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iViTal

iViTal

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So recently i've noticed that alot of people stoped writing Fan-Fics and reading MK:HS and MK:Logic inspired me to write my own series called MK.inc. So this story revolves around mileena, She is a 4 year College graduate who has a Bachelors degree in marketing at the age of 22. She is a intern for one of the biggest Corporations to sell MK Merchindice.
Note: This is my first Fan Fic.. dont be to harsh :L
*We see a Clock with the time of 7:20 PM on a Small Dressor right next to a bed with a Huge lump on the far right side of the bed.*
AlarmClock: BEEP!! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!
*She Turns alarm clock off*
Mileena: -Soft Yawn- 7:20.. Guess its time to get up.
*She hops out of bed, Walking into her small Bathroom about 5 steps away, 15 Minutes later a Beutiful young woman emerges from the bathroom*
Mileena: (Sounds tired, But fully awake) 7:35.. I have a good 20 Minutes to waste.
*She walks into a Small kitchen, And turns on a Coffee maker. Suddenly her phone rings*
Mileena: hello?
*Its Sindel*
Sindel:(Excited) Good Morining! Ready for your first day?
Mileena: I guess.. Hope Dad deosnt work me to hard <_<
Sindel: Of course he's not, I made sure of that last night
Mileena: I really don't want to know about your sexual life with my dad..
Sindel: You know i didnt mean it like that, Whats are your plans when you get a full job at MK.Inc?
Mileena: Mom, Im a intern.. Making barley above minimum wage. If im lucky enou---
Sindel: Stop talking negative, im sure you will be your father's secratary one day. Trust me.
Mileena: If you say so...
*The phone beeps, Another caller is on the line... Its Hanzo(Scorpion :D)*
Sindel: I kn--
Mileena: Can i call you back.. Hanzo calling me.
Sindel: Yea.. Just have a great day and don't forget to call your sister. Love ya'
Mileena: Love you to, Bye.
*Answers the other line*
Hanzo: Sup Smexy.
Mileena: Smexy? where did you find that word....
Hanzo: idk just heard some one say it and i liked it, and thats what you are.
Mileena: -Smirks- W/e, i start my first day at MK.inc today! im some-what scared but excited at the same time!
Hanzo: Dont be... well be excited.. But no scared you have nother to fear. Trust me.
Mileena: (smiles) Mmmk. I guess i will Talk to you later.
Hanzo: Yea... love you..
Mileena: I love you to. later.
*She hangs up, And glances at the clock its 7:45*
Mileena: (Annoyed) not going to have time to drink my coffee..
*She turns the Coffe machine off and grabs her keys on the counter, She walks into a small garage parked inside is a nice 2011 Shellby mustang GT*
*She drives to MK.inc.. Its a Medium size Building With letters MK in the middle of the Building. She walks in and is Kindly greeted by a young man in a blue polo dress shirt and Kahki pants*
Bi-Han: You must be mileena?
Mileena: Yes, im the new intern here at Mk.inn--
Bi-Han: (Laughs) You dont have to explain your self, we all know who you are and are glad to have you part of the team here and MK.inc.
Mileena: [Wonder what his name is? Wow i feel dumb name tag right there....] Thank you Mr.. uhhh.. *Looks at his name tag* Han? I guess...
Bi-Han: Here at MK.inc we call each other by there first name, Your father want us employees to have a personal relationship.
Mileena: soooo my father promotes sex between his employees... wow.
Bi-Han: (Laughs) No.. Silly, he did tell me you had a great sense of humor and im starting to belive that. -Looks at watch- Oh! wow i should be geting you to your work station..
Mileena: mmk. Lead the way Han.. Can i just call you that?
Han: What ever floats your boat. Milly..
*The two walk to a small elevator, Han presses floor 5*
Mileena:[How the hell did he know my Nick name? Well the people here are cool i guess this could be a epic job]
*The elevator stops and the 7th floor, The two walk out to a office like setting. with individual Computers and desks in a Huge room.*
Han: Ah. here she is. Sonya?
*Sonya turns around from her computer a Long blonde hair woman in a all Black Female business suit*
Sonya: Yes?
Han: Hey, this is your intern mileena. She is the Daughter of Shao.
Mileena: Hi. -Extends hand for a handshake-
*Sonya and mileena shakes hands.*
Han:(Trying to be funny) Don't work her to hard! ^_^
*Han walks away*
Sonya: He's probaly one of my favorite workers here at MK.inc. He's Full of vitality and allways have somthing positive to say.
Mileena: Yea.[Why did i agree...]
Sonya: Pull up a chair anywhere. -Points to a abandom work space- Right there no one is working there.
Mileena: Thank you.
*She grabs the chair and pulls it to sonya's works station*
Mileena:(Nervously) Do you need anything?..... uhh Sonya..
