I read it now, it was pretty bad. The only good thing about it is the art, but for some reason no X-rays nor the over-exaggerated gore.
Kitana as a whole is done & dusted character. Boring. Sassiness is not a bonus, it's a detractor. Kotal Badass acted like Kotal Dumbass. In fact, I didn't recognize neither him nor Ermac, their lines and actions reeked of stupidity/weakness/submissiveness. Tanya dropping F-bombs left and right? When did that happen in game? Isn't she supposed to be some sort of an ambassador? There are more reasons, but meh.
And that feminist ending, just rofl. Not only it's overdone at this point, but it's cheesy as hell.
p.s. don't like that Jade costume. I guess the MK9 version is permanently burned into my memory, and for the good reasons.