Quickie Fake

Sapphire

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Here's a fake of mine that I made a week or so ago. I was planning on filling it up with special effects, but I got lazy and then started work on my comic, so I figure I'll show it to you guys now.

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Tear it apart.
 
#1 Rain's shadow should be pushed up alittle more. I mean, think about it. If rain was on the ground, where would his shadow be?
#2 The names in the lifebar isnt as bad as it would have been. Just a few white pixels.
#3 I personally don't like what you did to rain. He looks pretty weird.
#4 Your [Saphire?] sprite. I'll give you 10/10 for trying, but it doesn't look right IMO. BUT i like the effects you gave [Saphire?] your sprite.

I know you can do better [in a good way] - For some reason, this statement seems like a bad one. :lol:
 
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