MKA Story Plot (finished)

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Mortal Kombat Armageddon Story Plot I came up with.

Hey guys here's a plot summary for how the storyline could be done. First I take some Deception endings and make them canon here and start off with some basic stuff, more will come as I go.

The story picks up where Deception left off. Shujinko arrives at Onaga’s palace, determined to redeem himself for causing the realms to be in great chaos. Onaga sees Shujinko and after thanking him, fights him. Shujinko puts up a good fight, but his old age just isn’t enough to defeat Onaga. Onaga walks in for the kill, but Shujinko grabs a Kamidogu and throws it toward the lava, forcing Onaga to go save it, this gives Shujinko the time he needs to escape.

Liu Kang’s spirit and Ermac successfully infiltrate Onaga’s palace and are attacked by Liu Kang’s enslaved comrades: Kung Lao, Kitana, Johnny Cage, Sonya and Jax. Ermac successfully fights them all; Liu Kang is able to free them. However, before a happy reunion can take place, Liu Kang dematerializes, as Kitana just misses seeing him again… As they recover, Ermac tells them to quickly follow him out of the palace…

Meanwhile Raiden’s energies reform on Earth, however he is a new Raiden… Enraged at what is happening: something tells Raiden to kill the one responsible for the Dragon King’s reemergence: Shujinko. Raiden decides to do just that, but he knows that something doesn’t feel right…

The Elder Gods become aware of Raiden’s reappearance and know just who is manipulating him: the One Being, fearing the One Being’s return, they contact Fujin. Fujin stands on a cliff, where he hears the message from the Elder Gods: He learns of Raiden and the One Being and that he must gather any warrior possible to prevent total Armageddon. Fujin agrees and heads out to gather Earth’s warriors.

First, Fujin finds Kai, wandering the Earth after the events of Mortal Kombat 4. (Except he does not have Raiden’s staff) Fujin tells Kai what is happening, who agrees to help. Next Fujin finds Stryker, who has been trying to live a normal life after the Outworld Invasion, knowing that this threat he cannot sit out, Stryker agrees to fight one last time.

Meanwhile Onaga receives some more messages from the One Being subconsciously… he goes to the graves of Sheeva, Motaro and Kintaro (who was killed in the Outworld tournament by Raiden, since he was about kill Jax unfairly) and revives them turning them into his slaves. They become his generals. He also has had Hsu Hao revived ever since the end of Mortal Kombat: Deadly Alliance, since Jax left Hsu Hao’s body on the castle ground.

Shinnok, who resides in the Netherrealm, he was defeated in Mortal Kombat 4, by the combined efforts of Liu Kang and Raiden. He sees Nightwolf, who is in the Netherrealm to seal Onaga, following him, Shinnok watches a Nightwolf pours out his sins and opens a passageway between Outworld and the Netherrealm, taking this opportunity, Shinnok jumps through and ends up in Outworld, Fortunately for Nightwolf, it released his sins and he is thrust out of the Netherrealm, but he is horrified as to what has happened.

Sub-Zero and Kenshi are still trying to find a way back to Earthrealm, however Sub-Zero sees a shocking sight, his old friend Smoke following a black ninja. Telling Kenshi that he needs to take care of something, the two part ways and Sub-Zero chases after the two. Noob Saibot and Smoke go through a portal to the Netherrealm and Sub-Zero jumps through.

Meanwhile Sindel and Jade find themselves wandering Outworld, it is there that they come across… Goro and Shao Kahn. Sindel and Jade are naturally shocked to see both are still alive, and demand to know why Goro is standing at Shao Kahn’s side. Shao Kahn answers for Goro, that he saved Goro’s life and now he serves him, Jade is angered at Goro’s betrayal and cowardice and runs to attack him, but Sindel holds her back. They talk, Shao Kahn offers her an alliance for they are both trying to get rid of the Dragon King, Sindel reluctantly accepts, but she knows that Kahn has something planned and tells them to follow him to Onaga’s old body.

Meanwhile, Scorpion is on the cliffs of Outworld, still heading towards Onaga’s palace, he thinks of his wife and child and the bastard who murdered them: Quan Chi, yet he also thinks of the original Sub-Zero and has a flashback to their battle in Mortal Kombat 1. He is interrupted by the Elder Gods, who tell him that his mission priority has changed, he is stop any threat that he sees. Armageddon is fast approaching and he must align with the Wind God, Fujin to stop it at any cost. Scorpion says he understands.

As Mavado lies dying from his battle with Kabal, a stranger approaches him, it is Havik… Havik heals Mavado, much like he did to Kabal and tells him that he must head back to the Red Dragon and tell them that a new Black Dragon is approaching… Havik thinks to himself that he will enjoy the chaos between the new Black Dragon and the Red Dragon.

Kabal and his recruits, Kira and Kobra, wander around, eventually coming to Edenia, it is here that they find an old Black Dragon member; Jarek (who survived his cliff fall and been in hiding on Edenia since) They tell him about this new Black Dragon and Jarek after thinking about it, agrees to join.

Speaking of the Black Dragon, Kano also survived, he managed to grab onto a ledge before he hit the net trap in Quan Chi’s fortress. Making his way out, he wanders Outworld where he hears of the new Black Dragon, enraged at this, Kano sets out to kill Kabal.

Hotaru still on the trail of Sub-Zero and Kenshi, is confronted by Dairou, they fight to a stalemate and as they catch their breaths, Dairou decides to tell Hotaru just who commissioned the attack: Darrius. Hotaru tells Dairou that Darrius was the one who killed his family. Dairou does not believe this at first, but he somehow knows that Hotaru is telling the truth, he sets out to find Darrius, while this encounter has changed Hotaru’s views on Order and the government he serves.

Bo’ Rai Cho continues to train Li Mei, who is still finding herself more drawn to this mysterious power, Bo’ Rai Cho decides that the time has come for them to battle the Dragon King. He thinks of the inspiration that Liu Kang’s spirit gave him to defeat the Tarkata and how the people of Outworld plan to rise up against the Dragon King, they set out…

After throwing Scorpion into the Soulnado in Mortal Kombat: Deadly Alliance, Moloch and Drahmin wandered Outworld, having decided to have had enough of waiting for Shang Tsung to tell them when to attack Quan Chi, however when they get to Quan Chi’s fortress, they find nothing, enraged they decide to wander Outworld in search of the sorcerer. They do not know of the final battle at the end of Deadly Alliance.

Speaking of the Deadly Alliance, Quan Chi successfully escaped the blast, though it cost him the amulet, he was able to teleport at the last moment, however the amulet was seized by Onaga, Quan Chi landed in a different part of Outworld, where he plots to retrieve his amulet. Shang Tsung, however, had a different way of escaping the blast, by releasing every soul he ever absorbed, he was able to shield himself from Raiden’s blast, however this caused him to hurl backwards and be buried under the rubble, when he got out, he was once again an old man.

Mileena, surprised at Bo Rai Cho’s success in defeating the Tarkata, decided to get rid of Baraka, by feeding him to the insects, little does she know that it was a decoy, Baraka himself, is now the last surviving Tarkata for the rest of his race has been killed by either Sub-Zero, Goro or Bo’ Rai Cho’s army. He blames this on Mileena.

Cyrax ended up back on Earthrealm after he gave the orb to Nitara, he ends up in Japan. Sektor’s clan, the Tekunin spot him and report to Sektor, upon learning of Cyrax’s return, Sektor decides that Cyrax will be the first target of the Tekunin.

Nitara is back in her own realm (the name can’t come to me), as she wanders around for a while, she comes across a strange girl named Khameleon, whom she learns is just like Reptile. Khameleon has heard of what has happened to Reptile that Onaga has taken over his body and desires help. Nitara, curious as to what is happening and maybe out of a little pity for Reptile, agrees to help her set Reptile free.

Earlier, Jade allowed herself to be captured by the Tarkata and Tanya drew in close, but Jade threw Tarkatan essence on her and she was attacked by the Tarkata, she just barely managed to escape, but now has horrible scars on her body.


Oh yeah, I'm forgetting about a few aren't I? I'll get to them eventually, but Mokap...? Eh, screw him
 
Angel said:
Wow... Thats properly the best attempt yet. O.o'

I like some of the stort lines too.
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Stop. Just stop right there. It's PROBABLY!!!!!!!!!! arghhh nooooo!!!! Now I'm going to take out my frustrations at work on customers tomorrow just because some chick keeps using "properly" instead of "probably" on an internet forum. Thanks a lot. If I get fired for spitting in a customer's face, it's YOUR fault! :x :x :x :x

Anyway, yeah, good story here (actually read it all). But I thought Sektor's clan was the Lin Kuei? And I think I heard some BS about the elder gods resurrecting everyone just to have one final match, which is a pretty lame excuse by Midway for this storyline if true.
 
thanks guys..

MKA Story plot (continued)

Thought to be dead after Shao Kahn’s defeat at the hands of Earth’s warrior’s, Rain comes out of hiding, his suicide attack on Shao Kahn failed and he was left for dead, but he barely managed to survive and went into hiding in Edenia in shame and disgrace. Finally, he has decided to step out of the shadows and prove his worth, and he arrives at Edenian Palace, where he meets with Kitana, yet he finds it strange that Kitana apparently does not remember who he is. Kitana tells Rain to head to Outworld and join the new army of Edenian. Rain agrees and sets out, but he notices something odd under Kitana’s veil.

