MKD Smoke

Duder...man, this one's an improvement to your other one, but it's still not a good sprite.
His mask is pretty much the same color all around, so it looks flat,
Then you outlined the arms and just grayscaled the arms and made them into chips, bad idea
There's also some parts of his gauntlets hanging out.
Plus the smoke in his chest are is horrible, you can still see some of the original shirt under the smoke.
Also, back on the arms...You have it to where the smoke is fitted inside of the black outline, which is bad. Smoke's arms are just like puffs of smoke that don't make a -perfect- arm, just the generall shape of one.
4/10.
 
It's better than you're noob, and looks like it took more effort. Everything sapphire said applies basically. But it's ok so +1 for effort.
 
The mask doesn't really fit the body as far as texturing goes, on top of that it looks kind of Shredder-esque (TMNT) still good initiative :D
 
^Dude that is from MK:D not TMNT. That is how Smoke always looks in human form in 3D.

Anyway I thought it was ok. 6/10 Not the best but not a bad job.
 
its o.k... it seems like it was easy to do, but 30- minutes? no offence but looks more like a 5 minute job. *giggle* 5 minute job..
ANYway it looks like you just used a smoke sprite, erased some parts, and drew some stuff
ima be honest, man. 5/10.
 
well i put some effort into this puppy and thanks for the karma, KORE! i think my upcoming fake of the 2 kombatants(n00b/sm0ke) wont be that great, but it'll be worth the try for karma. i know it kinda sucks, but this is my second custom render sprite.
 
it sure is. when i finished the n00b, i realized it was a piece of crap. but now i know that this is so much batter. thanks for the great reviews.
 
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