DO YOU NOT KNOW?!Angel said:2/10... No office... But the story is hard to follow and the background is still lame... In fact you stil lhaven't aot A background!
If the storyline had ben smoother... And the story actually funny... I might have raised this to 4/10... ¬_¬'
Yeah I'm in a generious mood aren't I?
Final Night said:Usually when they do those "previews" too they ask for some feedback concerning what they've seen thus far... I think I'm confused about how Shang Tsung would've lost his morphing powers. If you're planning on explaining that (or already have in one of the other installments) then great, if you haven't or weren't planning on it then it might help to explain it.
If you remember in the past ones I did, Some Reptiles died. Mileena died. I just added Baraka for fun. Actually, Shang Tsung lost his morphing powers because he revived Milleena. Shang killing Shao Kahn didn't effect Millenna at all. Shang revived her in one of the past Fighting Realm series. But really, What do you guys think happened to the Real Smoke? And why did Shang Tsung call Robo Smoke "Bro?"KoRoneR said:... dude. what the hell does the reptile milleena baraka thing have to do with the story?
Finally someone who thinks the same as I about this.Ethix said:I still can't believe you haven't evolved past this whole crappy white background thing. If you're using MSpaint, it's comendable that you're trying to make a comic out of it, but your story makes no sense. It's just random words thrown on text that somehow make an unfunny sentence. It isn't impossible to make stuff in MSPaint that look good, just look at Gororules' stuff it's really good for MSPaint. 2/10.
Prophet will hopefully remember to put the background as the Amory.Angel said:Finally someone who thinks the same as I about this.Ethix said:I still can't believe you haven't evolved past this whole crappy white background thing. If you're using MSpaint, it's comendable that you're trying to make a comic out of it, but your story makes no sense. It's just random words thrown on text that somehow make an unfunny sentence. It isn't impossible to make stuff in MSPaint that look good, just look at Gororules' stuff it's really good for MSPaint. 2/10.![]()
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