Noob Saibot and Smoke are now in the Netherrealm where they have already begun construction on Noob’s new robot army to conquer the Netherrealm. Yet then Sub-Zero lands behind them on his stomach, Smoke quickly gets Sub-Zero grabs Sub-Zero as he gets up and Noob takes a closer look at him. He remembers… Sub-Zero is his younger brother and reveals his true identity to the shocked Sub-Zero. If he were still Lin Kuei, he would’ve been proud of his brother, but all compassion has left him, he orders Smoke to assist him in killing Sub-Zero.

As the two begin pulling Sub-Zero apart, Smoke starts to malfunction, he collapses on the ground and Sub-Zero starts to attack Noob, but Noob easily defeats Sub-Zero proclaiming that he “always was the better fighter?. Noob walks in for the kill, but an unlikely hero comes to Sub-Zero’s rescue: Ashrah. She tells Sub-Zero to escape, though Sub-Zero does not fully understand what is happening, does not argue and escapes, but not before taking Smoke’s body with him. While Noob and Ashrah face off, the two fight, but Noob comes out the victor, seriously wounding Ashrah, but she is able to escape, before he can make the killing blow. With all the distractions out of the way: Noob goes back to preparing his army.

Meanwhile Frost, who was believed dead by Sub-Zero, climbs out of her grave, she wanders around the gravesite, where she comes to the same belief that Sub-Zero had that these people are her ancestors. Frost is now unsure of her place, she realizes that she paid the price for her arrogance, but also resents Sub-Zero for not saving her… She wanders Outworld…

Meanwhile Liu Kang’s body is at the Shaolin Temples, mercilessly killing the monks there, he takes the blood from one monk and licks it. Liu Kang’s spirit appears and is angered that this corpse has killed in his name and body and soul battle. Meanwhile Raiden, who is trying to fight the urge to kill Shujinko, teleports to the Shaolin Temples, there he sees Liu Kang fighting… Liu Kang? Through an act of defiance to the One Being, who merges them back into one, but the One Being quickly takes control again and teleports away as the now fully alive Liu Kang falls to the ground unconscious.

Raiden knows what is happening, that there is an unknown force trying to control his actions, he tries to fight, but he slips further and further to the One Being’s control.

Meanwhile… thanks to Fujin, Sub-Zero is able to get back to Earthrealm, Fujin tells him the situation, Sub-Zero agrees to help, but he must attend to Smoke first. Fujin says he understands and tells Sub-Zero to prepare himself. Several hours later, Sub-Zero thinks to himself in his room, he suddenly hears the sound the bombs… the Lin Kuei Temple is under attack. Sub-Zero looks out the window to see that Noob has conjured up at least 20 Cyber Demons and thanks to some technology that he took from Smoke, he can access the realms and go where he pleases. Many Lin Kuei are lost in the attack, but Sub-Zero runs out and manages to fight off the Cyber Demons, but Noob attacks him yet again… Sub-Zero demands to know how Noob found the temple, and Noob explains that Smoke has a homing beacon inside his body, meaning that Noob was able to track him here, it had been inserted ever since the Lin Kuei converted Smoke into a cyborg, he had Smoke make the two devices for him, in case he would need them.

As the two brothers battle, Sareena watches from above… when she looks into Noob Saibot’s eyes, she realizes who he is: the original Sub-Zero, the man who convinced her to revolt against Quan Chi. Once again, Sub-Zero is defeated by his older brother, but this time Noob says that before killing Sub-Zero and he will let him watch the Lin Kuei Temple collapse, Noob mocks his brother. He tells Sub-Zero that he failed as a Grandmaster and now watches as the Lin Kuei… is exterminated. Sub-Zero cannot respond, he is too stunned, with that Noob prepares to kill Sub-Zero, but just then he is struck by Sareena.

Noob turns to face Sareena and is surprised to see her again. (as he had assumed her dead when Shinnok struck her in the back) Sareena asks Noob about what has happened to him, Noob doesn’t respond, he decides to retreat back to the Netherrealm for now. Sub-Zero gets up; Sareena doesn’t know what to say… Without a word, Sub-Zero runs off…

Meanwhile inside the destroyed Lin Kuei Temple, Smoke reactivates, getting up, he walks around, and sees the Lin Kuei soldiers… some dead, some still alive. As he surveys this, he recalls his automation into a cyborg and remembers who did the deed: the Lin Kuei, in anger he starts breaking everything apart, that is until Sareena approaches him…

Sareena wants to know who he is, Smoke tells her, saying that he is merely a trapped soul. Sareena says she used to feel the same way, having spent most of her life in the Netherrealm, however, she was able to get free and she could maybe help him find his freedom. Smoke denies saying that all he wants is to be human again, Sareena tells him that she was once a demon and she was able to regain her human form, perhaps she could find a way for him to regain his human form as long as he helps her find information on Noob Saibot… Smoke agrees and shares with Sareena all he remembers during his time with Noob…

Meanwhile, Scorpion continues to wander through Outworld looking for any sign of a possible apocalyptic threat (he wishes the Elder Gods would’ve been more specfic) where he comes across Moloch and Drahmin… The two Oni are surprised to see that Scorpion is still alive (figuratively speaking), Scorpion says he doesn’t have time to waste on them? Angered, Moloch and Drahmin jump him. Scorpion battles with the two Oni once again, but this time the outcome is different, with his new powers, Scorpion defeats them and sends them both back to the Netherrealm…

Meanwhile Ermac leads the 5 warriors out of the palace. Onaga brought out what evil was in the 5 warriors to make them his slaves, some have recovered more than others. Kung Lao, being the most recovered, since he is a Shaolin Monks (they are peace-loving guys after all) Johnny Cage and Jax seem to be all right, Sonya is questionable, but Kitana seems to be the worst off. It’s as though she’s worrying about having a kind of relapse, as they escape the palace, they notice Onaga’s guard heading towards them…

Kitana: (runs away in trama)
Johnny Cage: Running away like a girl… (pauses and then follows)

Kitana runs away from the group, while Ermac leads the others to safety, during the chase, Kung Lao is struck from behind and he falls over a ledge. Safe from the enemy but unconscious. The others want to go back for Kung Lao and Kitana, but Ermac tells them that they must keep moving.

When Kung Lao awakens, he looks over the ledge to see… Goro and Shao Kahn, leading Sindel and Jade. He is shocked to see that Goro and Shao Kahn are alive and even more so that Sindel and Jade are willingly following them. He overhears a conversation, where Shao Kahn mentions how great a warrior Goro has been to his services as of late. Kung Lao is shocked and he recalls his making peace with Goro. Enraged that Goro has dishonored both him and his ancestor, he vows to put Goro away… this time for good.

Well there we go, we got Liu Kang alive, Kung Lao finding out Goro is evil again, lots of stuff with Sub-Zero and Noob Saibot and Sareena makes her entrance into the story. And she'll play a role in both the Noob Saibot and Quan Chi storylines And Reiko will make an appearance, I just haven't thought of where to insert him yet to interest he'd meet Sareena. I got to think out his story more...

I will continue the story later.
 
All I can say is you are a copy-cat XP/Just kidding.


Not a bad job, although I prefer, it : *insert name here story* etc/



Also Krypt: We don't know if this happens. But Sektor supposively went to Japan to start up a tribe of robots/cybors called Takuns *Sp*


Although currently he is still with the Lin-Kuei, until he is officialy out.
 
Sektor's race of robotic ninjas are properly (yes properly, not probably) called "Tekunin". I don't think I could have come up with a better line of events myself. There were so many contradicting storyline in MK:D but you've gloriously worked your way around every plot hole. Terrific work I say, good job.
 
mka storyplot (cont)

Meanwhile Liu Kang also awakens, he is dazed and doesn’t remember everything that happened at first, but he notices that his hand is flesh, as he looks himself over, he comes to the realization that he is alive. He remembers his death at Shang Tsung’s hand and it sends a shiver down his spine. Later on, he wanders around, suddenly the images of what his body did flash through his mind, he tries to block it out, but ultimately all the pain and suffering that his body caused make him scream in agony.

With Stryker and Kai by his side, Fujin prepares to open a portal to Outworld, he reckons that the other warriors are still in Outworld, Kai and Stryker follow him through.

Meanwhile Shujinko meets up with Kenshi and informs him of the Dragon King, Kenshi agrees to help, but yet he senses another presence, one that is very familiar to him…

Using Nitara’s necklace, she and Khameleon return to Outworld. Khameleon wonders why she was in Nitara’s realm. Nitara tells Khameleon not to worry about it for now. They find themselves near Onaga’s palace and with all the commotion outside, they managed to sneak inside from the back. As Nitara and Khameleon make their way to Onaga’s throne room. They are attacked by Sheeva, Nitara holds Sheeva off to allow Khameleon to get inside.

Inside, Khameleon confronts Onaga and demands that he release Reptile. Onaga does not know who Khameleon is and declares: “Brave of you girl, incredibly stupid, but brave to face me. Reptile, was it? I don’t why it was his body I inhabited, but I don’t really care either, if you want him back, you’ll have to kill me.? Khameleon declares that she will gladly do that. So they fight, but Khameleon is no match for the Dragon King, he seizes her in his grip and starts to crush yet, but yet something stops him from killing her. He is shocked at this development and tries again to kill her, but once again, he can’t. He releases her and stumbles back in pain.

Onaga knows what is happening, he quickly flies off to his old tomb. Khameleon knows that it was Reptile who saved her.

