True beauty - a Vega fanfic

[Kzaoo]

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[Shirayuki Mizore]

Lol reminds me of Wesker and Hitler :laugh:

Gotta create that superior race.

Chun Li and Vega rape scene please

:rofl:

Nah but for real, nice work.

 

[Kzaoo]

I was thinking Hitler when I wrote this

Spoiler:

i'm a closet nazi

 

[YungQ94]

Lord have mercy that was detailed and well written.

Also, for sound effects you might want to put them into Italics

 

[Kzaoo]

I was worried that it wasn't detailed enough, lol. I feel hella dumb because I forgot to describe the setting. If I remembered that it would have been better.

I should put it in italics but i'm lazy.

 

[Kzaoo]

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[YungQ94]

Piss colored ken trousers :rofl:

Damn, he, well damn that was quick. (BLOODY HIGH CLAW!)

 

[Kzaoo]

Next update should be soon. Tomorrow or Saturday maybe. If you have any (constructive) criticism, don't hesitate to post it; I need it.

 

[Kzaoo]

Deleted .

 

[YungQ94]

Not bad but that was just the Vegetables
Time to give us the meat of this story :twisted:

 

[Kzaoo]

Oh you will recieve the meat. You will :twisted:

 

[YungQ94]

I got my fork and knife and mouth read

 

[Shirayuki Mizore]

Lmao, I hope Kzaoo doesn't **** up his grammar in this fic like Yung has been doing recently.

 

[YungQ94]

Oh ok, at least people read my fic

 

[Shirayuki Mizore]

No, stupid.

I got my fork and knife and mouth read

 

[YungQ94]

Yeah so I missed a "y" so fvcking what?
Tell you what, when and if I drop out of college then you can correct me on my grammar.

 

[Shirayuki Mizore]

You didn't e any to Kenny?

You've been slippin' up big time.

You're demoted to AMES level of grammar. Watch yourself or you might be demoted to the D Dog level.

 

[YungQ94]

Oh please, no way in hell anyone can be on his level

 

[Shirayuki Mizore]

I don't know, you're kind of pushing it.

I'll forgive you though. I always will.

Even though a part of my brain wants you dead.

<3

 

[Kzaoo]

i dont never make an mistake with grammar: