Rebuilding Hsu Hao

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The hatred Hsu Hao receives is 100% unwarranted. I propose a hotass MK erotica story to redeem him in your eyes. Prepare yourselves, your pants will be soaked.
EDIT: All of the above was written before I started the story :laugh:

Here is some great music that meshes perfectly with the story:



After the fall of the Black Dragon, caused by Kano's capture in Outworld and Kabal's abandonment, Kano sought refuge in China. For from the Special Force's eagle eyes. He began an underground fighting circuit in an attempt to regain the Black Dragon's lost pride.

Many warriors; young, old, rich and poor fought under the promise of immense riches, but all failed when they came face to face with Kano himself. He was making money and finding recruits for the Black Dragon's revival.

Everything was going perfectly for Kano, until a curse walked into his life, in the form of a young Mongolian man. This man said he had no name, saying only that he was sent by God himself.

Kano shook off this freak's strange words, thinking he would die quickly in the fights.
The man was an animal, a controlled rage fueled his fights. Kano noticed a strange thing about this fighter, he would ruthlessly slaughter those he saw wicked; thieves, murderers and other deviants.

But spared those who, he thought, fought for righteous causes; family debts, necessity and things of the sort. Fearing he was no match for this man and feeling he had enough money/recruits to successfully revive the Black Dragon, Kano disbanded the tournament when it was their time to fight.

Instead he rewarded the man the place of second in command of the Black Dragon. A title once worn by Kabal, now belonged to Hsu Hao. The name was given to him by Kano, it meant Rushed Roar. He thought it fit his fighting style perfectly.

A few years years passed since then. Kano convinced Hsu Hao that the Black Dragon were liberators, heroes who were dedicated to dismantling all Western influence over China. Hsu Hao supported this idea greatly.

But on a special mission, Hsu Hao's dedication was tested.


The Special Forces were weakened by the loss of Jax, Kano felt as if the final nail needed to be slammed into their coffin.


With Johnny Cage in Seido, Kano and Hsu Hao traveled to Sonya Blade's home. As they snuck in, Kano whispered to Hsu Hao "Take of the b!tch, the brat is mine". Hao couldn't control his anger, he loudly questioned Kano as to how the death of a child would help their cause.


Sonya rushed down stairs and attacked the intruder, not noticing Kano who was hidden from her view. Kano quickly made his way to the child's room to complete the grim task. Hsu Hao tried to explain to Sonya what was happening, but couldn't due to her onslaught of attacks.

When Kano was finished, he left Hsu to die at the hands of Sonya. Hao broke free of her grasp and knocked her out with one mighty clap of his hands.


Kano would pay for this most heinous of treacheries, Hsu Hao would make sure of it.


Though Kano made it back to Black Dragon headquarters days before Hsu Hao did, Hsu Hao was not far behind. He found Kano unguarded in the war room. Hsu crept up on him and shoved the knife given to him by Kano, right through the back of his neck.

As he fell to the ground, Hao made a horrid realization, the man was not Kano. It was Jarek, bound and gagged wearing Kano's garbs. Kano appeared behind him, along with a plethora of Black Dragon soldiers.

A rage that Hsu Hao had not felt for years returned. He tore through their ranks. As he stood over Kano's mangled body, he recanted the quote of a great and powerful man

“I am the punishment of God...If you had not committed great sins, God would not have sent a punishment like me upon you.”

It was there Hsu Hao revealed his true identity, when Kano brought sin and corruption to a peaceful Mongolian village, Ghengis Kahn's soul ascended from the Netherrealm and took the form of a nameless man to bring a stop to Kano's dark ways. Gaining Kano's trust was only to make his deception even more painful


But Kano was spared, Hsu Hao knew the father of the child Kano slew would bring an unimaginable pain to him when the time came.

Unfortunately, Hsu Hao was a primary factor in the child's death. Before he can find peace in the afterlife, he must atone for his sins. He forms the Red Dragon clan. A clan dedicated to the ancient nomadic ways of the Mongolians.

They traveled the lands, uprooting all they saw unfit for their lands.






Th-t-th-tha-th-thats all folks!
When I came up for the idea of a rebuilding for him I was like :)
But when I was writing it I was like -_-


This guy is ****ing tough, so go easy on me ;)
 
Wow this is really well done bro, loved the music as well. and Holy Crap!!! Genghis Kahn coming back to life is totally bad ass! Great Job bro! I might use this if u dont mind in my Mk 11 story when i get time to write.

I too feel that the hate that he gets is unwarranted. Every character in Mk (post Mk3 or pre MK3) has a scope for improvement and I think all characters must be given an equal chance. I personally liked Hsu Hao cause he was unique in MK DA. I liked his Thunder clap special move and his sun moon weapon. Hope he gets another chance :(.
 
Wow this is really well done bro, loved the music as well. and Holy Crap!!! Genghis Kahn coming back to life is totally bad ass! Great Job bro! I might use this if u dont mind in my Mk 11 story when i get time to write.

