Rain: A Manifesto

Reptil3

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^pretty good! One thing i would have liked is to have seen more of is his pride as a prince and as a demigod rather than so much focus on him being cowardly and seeking empathy.
I would prefer him to have more of a sinister/pompous attitude toward others showing very little sympathy looking down of others because he is high born.
But pretty good stuff!
 

rainreptile

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Totally get where you are coming from! Don't worry, that prideful, posh and royalist attitude will be gradually coming soon. After all, he doesn't know he's highborn yet.
 

Cryo

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I never go outside the MKX forum, my bookmark is even a direct acces to that forum lol, I'm glad I stepped out to the main forum page to find this, even though I haven't read it yet, I'm intrigued, I'll read it soon, after my bloody physics test.
 

rainreptile

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Haha. I do the same thing. If you're a Rain fan, I think you'll enjoy what I have in there so far. Good luck on your physics test!
 

Korie

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I think that it's great so far. I love your writing style and development of Rain throughout the story. :) I hope that you continue.
 
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