Sonya: Relax.. No one here is going to hurt you.. If they did your father would fire them on the spot. and you know that.
Mileena:-Smiles- Yeah, May i ask what made you want to work here?
Sonya: -Lets out a deep breath- Im a retired special forces soldier.. i know you've heard of them. after 20 somthing odd years of serving i was able to retire and im still geting piad for retirement but still i really dont like being inactive y'know.
Mileena: Kinda.. Just got my bachelour degree in marketing, then my father owns a company that sells MK. Merchandice. Put two and two togther and thats how im here.
Sonya: -Laughs- Smart girl. Lets see since we both like to be active and not being lazy. Lets get some work done.
Mileena: -Nods-
Sonya: Ok. These papers need to be sighned by the H.O.F.R for the aproval of our products to be sold in the Khaos realm, Listen carefully.
*Mileena Pays attention closely*
you want to take the elevator to the 8th floor. Follow the hallway, and take the first right turn and its the third room on the left side. Ok?
Mileena:[Wow thats alot to remeber] Ok. I will be back shortly.
*Mileena walks to the elevator*
Mileena:[Floor 8..] -She presses the number 8-
*waiting patiently*
Elevator: BING!
Mileena:[Ok... Follow the hallway.. Take the first right turn and the third door on the left side] -She Follows the instructions and she finds the room, It has a plate on the door that says H.O.F.R-
*She knocks on the door*
Muffled voice(But still understandable): Come in.
*Mileena opens the door to see a young man about 3 year older than mileena, He resembles Han alot*
Kuia-Liang: Hello. You must be the new intern here at mk.inc
Mileena: Yea, My father had to anounce it... Everyone knows about me and its my firsy day here.
Kuia-Liang: Yea, He announced it two days in a row. Now how can i help you?
Mileena: Oh! Sonya wanted me to give you some papers to sign.
*Gives Kuia liang the papers*
Kuia-Liang: Ah. I was expecting these, but not so soon.
Mileena: You resemble Han... alot. Cousin? Son?
Kuia-Liang: Younger brother. Alot of people say they dont see the resemblence, it doesnt bother me but still its cool for people to notice it.
Mileena: I know where your comming from, same way with me and kitana, Whats your name.. -Looks at name tag- Kuiii Lahngg, Kiasud Lahhngg? (Laughs) im terrible with names.
Kuia-liang: Just say Tundra. alot easier -Smiles-. Thanks for sending the papers by..
Mileena: No problem.
*She makes it back to sonya, She notice a Buff tall black male he is dressed in a white business shirt and red tie he is talking to sonya*
Sonya:(sexy voice) Last night was amazing..
Jax: Yea, Hope we can go out again, had a great time the Blue crab is the best sea food in town.
Sonya: No jax... after we had dinner.. -sigh-
Jax: Oh Oh!! yea.. (smiles) That was great also
Sonya: -laughs-
Mileena: [Wow.. im starting to believe what i said was true.. aslong as no one tries to touch me im ok..]
Sonya: Mileena.
Mileena: Yes?
Sonya: I would like for you to meet jax, He is a good friend of mines
Mileena:[ Friends have sex for fun? since when..]
We were in the same platoon in the special forces together. And we retired togother.
Mileena: (^_^ Face)Nice to meet you Jax.
Jax: Like wise, I've heard so much about you. Your father speaks of you everyday infact he wants me to show you around the building one day.
Mileena: That sound great[I don't want to walk around with a guy who could possibly rape me <_< ...really dad?].. Uhh sonya is there anything else i can do?
Jax: A hard worker i see, I can see you as the next C.E.O of MK.inc.
Mileena:[Really? wow.. people think that?] -Smiles-
Sonya: Yes... well no.. but yes. Your father wants to talk to you, Its 1:45 you get off at 2:15. He wants to talk to you.
Mileena: [FINALLY! Havent seen him in forever]-Excited- What floor and room?!
Sonya: -Laughs- Calm down. 10th Floor follow the hallway down, you cant miss it.
Mileena: Thanks! See you Love-- I mean guys tommorow.
Sonya and Jax: o_o
Sonya: [How the hell...]
Jax:[Did she know.. I want some shrimp and the blue crab again.. Yummm ^_^]
*She walks very excited to the Elevator, She presses the number 10. She waits unpatiently eager to see her father*
Elevator: Bing!
Mileena:-In amazement- [Wow the elevator stops on the room.. Wait.. She lied to me. w/e] *She walks around this huge room*
Kahn: I was expecting you.
Mileena: OMG! DADDY!!!
Kahn: Wow, You look so diffrent since you graduated highschool, im happy you came back home.
Mileena: Well of course, my degree in Marketing will help me more here than at a Toys R us in New york... in Earth realm.
Kahn:(Laughs) Buetiful like your mother, An have the brains of your dad.
Mileena:-Smiles-
Kahn: Well its 2:00, -whispers- Dont tell no one i let you out early mmk?
Mileena: (^_^) mmk.
 