I too feel that the hate that he gets is unwarranted. Every character in Mk (post Mk3 or pre MK3) has a scope for improvement and I think all characters must be given an equal chance. I personally liked Hsu Hao cause he was unique in MK DA. I liked his Thunder clap special move and his sun moon weapon. Hope he gets another chance :(.

Glad you liked it :)


I hope he's coming back, but I severely doubt it.
 
OK, as an avid Hsu Hao hater, I gotta say... this version is pretty damn awesome. Seriously, I like this version a lot. Not only does it not include Mavado, I love the Gengis Khan reincarnation/punishment of God story you had goin' on. Gotta give you props (I'd give you rep but I'm on my phone) for the fact you were able to step up the plate and make even the dreaded Hsu Hao likeable, even if obviously he'll never come happen considering how much NRS hates Hsu Hao. I read some of your other ideas in this thread, and I gotta say you're excellent at rebuilding questionable characters.

I still hate Hsu Hao, but I guess he had some potential storywise that I couldn't see.
 
Very impressive man. I don't know if you have artistic abilities but if you could get someone to completely redesign his look and post it with this story, you would be set. This is like a chris nolan reboot right here and I love the emotion behind the characters.
 
OK, as an avid Hsu Hao hater, I gotta say... this version is pretty damn awesome. Seriously, I like this version a lot. Not only does it not include Mavado, I love the Gengis Khan reincarnation/punishment of God story you had goin' on. Gotta give you props (I'd give you rep but I'm on my phone) for the fact you were able to step up the plate and make even the dreaded Hsu Hao likeable, even if obviously he'll never come happen considering how much NRS hates Hsu Hao. I read some of your other ideas in this thread, and I gotta say you're excellent at rebuilding questionable characters.

I still hate Hsu Hao, but I guess he had some potential storywise that I couldn't see.


Thank you for your positive feedback :)



I think it was your comments in the Hsu Hao thread that gave me the idea for this.
I tried researching things on him to expand on lesser known aspects of his story, I found nothing.
This guy is bland as **** :laugh:



nice try,

but April Fools was months ago



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I don't understand.

You do know this is fan-fiction right?
 
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I don't understand.

You do know this is fan-fiction right?

I was just stating how Hsu Hao, and a serious discussion dont go together well lol

but I will admit, this is a very well thought out idea. If NRS had you working for them, then maybe those shit characters could actually turn out pretty cool. People have been saying that these characters should get a chance, and you seem to have the best ideas out of everybody. So keep up the good work dude.

maybe you could try to reimagine Jarek next. Make sure you scrap his original look though, cause he's always looked like a Redneck Alladin.
 
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maybe you could try to reimagine Jarek next. Make sure you scrap his original look though, cause he's always looked like a Redneck Alladin.

I don't think there are any redeeming qualities about Jarek, hence why I killed him off in this story :)
 
Bro, this is by far one of my fave stories out of all the other stories you made!!!
I honestly did not see the spirit of Genghis Kahn coming!!!! Just one question though, Im just a little confused when Kano killed the child...was that Sonya's child?
Another awesome origin story bro, you have deffinitely shed light on Hsu Hao!!!!
Again, Well Done!!!!! :) :) :)
 
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Thank you Tenkai.
Haven't seen you around lately :(


But yes, the child is Sonya and Johnny's.
Glad you liked it :)
 
Like I have sid many times. This new engine can make any kharacter much more fun to play as now. I believe alot of kharacters deserve another shot with this engine.
 
Thank you Tenkai.
Haven't seen you around lately :(


But yes, the child is Sonya and Johnny's.
Glad you liked it :)

Sorry bro, Ive been ridiculously busy with university courses and other things as well.
But yes an awesome story my friend and I like the idea of Sonya's and Johnny's child ;)
 
Sorry to burst your bubble bro, but Ed Boon stated in either an interview or through his twitter (I can't remember) that Hsu Hao WOULD NOT be making a come back to the series. Albeit your love for him and that story is cool (bro), characters like him, Bo'Rai Cho and Chameleon will not be making a return to the series. -.-
 
Sorry to burst your bubble bro, but Ed Boon stated in either an interview or through his twitter (I can't remember) that Hsu Hao WOULD NOT be making a come back to the series. Albeit your love for him and that story is cool (bro), characters like him, Bo'Rai Cho and Chameleon will not be making a return to the series. -.-

Buddy, b,b,b,lp intention here was just to feature a story for fun, its not like we expect any of our stories to actually be featured in an MK game, so give the guy a break...No hard feelins man :)
 
Hsu Hao = Young Kim Jong-il

I see people refer to him as the Asian Hitler.

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Hsu Hao makes me think offensive thoughts that I refuse to post in a public forum. Maybe a steamy Hsu Hao x Mavado fic would change my mind.

Probably not.
 
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