What do you think about this plot?

GetOverHereDude

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I'm going to write an MK fic, but I wanted to know if my plot was worth writing about. What do you think? Is it good or bad? State your opinion guys! This fanfic is about someone many of you make jokes about, yet never wrote about them. I believe I am the first one.

Okay here's the plot:

It is the year 2012. Shao Kahn is dead, killed by Raiden with the aid of the Elder Gods. Outworld, without a ruler, is in Chaos. 4 years have passed since the last election. The Shadow Monks will be hosting the 45th Annual Netherrealm Presidential Elections, with eight kandidates. Mileena, being the daughter of Shao Kahn, is the most logical choice. But others disagree. Quan Chi, Goro, Kintaro, Noob, Baraka, Shang Tsung, and Sindel are all competing for president. On the 15th of November 2012, elections will be held. The 8 kombatants will have to fight each other in an all-out brawl. Instead of killing, the objective is to see who had the most worthy performance.

However, the kandidate in the most danger is Baraka Obama. There are two groups in the Elections; the Demolicrats and the Reapublicans. The Tarkatan Chief is the ONLY kandidate siding with the Demolicrats, while the rest of them are Reapublicans. There is a good chance of every other kandidate teaming up on him, then turning against each other. Although ashamed, he sought out Raiden's wisdom to consult with the Thunder God. With Raiden's advice, Baraka Obama will hopefully win the elections, but not until promising Raiden never to attack Earthrealm again.

So how was it? Good or bad? Anyway, thanks for your opinion!
 
Yeah, I agree, the general idea is good, but it could do without the politics, lol, and the Baraka Obama bit has been done too many times.

Still, not bad, regardless =)
 
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