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Erm... Oh nuts... This may take a while to write...
Face:
-You fell into the trap that most people do... The nose shape is drawn out. Don't draw the whole nose, just the nosterals and perhaps suggestion as to the shape of the end with
ONE shortist line.
-eyes don't match height.
-Face is cocked at a wierd angle.
-Mouth doesn't even look close to a good enough shape...
-He has no neck
-Hair... Looks okay for a beginner attempt... But not okay for building up the shape of his head.
Body:
-Shoulders aren't wide enough.
-Doesn't look buff enough.
-good note... The top of the chest is about the right preportation... You began to loose that at the waist.
-The armour is not semetical (spelling?) enough. Good(ish) attempt at the armour overall but there is no wrapping to make it look like it curves around the body.
-Shoulder armour doesn't match each side. One sticks up further then the other.
Waist:
-Really lost it here. Everything is simply misdrawn.
-That cloth over the groin area has no suggestions as to how the material lies.
-The cloths curves on one side don't match it if there aren't any folds and you have two curved areas folding into each other.
Legs:
-Badly shaped from one end to the other.
-Good point... You tried angling the two legs and the effect wasn't half decent a attempt. The right leg could of been angled a little more to the left though...
-Wrap the armour around the leg, not just put it there.
Arms:
-Well overall apart from the lengths not being identical and the forarms not correct... This wasn't too bad an attempt.
-The hands? Well the fingers needed to be longer but they aren't too bad.
-Once again no armou wrapping around the body, just a straight drawn (flat) attempt.
Decs:
-Those flags thingys aren't great... The left one doesn't match the right one for the pole bits width. the makes on them aren't curved to look like they at a part of the detail of the flags... Their just straight lines.
Okay. I got lazy and just listed everything. Sorry.
I give you... 4/10. :?
You have some good points... So its not a total failure this picture. ou've got a lot of bad points though to work out.
Oh and anyone giving this guys bad marks... I'd like to see some of you guys stick a drawing up here for once... Some of you have... Many of you haven't. Those that haven't should put some up some time... Cause I'd love to see if your any better really. :roll:
