YungQ94 Active member May 31, 2012 #4 What the- well let's see. This is a comedy right? Comedy should be lengthier. Also the "jokes" aren't delivered well. Like I couldn't feel Jade or Kitana's reaction when they we're knocked out. It would have been funnier if you described their reactions. Just a tip.
What the- well let's see. This is a comedy right? Comedy should be lengthier. Also the "jokes" aren't delivered well. Like I couldn't feel Jade or Kitana's reaction when they we're knocked out. It would have been funnier if you described their reactions. Just a tip.
YungQ94 Active member May 31, 2012 #6 Lol too lazy to edit. And hell yes much better :top: keep up the good work
Acid Puke New member Jun 1, 2012 #7 Sorry, I'm hibernating. Before I do that though, I have to hide all evidence of the Saurian race.