Outside, Nitara has defeated and killed Sheeva and Khameleon tells Nitara that they must follow Onaga. Nitara complies. At the tomb, Shao Kahn and Sindel have arrived with Goro not far behind, Sindel begins to investigate the ancient language on the pillars… it is just then that Onaga enters… he bats Jade away and after a brief struggle with Goro, heads towards his original body. Sindel and Shao Kahn step back and watch as Onaga’s soul transfers into his original body, Shao Kahn realizes what is happening and thinks to himself what a fool Onaga is, since he is much weaker in his original body. When the process is done, Reptile, now once again back in his human disguise, falls to the ground and the amulet (which Onaga was holding on to) falls as well.

Sindel sees the amulet fall and tries to grab it, but Onaga with his staff, bats Sindel away, but before Onaga can reclaim the amulet, Shao Kahn blasts him up against the far wall. Onaga looks upon his old foe for the first time in ages, Kahn laughs as now Onaga is much weaker than before (Author’s Note: Think of Onaga as being in his look from Raiden’s MK:DA ending) Reptile regains consciousness. He sees Shao Kahn standing in front of him with his back turned. Suddenly, all his memories come back to him, the genocide of his people… at the hands of Shao Kahn and how he served him like a dog.

Shao Kahn bends down to pick up the amulet, but Reptile catches him by surprise and puts him up against the wall.

Shao Kahn: What are you doing, you traitor!?
Reptile: I remember…. Everything… Kahn… I’m not your dog anymore!

Khameleon and Nitara arrive just in time to hear Reptile make this claim… Kahn merely laughs and pushes Reptile off and knocks him down. Kahn prepares to kill Reptile, but then Onaga uses this opportunity to catch Shao Kahn by surprise. The two combat each other while Sindel and Jade regain consciousness. Sindel tries to grab the amulet, but Reptile picks it up, and runs off with it, Khameleon and Nitara chase after him. Goro begins to regain consciousness, but Jade gives him a much-deserved kick to the head that knocks him out again. (“That felt good.? she says)

Sindel and Jade use this chance to escape, while Onaga and Shao Kahn face each other down. Onaga says that Shao Kahn will pay for his treachery and how Kahn was supposed to protect Outworld from harm, not cause it. Kahn says that he did that job: by getting rid of Onaga. (Author’s Note: Of course, both are pretty horrible rulers, that’s the irony of this situation, they both suck at being Emperor) Goro finally regains consciousness and grabs Onaga with his four arms, Kahn orders Goro to crush Onaga, but then Kintaro bursts in and he quickly tackles Goro. Goro and Kintaro struggle with each other, ultimately crashing through the wall.

Shao Kahn and Onaga stare each other down, where Onaga reveals that he now has a new ally to use against Shao Kahn: the Centaurs. Motaro appears, leading the Centaurs, Shao Kahn admits his defeat for now, and escapes through a portal to get outside the palace.

Goro and Kintaro’s battle continues outside the palace, Goro demands to know what Kintaro is fighting alongside Onaga, but Kintaro merely replies that he is only serving his master. Goro and Kintaro fight to a standstill….

Meanwhile, Quan Chi plots to regain his amulet when he hears a familiar voice say “YOUR amulet?? Quan Chi turns around in shock to see Shinnok…

There we go. Reptile is back and back in his human disguise as well. Oh and for all you people who want Scorpion to kill Quan Chi... Shinnok won't kill Quan Chi, but I had to have them meet again...
 
I only have one question?

How does Reptile know Khameleon, when they never met. (IE contrary to how the game has stated it)

Or remember how Khan killed his people? That was a secret kept from Reptile unles Onaga, knew... In which case never mind.
 
MKA Storyplot (cont.)


Despite being shocked at first, Quan Chi then laughs at the sight of his old master again. “Finally found a way out of the Netherrealm did you? Your stay will be short.? Shinnok is obviously angry about having been deceived so easily by the sorcerer and starts to attack him. But Quan Chi dodges, mocking him by his loss to Liu Kang and Raiden. Shinnok then asks him if he’s run into Liu Kang yet.

Quan Chi replies that Liu Kang is dead, Shinnok says that he knows. Quan Chi is, of course, confused by this, but Shinnok tells him that, while he was trapped in the Netherrealm, he could still see the events that transpired in Earthrealm. When Liu Kang’s body was buried, Shinnok was able to reanimate his body… this was to be Shinnok’s way of exacting revenge on those who imprisoned him: He would kill in Liu Kang’s name and also take revenge on Raiden and the Earthrealm Warriors and Quan Chi as well.

Quan Chi is a bit surprised at this, but doesn’t really care. Shinnok and Quan Chi continue to battle, until Quan Chi decides to stop wasting time and teleports away leaving Shinnok to scream in fury.

Meanwhile, Goro’s battle with Kintaro is interrupted when Goro sees the Centaurs marching towards them, with motions from Shao Kahn, Goro retreats. Baraka travels Outworld, searching for Mileena, blaming her, slowly these thoughts consume his mind as he gradually begins going insane. He finds some Tarkata who survived their various battles. Gathering them, Baraka vows to kill Mileena…

Meanwhile Ermac leads Johnny Cage, Sonya and Jax to a cave where they can hide until they are ready. Johnny Cage finds it weird (and disturbing) that Ermac refers to himself as “we? instead of “I?.

