Rebuilding Nitara

I'd love it if Rayne from Bloadrayne became a guest in MK and was somehow related to Nitara's story. If the vampire realm will exist (based on Nitara's story), there will also be vampires in Earthrealm (based on Rayne's story). Rayne's evil father, Kagan and her other half-siblings can try to destroy and take over both Earthrealm and the vampire realm while Rayne and Nitara stop them. If Nitara is evil, she could join Kagan and his minions on trying to conquer the realms. Something like that would give a reason why Rayne can be in the MK universe.
 
Wow! That story was great! Up to the ending with was not so great, but the twist was very good. I loved the cool Icelandic language you used. Pretty authentic!
 
What part of the ending was not so good?
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Wow, not sure how I missed it, it was a pretty good read. Perhaps towards the ending, instead of Sonya, I thought Jade would better fit the role since her past is more obscure than Sonya's.
 
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What part of the ending was not so good?
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No no i meant everything up to the end was not that great. It was okay.
The ending was pretty cool, it blew me away.

If you could, perhaps explain the Shaman a bit more and his part of the story. i think the whole rebuilding would work a bit better.
 
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