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Very nice. The only advice I have is to use a darker tan, or gently apply black, to the areas that would be shaded to give it a more 3d look. Oh, and not using ruled paper 8)
 
yes, i do think that i should shade my drawings to make them better. but its so hard for me to motivate myself to spend a long time on one drawing. i try to crank out as much art, poetry, and prose as i possibly can at a quick rate, because all of this is done in my scrapbook, i have many of them and im trying to actually get a whole series going, kind of like an encyclopedia of me. thats also the reason for the ruled paper. i am always personaly disappointed in my work though......... it's never what i want it to look like.

i do appreciate the help though, K1ll. with your advice i may eventually go back and redo sheeva. .....more art to come!
 
Perhaps the outline could do with being bolder, the smudge marks also ruin this. Maybe you shouldn't press so hard with the pencil so it rubs out easier. Also the pose is nice, but she looks off balanced, like she could fall over at any minute.

Otherwise nice. Like I said though, could do with a more balanced pose and bolder lines.
 
http://img193.exs.cx/img193/236/soulvasq8wa.jpg

here is one of my own character concepts. his feet look off though.

SOULVASQ

height:6'2" weight:200lbs

allies:baraka, goro, shang tsung foes:raiden, dragon king, quan chi

fighting styles: slayer, stalker, fire pike

bio: when shang t'sung was destroyed by raidens blast, soulvasq's soul returned to the corpse t'sung had left many years ago. in his current undead state soulvasq is more dangerous than when first fell in battle. and now still under the influence of the sorcerers touch, he vows to vanquish all of tsungs rivals
 
Hrmm...don't like it one bit :? Can't find a thing I do like about it, except maybe the hole in his chest, but that stance just seems retarded if it's supposed to be an MK character.

Sorry for the lack of constructive criticism on this one, but I couldn't think where to start /shrug
 
eh........ i guess ya can't win em all. but thats not meant to be a fighting stance, if thats what you mean. ill be the first to admit that i F'ed that up. but to be honest, the rest of my characters aren't much better where thats concerned
 
Its not too bad, I've seen worst.

Maybe it deserves its own story line sepearate from current ones. A little work here and there, mainly giving the body a better shape. I suggest you think about maybe sticking tattos on his chest and head. Or at least give him a madellion around his neck. Maybe even a gem stuck on his forehead... Or perhaps a few spikes sticking out of him in his arms or something. Or a few bits of tore rags wraped around him... Also maybe you should use a darker green... :?

My suggestions, all I can think up...
 
Erm I don't quite understand you...

www.photobucket.com

If you just mean put something in a post, I know you can upload stuff into this site. Maybe someone else can help you upload pics in a actual post.
 
Pic 1: 7/10

Pic 2: 5/10

P.S. The second one, your SOULVASQ, is great, but try adding a little more ideas to him and you could have a winner.
 
Carnivore said:
i think you forgot something! sheeva has 4 boobs!
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How do you know, we've only ever seen the old sheeva, which featur only two. Until Goro's new appearance their race only ever had one set anyway.
 
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