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elevator: BING!
Mileena:[Needs elevator music]
*She steps out, and sees Han holding the door for her*
Han: Hope you had a great first day. See you tommorow. -Smiles-
Mileena: -Walks out the door- See you tommorow..
*She hops in her car,Drives home to her small apartment to see kItana's car parked out side*
Mileena: I was going to call you after i got inside..
Kitana: (sounds very happy) I know, But i couldnt wait to talk to you.. So many questions to ask..
Mileena: (Lies and sounds agravated) Im tired... im ready to rest and eat somthing.. can we talk about earthrealm another time.. The guys arent that great, School was hard AF..
Kitana:-Laughs- I get it, If you dont want to talk just say it. just wanted you to meet someone. Come out lui..
Mileena:[Lui? Lui Kang from trig?]
Kang: Hi classmate..
Kitana: y'know the day when me and mom visited you..
Mileena: Yes, the worste day of my life...
Kitana: Kang helped me find your dorm, and we just connected
*Kitana and Kang kiss*
Mileena[ew... ] Uhh.. well i will talk to you guys later.
Kitana: We cant come in? :(
Mileena: Maby another time.. im so tired i go in tommorow around 5:30(pm) ok sis?
Kitana: -Smiles- Ok we will talk then.. Just you and me.
Mileena[Thank you elder gods!] Cya till then.
*She walks into the apartment, Happy that the day is allmost over. She looks at her clock it shows the time of 5:47(Pm)*
Mileena[Ughh... so tired..]
*Her cell phone rings, It not a call.. its a TXT Message from hanzo*
Hanzo: So. How was the first day?
Mileena: Amazing, Met alot of great people but mostley talked the whole day. Probaly do some errans for sonya tommorow :)
Hanzo: ah. Guess i will ttyl, I plan on moving to edenia soon.
Mileena: Awsome! Can't wait for you to meet my family =)
*She changes into somthing relaxing, and relaxes on her couch watching T.V*

*She takes a Nap, she wakes up and looks at the time on her phone. 9:43(pm)*
Mileena:[Shower, Eat, Sleep...]
 
YungQ94

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A few things:

Grammar: You edit the crap out of this thing ok. You sit down and you edit like there ain't a tomorrow anymore. There's multiple grammatical errors.
Plot points: Good ones, hopefully you cover more characters in the next installment.
Length: one and a half page is awesome

Overall good job, improve your grammar and can't wait for more
 
liukang234

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YungQ94 said:
A few things:

Grammar: You edit the crap out of this thing ok. You sit down and you edit like there ain't a tomorrow anymore. There's multiple grammatical errors.
Plot points: Good ones, hopefully you cover more characters in the next installment.
Length: one and a half page is awesome

Overall good job, improve your grammar and can't wait for more
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Agreed. I did notice a few incorrect grammars (Lui 3 times in a row) But nothing too major. I hope you keep on with this, and if you need any help, you have a lot of people to ask.
 
