what's your opinion about this pic?

ah sexy semi nude women characters always look cool...the pic looks cool though(i cant draw for fudge so my opinion doesent realy count)..the only thing i can see wrong is her foot....looks like shes got a twisted ankle :(
 
on the left side her "V" line seems to end on her leg considering her whole "crotch area" lol is shown on the right. decent drawing tho, better then I can do
 
I see another problem, the head is too big. Generally, the shape of the body shows you have some idea of the shape of the body, but everything is off. Her hadns are two different sizes and her neck is too thick. Slimmer necks look better on a female character. A little more shaping to the arms could have been done. She looks like she has no mucles there.

Not bad.

6/10.
 
Thanks!!
well, the head is big and the hand that is closed is a little bit bigger.. i think that the neck is too thick because the head is too big.. as for the foot, i made her like she was flying or levitating, but it seems that it didn't work very well, next time i'll put her on the ground!! :D
but i didn't understand what Gororules meant.. :? something wrong with the legs??
well, I want to thank you all!! thanks to you i can draw better next time!! :D :D :D
 
To me, it looks like the torso area is a bit too long. I think the breasts sagging like they are, and then trying to give her a full stomach perpetuates this. Also, the hips seem a bit too low which extends the torso as well.

Her right leg is too thick, pushing out her drape (or whatever that is) too far.

Her arms are very anorexic looking.

Overall, it's not a bad job. Too bad the body far outshines the face in looks though.
 
scorpion'sting said:
Thanks!!
well, the head is big and the hand that is closed is a little bit bigger.. i think that the neck is too thick because the head is too big.. as for the foot, i made her like she was flying or levitating, but it seems that it didn't work very well, next time i'll put her on the ground!! :D
but i didn't understand what Gororules meant.. :? something wrong with the legs??
well, I want to thank you all!! thanks to you i can draw better next time!! :D :D :D
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I have some advice you might be able to use.

If you make her leviatating I suggest you give her a slight meditation look about her. Unless she is moving. But generally, if she is leviatating and not moving it generally would be better. It would give her a more enlightened appearance. Perhaps close/half-close her eyes to give her a 'myserteious' or 'sexy' (depending how you draw it) glace.

If you do her in the same position, make her head face upwards perhaps to make it look like she is glacing to the heavens.

Some work on the clothes, make them more flowy/wavey. Same with her hair, which should in thoery flow in the same direction as her clothes.
 
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