Mortal Kombat Journey - FULL BLOWN MK RPG w/ Screenshots + Info

The idea is quite good, but the artwork on the latest screens (this knight, for example) is downright horrible.

Well it seems to be good to some other people, please explain your reasoning or feedback on all the things you think could use polishing :) I am open to suggestions.

'cause that is why I made this thread, not only to promote but to hear feedback, suggestions, and corrections to my work before I ever release it :)
 
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Well it seems to be good to some other people, please explain your reasoning or feedback on all the things you think could use polishing :) I am open to suggestions.

'cause that is why I made this thread, not only to promote but to hear feedback, suggestions, and corrections to my work before I ever release it :)

That's awesome that you don't react with anger or smth like that. :)
Well, graphics don't seems to come together like if it were ripped from different arts and the last drawning of the knight looks like it was done by a child (no offense). I think you need to find a good artist to make the game look better.
 
That's awesome that you don't react with anger or smth like that. :)
Well, graphics don't seems to come together like if it were ripped from different arts and the last drawning of the knight looks like it was done by a child (no offense). I think you need to find a good artist to make the game look better.
Why should I get angry? x) you're trying to help you know? that's what feedback is for :D since you're talking about the art rips I assume you're directly referencing the battle sequence art and not overworld screenshots...
I actually think the knight looks good, I myself believe it needs more detail. it's hard to make it better since I'm not only doing some in battle art work but also most of the overworld graphics. so its hard to do everything well 'cause fatigue kicks in. I'll have another go at the knight, editing wise. if you're still not satisfied, I'll start anew :)
the reason the art contrasts is because some is from in game MK art and I didn't change it, for two reasons... one to tribute Midway/NRS's various artists and two, to not bore the players with a repetitive art style :) some people like it, some don't mind it. some like the knights design and art, some don't. I appreciate your feedback though, and I respect different opinions. I'll fix up the knight and if you're not pleased, I'll scrap the current drawing/design :)
so that's what I'll do to better please you in your view of our project. :) fix death knight. if you have any other feedback, let me know and if there's anything you like so I continue doing it, let me know. :)

Upon creation of anything, whether it be a character, a line, a 5 minute piece, a week's worth piece, he is doing so with the idea to get feedback, both good and bad.

Big businesses can't do that, NRS makes models and character designs, some are loved, some are hated but they usually don't listen to the bad feedback. That leads to decrease in their sales and all that.

That is my advantage. Everything is done as a hobby, for free. Criticism, both good and bad, will be heard. In your case it is bad, but it is constructive nonetheless. That is all I could ever ask for.

If you would like to help me in any way, or the creation of this game, let me know! We need all the help we can get xD


thanks man and take care!
 
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Sorry for the lack of updates... my laptop is being fixed up, but after I get it back I will reveal some updates on the Death Knight, the Beetle Lair, and more.
 
Waiting for it man...

It won't be long. My laptop was all screwed up. Broken USB ports, burnt out battery... it is a lot to fix but won't be more than a week.

looks great! can't wait for it to come out!

Thanks man, if you have any suggestions or feedback I would love to hear it!

...

ALSO, on another note... right now we're looking for people that can help us grind into finishing the game. It is only three of us (not counting our three beta testers...) and a lot still needs to be done so if ANYONE would like to help, be a part of our team (you will be in the credits, no matter how minor or major your contribution) contact me directly through the forum or e-mail :)

WE ARE ACCEPTING MEMBERS FOR OUR GAME DESIGN CREW. :) We are overwhelmed with how much editing and creating that has to be done, so any help, feedback, or anything would be appreciated!


Love all of you guys as fellow MK fans and brothers and sisters. You guys are amazing in your support already!
 
Sorry man, but I have absolutely no knowledge about anything... All I can do is feedback, sugestions, and be a beta tester.
 
I like it, but you could add more pillars and other stuff

Yeah, the actual Beetle Lair only has two center pillars like this but I was thinking the same thing. I may add my own twist on it, since two pillars to me doesn't seem like enough either.

Thanks for the early critique man :)

EDIT:

Something like this? Edited the beetles a little.

 
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Yeah, the actual Beetle Lair only has two center pillars like this but I was thinking the same thing. I may add my own twist on it, since two pillars to me doesn't seem like enough either.

Thanks for the early critique man :)

EDIT:

Something like this? Edited the beetles a little.


Yeah, I think it´s way better.
 
I watched the video without sound, and I have a question. Do you use voice effects on the game? EX: When Scorpion uses spear the player hear "GET OVER HERE!!"
 
I watched the video without sound, and I have a question. Do you use voice effects on the game? EX: When Scorpion uses spear the player hear "GET OVER HERE!!"

If you watched it without sound you're missing out bro! :o watch it with sound if possible. YES. Scorpion yells get over here, Liu Kang yells gibberish, and so does Raiden on his electric fly. All the sounds are there :)
 
I watched the video without sound, and I have a question. Do you use voice effects on the game? EX: When Scorpion uses spear the player hear "GET OVER HERE!!"

If you watched it without sound you're missing out bro! :o watch it with sound if possible. YES. Scorpion yells get over here, Liu Kang yells gibberish, and so does Raiden on his electric fly. All the sounds are there :)
 
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