Vital, for dark stuff you should use the senses a lot and use the atmosphere.
eg. "As I strolled through the dark, decrepit forest I felt a sharp force of static scurry along the tips of my neck hairs. The scent of damp lingered through the atmosphere as I cautiously swam through the sea of lifeless leaves submerging my feet in their corpses."
some shit like that.
nigguh, nigguh.
On errthang i love, i put you in the dirt nigguh.
My bad homie lol
ITs a nice idea. How come you don't write Kzaoo
No offense, but if this is really going to be setting, then write me out of the ****ing story :laugh:It's going to be set during a school camping trip, The TRMK Mods will be the teachers.
No offense, but if this is really going to be setting, then write me out of the ****ing story :laugh:
And the idea of us being stranded or in a remote location or something just makes me cringe
Why not take a few pages from Saw or something and put us all in situations where we have find our own way out of numerous situations without being killed/mutilated