Help With A Drawing

[locustlx]

My friend made this drawing and he needs some help on if he should add anything to it. The Pic is right here:

He asked for my help and I couldn't find anything wrong, maybe Angel can help

 

[Immortal Reaver]

Maybe a hole in the wall that he punched through.

 

[K1LLKANO]

Or a dead hooker on the floor :shock:

Improvements could be made, more wrinkles at the bottome of his shirt. The way he's leaning forward, the bottom of the shirt should be a bit darker than the top as well. The pillow is a bit flat looking and the gun doesn't stand out much either, nor does the shell. For a suit, the sleeves are too skinny and his forearms are too long. The seem at the shoulder is too far down and angled poorly.

Stuff to add, maybe a dresser or something for a wall dressing other than pictures. A doornob would be cool.

thats all I got. This isn't my favorite style and I can't do anything in pen myself so i can give him props for that.

Thanks for forgetting about me as a knowledgable source for art criticism too :roll:

 

[Gororules]

I think it's good plain like that, only thing I think might be nice is a phone on the ground that isn't hung up. chord phone otherwise it's not as obvious.