Behind The Mask 1

Zombie_Loser_Kang

Zombie_Loser_Kang

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as luckman says: "please click on the picture!"
i really dont care if u like it or not. its my first comic and i made lots of mistakes luckman did.
 
its my first comic and i made lots of mistakes luckman did.
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Why're you trying to excuse your comic by comparing it to Luckman's work?

But, since I feel like giving some constructive critisism, make your comics so that you can read it left-to-right. I found this difficult to follow for that very reason.

If I had to rate it, I'd give it around a 5/10. Backgrounds are good, and the sprites look alright, but still room for improvement (add shadows).
 
i like it. it makes more sense than some of luckmans. but it's still a little hard to follow. quite funny though. keep rollin with it.
 
dude, you need to put the speech bubbles in order as to when it's being said. there was a couple of times, like when kabal asked reptile how he was alive, he seemed to reply before it was said. also try and make it easier to follow
 
yeah.....to bad i cant add shadows and i dont think i will. sry for u guys who wanted me to put stupid shadows. o yeah i been working on Behind The Mask 2 since i posted Behind The Mask 1. and its almost finished. just wait a little more.
 
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