Behind The Mask 2

Zombie_Loser_Kang

Zombie_Loser_Kang

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finally here. click da picture to see da comic i made. its really only about Sub-Zero and Scorpion and some stolen lines i keep on taking from The Real Mortal Kombat for some reason. i dunno i just like doing it. well.......i hope u enjoy this one.
*EDIT* i found a typo here! i didnt spell "whether" right. :lol: oh well.....i didnt read over it before i posted :lol:
 
Zombie_Loser_Kang said:
*EDIT* i found a typo here! i didnt spell "whether" right. :lol: oh well.....i didnt read over it before i posted :lol:
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you did'nt spell the right either (da?)
 
This isn't mugh better then anything Luckman5000 could produce. I can't follow it and it looks scruffy.

I'm harsh, I know. 6/10.

Redo this and organise it more, make the whole thing flow better so its easy to know whats going on. Then I'll give a better rating.
 
Angel said:
This isn't much better then anything Luckman5000 could produce. I can't follow it and it looks scruffy.

I'm harsh, I know. 6/10.

Redo this and organise it more, make the whole thing flow better so its easy to know whats going on. Then I'll give a better rating.
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dont u see before the things they say there are some stuff like (1), (2), (3) and other stuff. thats the order they are supposed to be in.
 
Some advice. Keep everything reading left to right, even speech bubbles. Because its not obivous what order their in. Really it makes it look ametuer and crap the way you've done it.
 
Angel said:
Some advice. Keep everything reading left to right, even speech bubbles. Because its not obivous what order their in. Really it makes it look ametuer and crap the way you've done it.
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o sry i didnt mean to piss u off even though this is my second time to do a comic of a crappy story i wanted to make.
 
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