Fifth Fake: Butcher's Cavern

Prophet

Prophet

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Here is my fifth fake, I hope you like:

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I don't know if I like it though. In my opinion its not the best one out of the five that I've done.. the arms seem to straight.. and I think the blood looks overdone.. feedback please.
 
The blood is way too overdone. Plus, not all the blood is the same shade. Also, don't you think Kahn should have some blood on him, he did inflict most of that damage and with all that blood on there it's unlikely that he'd stay that clean. Cage's stance doesn't look like the stance of a man who's had his arm torn off, y'know? The arms also have a weird look to them, they should be limping a bit if they're lifeless. Lastly, is that a skeleton coming out of one of Cage's arm?

Ps: Start using Lifebars, counters, etc. It'll look better.
 
Ethix said:
The blood is way too overdone. Plus, not all the blood is the same shade. Also, don't you think Kahn should have some blood on him, he did inflict most of that damage and with all that blood on there it's unlikely that he'd stay that clean. Cage's stance doesn't look like the stance of a man who's had his arm torn off, y'know? The arms also have a weird look to them, they should be limping a bit if they're lifeless. Lastly, is that a skeleton coming out of one of Cage's arm?

Ps: Start using Lifebars, counters, etc. It'll look better.
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As I said, this isn't the best one I've done.. I liked the background idea.. the character thing was the least of my worries.

And no, it's not a skeleton coming out of his arm, it's a skeleton hanging out of the chains
 
Prophet said:
I don't know if I like it though. In my opinion its not the best one out of the five that I've done.
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i dont like it at all. nothing seems right about this one. :? oh well. it obviously did help you to understand what you needed to improve on.
 
BlackWarrior said:
Prophet said:
I don't know if I like it though. In my opinion its not the best one out of the five that I've done.
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i dont like it at all. nothing seems right about this one. :? oh well. it obviously did help you to understand what you needed to improve on.
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Yeah, the whole background was inspired by an accidental streak of red on the chains.. It was originally going to be a sort of Outdoor DeadPool Waterfall thing..
 
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