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*We see mileena sitting on a couch in her apartment reading the Edenian Times newspaper*
Mileena: [MK.inc is at the top of the stock market. That’s a good thing]
*Some one knocks on the front door*
Mileena: [Who could this be?]
*She gets up and walks slowly to the door. It’s Kitana. She opens the door*
Kitana: May I come in?
Mileena: Of course, have a seat… Want something to drink?
Kitana: Thanks and No thanks. You talked to dad yesterday?
*The two sit on the couch, Mileena is drinking a glass of water*
Mileena: UmmHumm…. Is there something you wanted from him?
Kitana: Yea a job. Kang isn’t working and feeding two mouths and paying bills on a minimum wage pay check will not work out.
Mileena: Why don’t you call him today? You didn’t talk to him yesterday..
Kitana: No… Every since kang and I were dating he been shady..
Mileena: in other words he dislikes him?
Kitana: I wouldn’t say disli-
Mileena: You mean Hate..
Kitana: –Sigh- Yea he hates him... What am I going to do...?
Mileena: -Takes a Deep breath- Well to start off you should talk to dad… Let him know that you really like him and do you know the reason why he hates him?
Kitana: No??
Mileena: -Cuts off Kitana- See. If he spends time with him and gets to know him maybe they will connect and be good friends..
Kitana: How do we get them to connect?
Mileena: Simple. We wait until Sunday and you visit dad and mom.
Kitana: -Sounds Confused- Why SunDay?
Mileena: What do most men do on a Sunday afternoon?
Kitana: -Thinks… Still thinking- -Looks puzzled-
Mileena: [Wow really…]-aggravated- FOOTBALL!! … They watch football.
Kitana: -Looks sad- Oh.. but how do we know if they like the same team?
Mileena: C’mon... everyone loves the Edenian Royalty!
Kitana: (^_^ Face) Yeah, They do.
*Mileena looks at the calendar. Saturday October 1, 2011*
Mileena: Do you want me to come with you to make sure everything goes smooth?
Kitana: OMG yes!!
*Mileena looks at the clock. The clock shows the time of 4:38(pm)*
Mileena: Uhh…. Well I have to go soon. Be there tomorrow at 12 the game starts at 1:30.
Kitana: why so early?
Mileena: Don’t question just do it.
*Kitana Gets up and walks out the door. Before she reaches the door she throws up peace sign*
Mileena: [Finally I can get ready... Thank the elder gods <_<)
*She spends about 20 Minutes getting ready. She drives to MK.inc walking into the door to see Han again*
Han: Hello! –Smiles-
Mileena: -Waves back at Han-
*She takes the elevator up to the office floor. She sees Sonya with a huge stack of papers*
Mileena: Need any help?
Sonya: You’re here early? Your shift doesn’t start until 5:30.
Mileena: To late now. I’m already here.
*She takes half of the stack out of Sonya hands*
Sonya: Just lay it on the table. Thanks a lot had to carry these all the way from the 2nd floor.
Mileena: All ways welcome –Smiles-
Sonya: Today is a busy day and I need you moving a lot we cant sit down at all today the Khaos realm is building a new MK store. First I need you to get a copy of the papers Kuia liang signed yesterday.
*Sonya hands mileena the papers*
The copy room is on the 5th floor go straight it will be the 5th door on the right side.
Mileena: [FML... The second day and it’s the busiest day.]
*She goes to the elevator and presses the number 5. The elevator stopped on the 4th floor.
*The door opens, a lady the same height of mileena walks in she has red hair and is dressed in a all red business suit*
Skarlet: Hi your mileena right?
Mileena: Hi. Yes I’m mileena [He had to announce it more than two times… everyone knows me]
