her completely as she never felt so loved ever since the death of her parents. Once resurrected, after fulfilling her duties at Outworld, Kitana wished to re kindle her love for Liu Kang. Although still a spectre, her love for him remained firm and the two regularly met at the Hyperon waterfalls of Edenia and rekindles their love. Liu Kang was finally able to make peace with himself and his past actions with the help of Kitana and had then accepted the Elder God's boon to transform him back to human.

The Elder Gods had granted him his wish but Liu Kang's soul was still tainted. Although still human, he could transform back into his Spectre form at will or when he feels the emotions of anger, pain or guilt. Liu Kang learnt to control his alter ego and used it to his advantage as his spectre form increased his powers manifold. He then left with Kitana back to Outworld and a royal ceremony was held for their marriage. Liu Kang helped Kitana in rebuilding Outworld and Edenia while looking into the protection of Earthrealm as well.

After about an year after their marriage, Kitana conceived their first baby boy. King Jerrod(Ermac), Sindel, Raiden, Fujin and Syphonius blessed the child who was named Attilio by his parents. As Attilio grew, he was a playful and naughty child much like how his mother was when she was little. Once Attilio reached 5 years of age, he showed great love for martial arts and had incredible dextirity with fire at such a young age. While his father was busy with activities at Earthrealm, Kitana trained her son in the art of fan blades and hand to hand kombat. Attilio mastered the Fan blades in no time and also improvised their use with fire. However while training hard with his mother one day, the intense mental pressure which the child was experiencing caused him to suddenly transform into a fiery wraith, a trait which he had inherrited from his father. Unlike his father, he wasn't able to control the massive power that surged through his body and he went on a destruction spree before he could be subdued and calmed down. With Liu Kang busy protecting Earthrealm, Kitana was concerned for her son and sought the help of Syphonius, the God of Water and the protector God of Edenia. Syphonius was only happy to help and took in the young Attilio as his student and left with him to the now barren islands of Salmantica,where Syphonius had first gained spiritual insight, to teach him the art of Tai Chi Chuan, to help him control his alter ego and hone his skills better.


Concept Art/Designs created by the very talented ~Outworld's Goddess~

Prince Atillio
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King Liu Kang
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Prince Attilio fan-art drawn by GloRTor




to be continued........
 
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You will go down as a legend in TRMK because of your fan fiction, Flying Jinko. More people need to read these works of art. This is Hollywood blockbuster stuff bro, and trust me, I've seen a lot of movies. Keep up the good work, man. =D

Liu Kang- The Ruler of Edenia, that's gonna be epic :smile:
 
Yea I can't wait to see more you made Smokes background very unique

it took him a while to get smoke's background to come to life. it was worth it at the end. =D and i do hope more people will read his hard work. thank you for your comments you guys =D:flowers::love:
 
Chapter 12-The Streets of Pripyat.

Back at the streets of Pripyat, more of these unexplained deaths started occuring on a frequent basis. Tomas, carefully observed and studied the bodies and realised that the bodies were very similar to the descriptions of the victims of the Japanese Myth on the smoke demon, about whom he had only read about in stories.
The Necromancers and Cultists of the Brotherhood at Earthrealm, sensed the demon's presence in at Pripyat and proceeded to the Ghost town. There they promised the various gangs that they would get rid of the horror in return for the living body of a young child, who would be sacrifised. Although the Cultists seemed to have good intentions, it was not really so. They had sought to enslave the demon during the ritual and force it to serve them as per their will. Tomas was captured and given to the cultists as part of their ritual, as he was the sole surviving child in the city. As he was tied to the pyre, he screamed with anger and pain as he was being burnt alive while cultists performed the ritual to trap the demon. The Enenra was pulled into the bonfire along with Tomas as the ritual progressed. Rage and anger filled the Enenra's very being, as his captors tried to enslave him. However, the Enenra saw the tormented body of Tomas screaming in pain and since their emotions were in tune, the enenra fused into Tomas's soul before the body burnt away fully leaving behind a black charred skeleton. Almost immediately a thick black smoke started hovering around the ritual site and started lashing out with rage at the cultists, mutilating them and filling their bodies with diabolic smoke and burning them inside out. The shapeless entity after having its revenge, withered away into oblivion.

Tomas latter found himself at the shores of an island, not remembering is name or who he was.The Lin Kuei had found the boy and codenamed the nameless boy as 'Smoke' due to the powers he exhibited. He then formed a friendship bordering that of brotherhood with another boy of his age codenamed Tundra (Kuai Liang who laters becomes Sub-Zero) who had powers of Ice. The two boys were able to connect and understand each other well as neither of them remembered their past and had extra-ordinary powers. The two grew up to be the deadliest assasins and warriors for the Lin Kuei and they had entered the Mortal Kombat tournament, at the end of which they were killed by Sindel, influenced by Shao Kahn.

When Smoke got revived back as per the wishes of Spectre Liu Kang, his rebirth triggered the oldest of his memories and he realised that he infact was a living demon. He then helped Sub-Zero to infiltrate the Lin Kuei Headquaters and defeat Sektor and together, they began changing the clan for the greater good. During this time the Lin Kuei Temples were being attacked more frequently than ever before by the Brotherhood of the Shadow led by Noob Saibot. Sub-Zero asked Smoke to seek out Spectre Liu Kang, who had knowledge about the city of Nekros(where the Brotherhood was stationed) which he had gained while he served Shinnok. Smoke also sought to learn more about his powers and he along with Spectre Liu Kang departed to the Netherealm to infiltrate the Brotherhood and learn the reason for their increased attacks.

Nice. I like how you added Pripyat; nothing spells out "mortal kombat" like a town with outskirts ravaged by a nuclear meltdown.
 
Hey Little Jinko. You can use some of my ideas from my BloodSport War story on the time when Onaga returns and the inevitable Armageddon.
Hey VFD! I have actually planned to use your ideas in the Bloodsport War story lol, I was waiting to ask you when I reach those parts. :p. Thanks a lot mate!

Thanks to everyone else for your feedback so far! I really appreciate it.=D
 
Ok Little Jinko. I think for this time in my story, I'll just add only one chapter from the working future saga I'm still currently on, during Wednesday night. Still in brainstorming mode.
 
Updated with fanart created by ~Outworld's Goddess~. Do check it out and give her your feedback guys, she has done an amazing job.=D
 
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