Sonya looks down at her own reflection at a puddle in the cave. She thinks about her time as Onaga’s slave and wonders to herself… if any evil still remains in her. Jax asks her what she is thinking about, but Sonya quickly changes the subject. Cage approaches her and asks her if she’s worried about Kung Lao and Kitana. Sonya says she’s sure that they will be fine, they can take care of themselves. They then ask Ermac as to how he freed them.

Ermac says that he had nothing to do with it; it was the spirit of Liu Kang who freed them. All three are shocked and ask what has happened to him. Ermac says that he does not know, Liu Kang has not been seen since then. Jax says that they need to work out a tactic, when he sits down; he notices that one of his cybernetic arms is damaged…

Kitana wanders Outworld, many sorrows fill her head: Liu Kang’s death, Goro’s death and now her service to the Dragon King. She tried to get away from her days as Shao Kahn’s assassin, but it seems as though she’s revisiting those days…

Goro heads out on his own, wanting to find a way for him to prove his loyalty to Shao Kahn, he finds, a most unexpected, but pleasing sight. Princess Kitana. With her guard down, Goro grabs her and pins her to his chest. Kitana struggles, but when she looks up, she sees just who is holding her captive. Shocked that Goro is alive, she demands to know why he has grabbed her, all she gets is an evil grin.

Shujinko and Kenshi come across Nightwolf, who is trying to make sense of what had happened earlier in the Netherrealm. They ask him to join in their crusade against the Dragon King. Nightwolf agrees, but makes no mention of Shinnok.

Onaga contacts the Seidan Guardsmen, their primary target is now Reptile. They are to find him and reclaim the amulet that he possesses. The one who finds Reptile will receive a vast reward from the Dragon King, be it dead or alive. Hotaru receives the order and goes to hunt Reptile down.

As Frost wanders Outworld, she comes across a black ninja, who introduces himself as Noob Saibot. Noob notices the similarity in Frost’s outfit to his brother’s and asks her if she knows him. Frost says that she does and that he left her to die. Noob sees this as an opportunity to find a new second-in-command. He convinces her that if they join, they can get revenge on Sub-Zero. Frost eagerly agrees and Noob opens a portal to the Netherrealm, upon seeing what’s inside, Frost is reluctant to go through, but Noob assures her that there is no harm.

Meanwhile, Shang Tsung is devouring the souls of several Outworld citizens, desperate to regain his youthful form. Suddenly a hand grabs him by the throat and holds him up in the air, Shang Tsung is shocked and fearful to see Shao Kahn…

Shang Tsung: What? But you… you’re dead! I saw you die!
Shao Kahn: Reports of my death have been greatly exaggerated. I know all about your little “Deadly Alliance?. Did you really think you could get away with it?
(Shang Tsung whimpers)
Shao Kahn: (examining Shang Tsung’s new look) Hmm, well one thing hasn’t changed about you… you still scream like a little girl.
Shang Tsung: W-what are you going to do?
Shao Kahn: You’ll see… I have something planned for you sorcerer…

With that Shao Kahn takes Shang Tsung with him… his plans unknown.

Scorpion finds himself on a cliff again, where he hears a woman scream, when he looks, he sees his wife hanging over a bottomless cliff. Scorpion tries to save her, but a foot steps on his hands and someone grabs him by his ninja vest… Quan Chi. Scorpion can only watch helplessly as his wife falls to her death, just then Quan Chi turns into… Noob Saibot. (Who Scorpion has seen before when he served Shinnok, but doesn’t know his name) Scorpion is confused by his appearance, but just then Noob gives an evil chuckle and throws Scorpion over the edge… Scorpion wakes up, discovering that it was just a nightmare, but yet he knows that there was something strange about that black ninja…

Kabal and the Black Dragon meet up with Havik, who tells them that Mavado still lives… Kabal asks how that’s possible and Havik replies that he was saved by somebody unknown… this gets Kabal suspicious. Jarek asks what happened to Kano and Kabal answers that he had heard that Kano was killed by Mavado. None are aware that Kano is watching them…

Liu Kang finds his way back to Outworld… by the same portal that he used to enter when Shao Kahn had invited them to compete in a new tournament in Outworld. As he travels, he comes across his old friend, Kung Lao. Kung Lao is elated to see that his friend has returned from the grave and Liu Kang is pleased to see that Kung Lao has recovered from Onaga’s control. He asks about the others, Kung Lao says that Kitana ran off on her own and the others are still with that red ninja, he calls him. Liu Kang tells Kung Lao, that ninja’s name and that it was his spirit that freed him from Onaga’s control. Kung Lao is surprised, but thanks him for this. He notices that Liu Kang is depressed, but does not ask him about it.