Skarlet: Looks like were both going to the same floor.
Mileena: haha. Yea, Copy room?
Skarlet: No just into the employee lounge I’m on my break. So what college in earth realm did your graduate from?
Mileena: UGA. The University of Georgia, Kinda wish I could go back and get my masters but im still paying off last years tuition.
Skarlet: Don’t worry. Work hard here and you will pay it off in no time –Smiles-
*The elevator stops on the 5th floor. The twosome walk out the elevator mileena goes into the copy room*
Skarlet: Nice to meet you. Hope we can talk again soon.
Mileena: Like wise.
Mileena: [Ok. –Looks to the right- There’s the fax machine… -Looks to her left- Ah. The copy machine.. I’m assuming she wants 1 copy but I will do 2 just in case]
*She attempts to copy the papers. But the copy machine jams*
Mileena: [You have to be shitting me...] –She looks around- [No one to help me.. WAIT! The employee lounge]
*Before she walks out the door a man in a teal business suit with a pink undershirt walks in*
Cage: You need help Beautiful?
Mileena: Yea. The copy machine is jammed and I need help.
Cage: Well let’s see what I can do.
*The two walk over to the jammed copy machine*
Cage: Your father said you were a beautiful woman he wasn’t lying.
Mileena: [Your not half bad your self..] –Blushes- [Wait... I can’t let some random guy ruin my relationship with Hanzo]
Cage: Its fixed try now.
*She copies the papers*
Cage: How about we get a cup of coffee or dinner at the blue crab after your shift?
Mileena: Sorry. I already have a Boy friend at the moment.
Cage: Who said anything about a date? Just being friendly –Winks-
Mileena: Sure I guess.. I have nothing planned after work today.
Cage: What’s your name again? Sopheena, Cataleena..
Mileena: Mileena. –Laughs-
Cage: At least I was close. Catch you later around 7?
Mileena: Yea! It’s a Date [Not really...]
Cage: I see what you did there.
*The walk out the copy room going separate directions along the hallway. Mileena makes it to t
Sonya: Where have you been?! It’s been like 30 minutes.
Mileena: The copy machine broke down. A guy by the name of Johnny helped me out.
Sonya: See you have two copies. That’s the exact amount of copies I need, now see the computer –She points to a abandoned work area- Hop on it –Sonya hands her a sheet of note book paper with a list of orders of toys, Magazines, and Video games- Go into word and type all the list and later I will put it in excel.
Mileena: Ok.
*She turns on the Comp. And types the whole list.*
Mileena: -Glances at the clock 5:45(pm)- [Leave here in 15 minutes.]
*Sonya approaches mileena*
Sonya: I see you’re finished. A fast worker –smiles- Your dad wants to see you in the meeting room. Take the elevator to the 3rd floor and you’re in the meeting room.
Mileena: Thanks. [Wonder why he wants me in a meeting?]
*She takes the elevator to the 3rd floor. The door opens you see 4 Men around a Oval table*
Kahn: Ah. There she is.
Mileena: -Waves at the other 3 men-
Kahn: This is my Daughter mileena –Escorts mileena to her seat- Take my seat I will stand and talk.
Kahn: Today men…
Mileena: [And woman <_<]
Kahn: Is the beginning of a new expansion of the MK.inc Empire. The Khaos realm has agreed to allow us to sell our goods in there homeland.
*All the men clap. Mileena sits there in silence*
Kahn: And because of this the Ambassador of the Khaos realm Havik has agreed to visit us here at MK.inc we must insure he has an enjoyable time here in Edenia!
Mileena: May I ask what is my role in his visit here?
 
