man... ive seen some damn good fakes on here.. completely original ones. and im not trying to shit on your work, but when all youre doing is taking effects from existing games and putting them together, on a white background, i dont know, it's just not entertaining me. plus i used to do the same thing on a white sheet of paper when i was in grammar school, but i was drawing the stuff.
on the other hand i can't totally get down on you for wanting to post your work on here, cuz it must have been fun for you and that's how i feel about my art. and im not trying to call my self a master by any means, so i'd say by some token u and i aren't that different. but i try to give my art an original nuance with each piece. even if it's in a small way, so i guess my advice here is, even if you're using old effects on a white background, use your imagination and try to give us something we haven't seen before. ... wow i ramble way too much.
also if you change stryker from cop to pig i think you'll have something, lol.