Shao Kahn's Rage

You still have missing pixels. They aren't that hard to fill in. Just select the area that disappeared when you pasted it in and refill them.

Also, Khan's arrow looks like it is in front of Cage. You should paste cage in after the arrow to get the right effect.

You should have also used MK2 Kung Lao. That way you could have done the after math of Scorpion's spear as Kung Lao's hat slice fatality.

Not a single shadow in the entire pic, when numerous posts have been submitted to show how to them easily.

The names in the health bars also move around from frame to frame :?

Also, you're blood has no texture which makes it look flat and liquid ass like.

I can see some improvement from your other attempts, but not much. And the story, while it flows well this time, is still lacking.

Thats my input, no grading because I don't think I need to bother after everything I've typed.
 
Opps! I made a big big big typo! When Liu Kang went over Scorpion he is still in front of him after that :oops:
My bad............ :oops:
Damnit..........I think i was too sleeppy or soemthing......
 
im digging this story more now.... dont disappoint me! it seems everytime i gain faith in your story you trash the F&%$ out of it. :wink: :) not trying to be a dick, but im just saying it seems like you have your high points and low points.
 
The story was nice, but then the cell with the upsidedown Kahn and Scorps threw me... You lost the flow of the story upon reaching that cell. Slow your stories down a noutch, don't rush them. If a story takes 20 cells and 5 pages to do, then do it like that. But like I said nice start.

I would have made the Kahn bit right at the start a few cells longer. Perhaps the start would be the same with Liu and co.

Can't think of anything else no someone else hasn't said.

I'm not gonna rate this because its difficult to think of what rating it would be. :?
 
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