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Kahn: Simple. You’re going to be his personal assistant. Bring him drinks, talk to him, and just make sure he has a great time here at MK.inc
Mileena: [I see…]
Men.
Mileena: [Ughh.. and woman]
That concludes our meeting for today.
*The other men leave the room its only mileena and Kahn in the room*
Kahn: You look nice today.
Mileena: Thank you.. May I ask a question?
Kahn: Shoot.
Mileena: Just out of curiosity. Why do you dislike Lui kang?
Kahn: –Long sigh- I just have a feeling he is going to hurt your sister…
Mileena: Trust me he wont.. This Sunday he wants to watch the Football game with you to get to know you better..
Kahn: really? Wow a lot of Kitana’s Boy friends were scared of me.
Mileena: Trust me you will like him.
Kahn: I’m going to take your word. Seeya tomorrow love ya.
Mileena: Love you to.
*Mileena walks into the elevator and goes to the first floor*
Han: Later CEO Mileena.
Mileena: -Smiles and waves good bye-
*She drives back to her apartment*
Mileena: -walks into the her apartment- [Atleast nothing bad happen today..]
*Here cell phone rings its Hanzo*
Hanzo: Herro. (Asian voice)
Mileena: Herro (Asian) voice.
Hanzo: -Laughs- What are you doing the rest of the day?
Mileena: [Should I tell him? Maybe best if I don’t.] ummm.. Nothing just going to cook something to eat and relax.. [I feel terrible for lying <_<]
Hanzo: Wow I though I had time to talk to you, But my mom wants me to run errands for her I will call you later tonight if im not busy mmmk?
Mileena: Mmk bye...
*She gets ready for her friendly dinner with Cage, she has here MK9 alt on but less revealing (Derp).*
*She drives to the blue crab down town. She see cage standing beside his car with his MK9 2nd costume secondary color suit on*
Cage: Woahh! You look amazing!
Mileena: -Blushes- why thank you.
*The two walk in the restaurant and are seated immediately*
Mileena: You have connections here?
Cage: Well of course. My dad’s brother owns the whole franchise.
Mileena: (Amazed) Seriously?!
Cage: Yea. I wouldn’t lie to you.
Mileena: [Free food: D and this guy is cool] so how long have you worked for my father?
Cage: About 2 Years, Having the Nephew of the Blue crab owner working at MK.inc bring in a lot of positive publicity y’know.
Mileena: Yea.
*The Waitress stops at there table*
Kitana: Are you two ready to orr--- MILEENA!? CAGE?!
Mileena: (o_o) [What are the odds…] ha.. Hello.
Cage: [didn’t see that Komming <_<] uhh can we order please..
Kitana: Why are you here with him?
Mileena: Calm down… It’s a friend thing he knows about Hanzo.
Kitana: Does Hanzo know…
Mileena –Whispers to Kitana- No.. But keep it a Secret please! –Begs Kitana-
Kitana: My lips are sealed. Now what will you two have.
Cage: I will have to live red lobster.
Mileena: Same for me..
*She takes there order. About 15 mins. Later the two sit in akward silence.*
Cage: -Laughs- I forgot Kitana was your sister. Im so sorry.
Mileena: Its cool –Smiles-
*Kitana serves there meal, they eat*
Cage: ready to leave?
Mileena: Yea. Do me a favor please.
Cage: Sure. What?
Mileena: Can you leave her a big tip. She lives with her boy friend that doesn’t have a job and is working her ass off to provide for the two of them.
Cage: Sure thing beautiful. –Smiles-
*Kitana picks up the check and sees the $100 Bill Tip*
Kitana: -Screams!! But not loud enough to gain attention-
*The two leave the restaurant and make it back to there cars*
Mileena: I had to great time, thanks for inviting me.
Cage: No problem seeya tomorrow.
*They look into each other eyes and cage leans in for a kiss*
Mileena:[WAIT! What is he doing?! x_x] No. I can’t I’m sorry…
Cage: -Leans back- I—Yeah I forgot. –small laugh-
*Mileena drives back home change into combatable clothes*
Mileena: [Cant believed that happened.]
*House phone rings… She ignores it and the voice mail comes on its Kitana*
Kitana: Mileena you have to tell me what happen! Call me back..
Mileena: -sighs- [maybe..]
*She calls it a night*
Thanks for reading.. Hope you enjoyed it 
 
