My poems

bad10 · Feb 1, 2012

As I feel the breeze,
I watch as it moves the trees,
Wind is a great power,
I watch as it bows plants and flowers,

YungQ94 · Feb 1, 2012

So you gonna finish the poem or is that it?

Toxic · Feb 1, 2012

You guys do realize that poems don't need multiple stanzas, right? Some of the most famous poetry out there is only a few words long.

YungQ94 · Feb 1, 2012

Really now?
I knew that stanzas dont have to be long but hey whatever people call art

Havok · Feb 1, 2012

I approve of this thread

Young Mage · Feb 2, 2012

Old, Trite, and Cliched
Mundane, old imagery
Try again; harder

Short haiku by Mage.

pimppaperclip · Feb 2, 2012

Roses are Letters
Violets are monkeys
This poem makes no sense
Refrigerator

Toxic · Feb 2, 2012

Young Mage said:
Old, Trite, and Cliched
Mundane, old imagery
Try again; harder

Short haiku by Mage.

My brief opinion
Is really quite similar
It needs more work; lots