What do you think of my fanfiction so far?

Do you think it's scary? Do you like the cast? Do you have suggestions on what I can add to it?

You should have kept it all in one thread.

Hey guys.

What do you think of my writing? I want to be a famous writer like Michael Crichton, my idol.

It's cool to have idols, everyone does, but, you really need to get away from basically re-telling Jurassic Park. I haven't read everything you have posted, but, from what I saw, your ideas are all based on JP. If you want to be your own writer, you have to have your own ideas. If you just continue to feed from other people's ideas, you wont make it very far. You have to be original to get noticed. If people see that you just stay around someone else's idea, they will think you don't have the creativity to have your own ideas.

I posted a new story, Raiku, no one commented.

Give it time young warrior

NO, I am not, read it again.