Exemery

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IDK, I'm not into just dialogue, I think maybe some more story but this is your writing style so its ok :D
 
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Exemery said:
IDK, I'm not into just dialogue, I think maybe some more story but this is your writing style so its ok :D
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*He looks at exermery's comment* <--- Try to picture it in your head.. thats what i do when im reading over my work.
 
liukang234

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I'm definitely liking the series so far. Very interested in seeing how this goes. Also, good grammar improvement. Wasn't exactly looking, but didn't notice a single problem.
 
iViTal

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Herro : 3 It’s been a while since I opened up MS word and work on the next EP. Here I go..
Today is a slow Sunday for our new intern at MK.inc she is off today and plans to spend the whole Sunday with her family.
*We see a digital clock with the current time of 9:57 AM.*
Mileena: -Low yawn-[Sunday. My first day off] –she looks at the clock-[10 o’clock] –She rolls out of bed and heads into the bathroom and changes into casual clothes-
*The Garage door opens and we see her car backing out the small drive way. She pulls up to an Average size house. We see Kitana’s car parked in the drive way. She drives a small black Cadillac *  Here kinda image what the house of the CEO of a huge corporation would look like.
*She hops out the car and walks up to the front door*
Mileena:-Rings the door bell-
Muffled voice: Who is it?
Mileena: Your favorite big sister.
Rain: -Opens the door- -Squeals- Bout time you came back! I missed you a lot –Hugs mileena-
*Rain is a young boy around the age 12*
Mileena: -Hugs gently- I missed you to. Let’s go inside and talk. K?
Rain: mmk.
*They walk into a living room. It’s a huge room with couches, love seats, and beautiful plants everywhere.*

Mileena: Are you ready for your first day of middle school? Heard you have a class with mom –Smiles-
Rain: -Frowns- Nooooo. Mily I’m scared heard some 6th graders get dumped in the trash can there first day.
Mileena: Yea. Someone is going to throw Mrs. Kahn’s son in the trash can…
Rain: You never know though. Wait. Where do you live now?
Mileena: Nether Street. In an apartment –sigh- I’m working to get out and find a nice house of my own here in Edenian.
Rain: Can I come over your house sometime. It’s boring here most days. Either dad is at work or mom is running errands. Its fun sometime to aggravate Kitana -Laughs-
Mileena: -Laughs-
*Kahn walks in*
Shao Kahn: HEY! I didn’t know you were here.
Mileena: -Smiles- Been here for like 10 minutes talking to rain about school.
*Kitana and Kang walk in. Kang is dressed causally red polo shirt and blue jeans and Kitana is wearing a blue polo shit and skinny blue jeans*
Mileena: [This is going to be a disaster <_<]
Kitana: Hey daddy –smiles- How are you today?
Shao Kahn: Good..[If this excuse for a man would leave my house] SO! Kang I hear that you were mileena’s Biology classmate.
Mileena & Kang: Chemistry…
Shao: Chemistry Biology same thing.
Mileena: No dad..There’s a huge differen---
Kahn: Anyways.. Kang can you pass me the remote. The Game is coming on soon! Who are you going for?
Mileena: [W/e.. ]
Kang: The Edenian royalty! –Smiles-
Kahn: Wow. You like them to? Most people from ER (earthrealm) hate them.
Kang: I know right! This year they are stronger than ever. With the new rookie QB from UGA we will be in the Outworld Dome this year.
Mileena & Kitana: [Outworld dome? Meh football talk] -They exit the room at the same time-
Rain: Think im going to play IMK9. Not a huge fan of football. –He goes to his room-
*The two football fans watch the game; they enjoyed each others company*
Kahn: 27-14. That was an amazing game! They shut down the running game and excelled in the passing game.
*We see Mileena & Kitana Peaking around a corner to eavesdrop on there conversation.
Kitana: -Whispers- You think our plan worked?
Mileena: -Whispers back- I have no clue [Lets hope it did..]
Kang: Couldn’t have said it better my self… Mr. Khan at first I thought you had a problem with me dating your daughter, But after today you really changed my mind –smiles-
Kahn: To be honest I didn’t. Maybe cause I didn’t know you at first but now I think you’re the guy for my kitty.
Mileena: [ Ew!? o_O]
Kitana: [YES!!!! :D]
Mileena: -Whispers- It worked!
Kitana: -Hugs mileena- Thank you so much! Step 2 we have to get him a job at MK.inc.
Mileena: uhhh.. We really shouldn’t push…
Kitana: Dad! See im working two Jobs…
Mileena: [ Our luck… Wow can’t believe she did that]
And its hard to pay bills and what not. I was wondering can Lui get a Job at MK.inc to help out.
Kahn: Well of course he can. The more the merrier at MK.inc –Laughs-
Mileena: [o_o it worked…..]
Kang: Thank you Mr. Kahn. When can I start?
Kahn: Tomorrow. You will work the Night shift with mileena.
Kang: What exactly will I do?
Kahn: See. The copy room is a busy place and people are in a rush to get papers copied, faxed, Printed etc.. So I decided to make you head of the copy room. People will give you papers to print, copy etc.
Kang: Sounds simple. Can’t wait to start!
*Mileena walks in the living room*
Kahn: Ah. Say hello to your new co worker.
Mileena: Hello.. I guess?
*Mileena Phone rings… Cage is calling her. A text message comes in. Its Hanzo saying Hi*
Mileena: Can I answer this?
Kitana,Kang,Kahn: Sure
*She walks out side on the patio and answers the phone*
Mileena: Hello?
Cage: Sup beautiful. Are you free to go out?
Mileena: -Looks at her watch its 4:24- Uhhh… Maybe, I’m with my family at the moment. I may be free in like 15 mins.
Cage: K. I really just want to go out for coffee my treat.
Mileena: Just curious. Why do you want to go out?
Cage: Just being nice.
Mileena: [Heard that one before <_<]
I really wana get to know you. Is that bad?
Mileena: No its not. But I have a Boy friend alrea—
Cage: Im not trying to steal you from him..,
Mileena: So what happened at the Blue crab was trying to be friends?
Cage: Woah… Stop being a hostile chill.
Mileena: Kid… Iisten I don’t mind being friends, but im happy with the current relationship im in now. K?
Cage: Was that supposed to hurt my feelings? Ouch…
Mileena: -laughs- I’ll see you in 15 mins. K?
 