Liu Kang asks Kung Lao what he’s doing by himself, Kung Lao replies that he has something on his own to take care of. Kung Lao tells him what he saw… Goro and Shao Kahn both are still alive to which Liu Kang replies “I didn’t even know they were dead.? Kung Lao goes “Oh, well. Now you know.? Kung Lao tells him that he plots to find Goro and make him pay for dishonoring his ancestor. Liu Kang gives out a sigh, telling Kung Lao to do what he must. “Difficult times are ahead, Liu. We will face them together.? Says Kung Lao as he vows to stick by Liu Kang’s side.


So Liu Kang and Kung Lao have been reunited, they're the main characters of this tale. For all you Kitana fans, Goro won't kill Kitana, but she will have a run in with Shao Kahn again, I'll hopefully get back to Rain next update and well Reiko might not appear for a while, probably when Sareena confronts Noob... and I hope to get a good storyline for Johnny Cage going, I think he might run into Blaze... and Reptile with the amulet... yeah I'll get back to that next update
 
Ok I'm sorry, this is starting to shy away from an MK:A plot summary and becoming full blown fan-fiction. You should have stopped with your last installment b/c this one is just going a little over the top.
 
Dude it isn't FF.

This hasn't happened. And most likely won't but it is something we hope happens in the story. (See my topic if you don't get what I mean)

If he is going into details of the story that isn't FF it is ideas leading into what he is stating. Two different things buddy. No offense.

Edit-Wouldn't it be FF anyway?


I mean it is fictional, (Although hopefully it is correct or mine), and we are fans... So wouldn't it have been FF from the start?

Edit-2 After rereading the latest installment all I can say is great job. The parts were deatiled and getting explained. You see folks without details even the best stories would suck. IE (The puppy beat up the bad guy) *IE2 the marvelous and strong hound beat up the crook.)

Now ScorpZero has decided to fill in some quick gaps which to any body good at writing at all is a plus. His grammar excels alsp adding to the enjoyment.\\10
 
pheonix said:
Dude it isn't FF.

This hasn't happened. And most likely won't but it is something we hope happens in the story. (See my topic if you don't get what I mean)

If he is going into details of the story that isn't FF it is ideas leading into what he is stating. Two different things buddy. No offense.

Edit-Wouldn't it be FF anyway?


I mean it is fictional, (Although hopefully it is correct or mine), and we are fans... So wouldn't it have been FF from the start?

Edit-2 After rereading the latest installment all I can say is great job. The parts were deatiled and getting explained. You see folks without details even the best stories would suck. IE (The puppy beat up the bad guy) *IE2 the marvelous and strong hound beat up the crook.)

Now ScorpZero has decided to fill in some quick gaps which to any body good at writing at all is a plus. His grammar excels alsp adding to the enjoyment.\\10
Click to expand...

Thanks its nice to know someone appreciates my story
Ill continue my story later..just wait until you guys see what i have in store for raiden and the others.
I hope everyone enjoyed it! :D
 
MKA Storyplot (cont.)

Raiden holds his head in pain, the One Being’s voice echoing throughout his head… Raiden screams in anguish, but then, just then, the One Being fully takes control… Raiden, the Thunder God is no more…

Fujin’s group meets up with Shujinko’s group, reunitings and meetings take place. (Author’s Note: Well I guess the only reuniting would be between Stryker and Nightwolf) As Fujin and Shujinko discuss Onaga, Fujin mentions what has happened to Raiden. (Author’s Note: Well, I’m not sure if Shujinko meeting Raiden at any time in MK:D’s Konquest is canon so I’m not sure how Shujinko could react.) Nightwolf pulls Fujin aside, where he tells him about his exploits in the Netherrealm and how he accidentally freed someone there, who he described as having strong magical traces, Fujin knows this to be Shinnok…

Cyrax travels Japan, until he is found by several agents of the Tekunin. He does not know why they are trying to kill him, but he does the only sensible move and tries to outrun them, eventually he comes across the Tekunin Temple, where he sneaks inside and hides out. Using some of the technology he finds there, he repairs his inter-dimensional gate that was built into his arm, but after he does so, he is attacked by Sektor. Cyrax is surprised to see Sektor again and what he has become, but all Sektor does is walk towards Cyrax, not saying a word, Cyrax is cornered. With no other choice, Cyrax opens a portal to Outworld and jumps through, Sektor follows him just before it closes.

Smoke tells Sareena that Noob plans to become ruler of the Netherrealm and that he is building an army to do just that. Sareena is shocked that Noob wants to rule the forbidden realm. She knows that if she is to try to help him regain his true self, she must go back to the Netherrealm, something she isn’t eager to do. Smoke asks Sareena what she intends to do. Sareena says she does not know, merely that for now they will travel to Outworld as she is certain that Sub-Zero has gone there.

