my first fake!

Carnivore

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Hey this is my first fake, its not done yet, i plan on adding a roof with lots of windows and frozen water with a planet shining through a window, its a wip, if you think its bad i will not post the final image.

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Well...firstly, I'd put the gun in Scorpion's hand, not in front of it. I do like the background, and the blood on Reptile looks alright...I'm just not digging the gun in general.

Original, though.

6/10

Edit: I forgot to mention, don't forget to add shadows. I guarentee it will look a lot better if you add them.
 
Oh yeah, i forgot to add the shadows and put the gun in his hand, i compleatly forgot that, thanks for pointing it out.
 
My pleasure. I've seen a lot of fakes, and for some reason, everyone forgets the shadows, and it always gets pointed out. Can't wait to see the finished product.
 
i think its pretty funny, different from the traditional fakes everyone does. i noticed something else wrong though, reptile's blood, it's supposed to be green. other than that good work
 
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