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Cage: can’t wait. Later
Mileena: Bye.
*She ignores Hanzo’s Text message and walks back into the living room*
Kitana: -Pulls Mileena into the kitchen- Was that cage?
Mileena: No… it was Just a friend. Stay out of my business <_<
Kitana: Nooooo… That was cage!, Mily don’t trust him he’s a douche bag who only wants to get in your pants…
Mileena: -raises voice slightly- How do you know what he will do? He seems like a nice guy. He invited me to dinner and we are going out for coffee today.
Kitana: You don’t have to raise your voice. Please listen to me… don’t trust him.
Mileena: You didn’t say nothing when he left the 100 dollar tip.
Kitana: he did it because you asked him to. Mily I’m not stupid. I also saw when you almost kissed him. Do you know how many girls he been with and slept with?
Mileena: How would you know?! Please explain.
Kitana: -sigh- We dated like a month ago. Jade warned me but I didn’t listen. He still wants me. How do you think I got the waitress job?
Mileena: I don’t care. Im still going besides it would be wrong to stand him up like that.
Kitana: [At least I tried <-<]
*She tells her family good bye and drives to star lucks. She walks in*
Cage: -Waves- I’m over here.
Mileena: -Sits in a chair at the square table with cage- Hey.
Cage: Hi. What would you like?
Mileena: It doesn’t matter.. (Mileena looks as if something is bothering her)
*Cage comes back with two cups of Brazilian coffee*
Cage: -Puts one cup in front of mileena- Here you go. –He sits in his seat- What’s wrong? You looked troubled.
Mileena: No im ok…. Just have a lot on my mind at the moment.
Cage: Family?
Mileena: Kinda sorta… -Changes the subject- What exactly is your job at MK.inc?
Cage: head secretary assistant. Some what similar to what you do with sonya.
Mileena: Ah. Who’s the head secretary?
Cage: A douche bag named Mokap… he’s an ex Stunt man who got lucky and did motion capture on IMK9.
Mileena: -laughs- Mokap is a good friend of the family. Don’t dis him like that.
Cage: sorry I didn’t know.
*They finish there coffee and there at mileena’s car*
Mileena: Guess I will talk to you later.
Cage: You wouldn’t mind if I came to your house and chill?
Mileena: [Should I?] –Thinks fast- No. My boy friend is coming over from the nether and he already doesn’t know about our two get togethers. Sorry.
Cage: I understand. What about a hug?
Mileena: -Hops in her car- I really have to go.. Sorry.
*She drives home. She walks into the apartment*
Mileena: [Cant wait to get out of here : (]
*She prepares to call it a night and prepare for her next day*

OMFG! Writers block + Forgetting to write = Delayed episode.
 
YungQ94

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Yes it is finally here!

I'm loving how your including Cage into the fray as a very important character. Awesome stuff bro :)
 
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