Goro brings Kitana before Shao Kahn, with Shang Tsung by his side, Kitana is shocked to see that Kahn is alive and that Goro has returned to his side, Goro says he will tear her apart before the Emperor as a show of loyalty. Kitana struggles to break free of Goro’s grip and with a well-timed kick to the stomach, she is able to do just that. She runs at Shao Kahn, who throws her aside. Kitana gets up and keeps attacking him. She figures that she will die, but at the very least, she could give Kahn a fight. Anything to make him pay for he did to her, but she is actually able to surprise him with a Pretty Kick that sends him flying back to the ground, using this moment, Kitana decides to escape.

Kahn is impressed at the blow Kitana delivered and tells Goro to forget about tearing her apart for now, he’s sure that they will meet up again. Shang Tsung chuckles to himself about how Kitana hit Shao Kahn, but he’s quickly silenced by a punch to the face from Shao Kahn. Shao Kahn then says that they will take care of their enemies one-by-one…

Reptile, meanwhile, stands on a high cliff, the amulet is his hands. “This amulet possesses great power, in the hands of Shinnok it caused great destruction, it could probably send me back in time to my homeworld before Shao Kahn destroyed it. Or I could resurrect my entire race, but can I really control this? It could destroy me… in the hands of Onaga, it could’ve unmade the realms. I COULD DESTROY IT! No… That would be a coward’s answer. If I can discover how to use this, the possibilities are endless…?

With that Khameleon and Nitara catch up with Reptile, and Khameleon reunites with Reptile… Reptile tells her that with the amulet, they could resurrect their realm and their people. Khameleon says that she is not sure if they can utilize the amulet properly. Nitara interrupts and Reptile takes notice of her. (He is no longer angry with her for causing “Shao Kahn’s? death since he remembers the truth) Nitara says the reason why Khameleon was in Nitara’s realm when she found her is… because their realms are one and the same.

Scorpion continues to travel through Outworld until he senses something familiar: he knows it, Quan Chi still lives. Upon realizing this, Scorpion yells out a dramatic speech of…:

Scorpion: I’LL KILL THAT BASTARD! (Author’s Note: OK, not very dramatic, but it got the point across)

With that, Scorpion sets out to find him; unaware that this will lead him into a confrontation with Noob Saibot… the man he killed…

As Sektor travels Outworld, looking for Cyrax. However, he sees Sub-Zero and he successfully identifies him. Seeing this as an opportunity to take revenge, Sektor fires a missile at the unsuspecting Sub-Zero…

Liu Kang and Kung Lao try to find their allies and join with them, Kung Lao continues to notice that Liu Kang is depressed and decides to ask him about it. Liu Kang tries to change the subject, but Kung Lao persists. Liu Kang decides to tell him, his body was reanimated, by who, he does not know. Nor does he know how he came back to life, except that he remembers feeling electricity going through his body, but he remembers seeing Raiden blow himself up, so he wonders if it’s possible that Raiden’s back.

Liu Kang then reveals just what’s troubling him, the fact that they used his body to kill, to destroy, and that he couldn’t stop him, they killed in his name. With this, he starts to tear up. Kung Lao can only respond: “So, Liu Kang is a human being after all. This will be with you for a long time, Liu, a long time.?

In the Netherrealm, Noob speaks with Frost, who is eager to serve him. Noob then tells him about his two targets: Sub-Zero… and Scorpion. Frost asks if they are really such a threat to his rule.

Noob Saibot: Yes, in a manner of speaking… Scorpion, I’ll show you who you truly are and who your real enemy is…

Yep, I figure the next few updates will be immensely oriented with the Noob conflict in which Reiko will make his debut. Oh, I didn't get back to Rain, did I? ^^; Well soon the final showdown between Scorpion and Quan Chi will take place... in which he will have a meeting with Noob...
 
nice very good but make it like rain finds out the shoa khan killed his father
and when goro chatches katana rain does a lighting kick to goro and saves kitana and then rain strikes goro on the head with lighting to knock him un-conches
 
Wow... You are a godo writer. You should write some fanfiction, I would love to read it. :wink:
 
I suppose I didn't get my point across clear enough before. When I say moving away from Plot Summary into Fan-fiction, I merely meant that his first couple of installments seemed like they could be Bios or Endings, which is in the style of MK storytelling, but now he's adding dialogue and flowery words and such and it just doesn't feel enough like MK to me anymore, that's all I meant.
 
Alright.

I see what you mean, but it isn't really FF, trust me I make this stuff for a sort of a living for other sites.

As long as it doesn't explain the whole thing. (I mean go from Liu Kang wins in MK:A and that is the story)

It isn't exactly FF. Mine isn't either, as I made mine souly bios. (Although I need some improvements for Reptiles)


But I still like ScorpZero's style. Give him some praise.
 
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