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    Official MK Poetry Thread

    Please don't give me negatie points for posting
    this her,e but it's the only forum I figured it would fit in
    without being too much off topic.

    Noob-Saibot Poem

    Even though my soul is tainted,my selfless
    life has finally ended. A wraith is what i'm
    cursed to be, traveling over land and sea.
    Take the smoke and make it mine, build my
    army over time. Sent me not to burning hell,
    but sent me to the Nether-realm.

    Take it easy on me please. This is my first poem about a
    Mortal Kombat character.

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    ..Now where making poetry about Mortal Kombat... let me giive it a shot.

    Smoke-

    Robot I am, Lin Kuei I possess
    My embers of steam they enjoy to caress
    Allied by Sub-Zero, and captured by Kahn
    I couldn't decipher which side I was on.

    So now I stand, beside another
    Who happens to be my allies brother
    Dark and hidden, away from light
    Waiting for the signal to fight



    A little something-something.

    I'd rate yours 7/10, because there was no rhyming. And I like rhyming.

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    they are very beautiful
    it's a pity for me cause i have not enough vocabulary to make one, for a terminale L it is unaceptable!
    sorry for me! but congratulations for you!
    i\'am french so forgive me if i do mistakes!

    everyone has a part of evil in him, the only thing you can do is to admit it!!!

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    Hmmm.. not really sure where to put this Topic, So I guess it can stay here for now.

    However, both of those were really good!

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    Stryker

    I was just doing my job
    beating down those who rob
    Then souls started flying
    and I felt like crying
    Then a big mean Centaur dude
    was being very rude
    So I gave him my donut
    and we became friends...
    ------------------

    Hehehe.. I know the last one doesn't rhyme, but true poetry doesn't have to..
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    Haha I like that Malitor, especially the last.. let me try a few more (Poetry is a form of artwork):

    Goro -

    Four arms I wield
    I assist my master
    Killing the threats
    That bestow my master
    Don't touch me there.


    I got bored of it...

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    reptile-

    a race long since dead
    i still raise my head
    and smear walls of my lair my enemies' RED
    but my brothers are gone
    and before too long
    it will be all i can do to just scuttle along
    genocide aside, de-evolution to ride
    the laws of nature i must abide
    and in the end, my face i shall hide

    good lord....... dont get me started on this poetry thing....... we'll all be done for.

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    Man.. that was really good KoRoneR!
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    I like the poems. Some heartfelt for the characters, some just funny. I'll try one:

    Johnny Cage-

    My skills are natural and I'm no fake.
    Yes, I'm a jokester, but give me a break.
    I got into something and I had to help defend.
    Little did I know it would be my end.
    Boy was I heading above, heaven I could see.
    Something occured and I had another chance to live.
    I guess that occured, because it was meant to be.
    Oh well,
    I must help save earth again from what could be hell.
    Maybe then I could prove that I am great in what I do.
    Yes, that will have to do.
    I am IMAGE!

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    it is hard but i will try!

    i am li mei, a girl of outworld
    i was in the tournament of quan chi
    but his true goal was put me
    in his momified army
    i was saved happily
    by master bo rai cho
    i knew others good warrior like sub zero
    tarkatans hordes invaded villages
    an if we don't react, it will be for ages...

    it is a bit little but it is sweet,no?
    i\'am french so forgive me if i do mistakes!

    everyone has a part of evil in him, the only thing you can do is to admit it!!!

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    I liked it fan de tanya. It rhymed (Even though poetry doesn't need that) and it went along with her story. Good job!
    I am IMAGE!

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    yours is good also
    but when you say "poetry doesn't need" to hrym? are you sure
    if it is the case it is poems in "prose"

    i will try again!

    i am sub zero
    brother of noob saibot
    grandmaster of the lin kuei and hero
    i travelled through the realm
    in order to save earthrealm
    i trained and formed frost
    but unhappily she betrayed me and died
    it was a great lost...
    i put her in a sarcophage
    found a new armour...
    it was a new begginning for my humour!*

    *humeur
    i\'am french so forgive me if i do mistakes!

    everyone has a part of evil in him, the only thing you can do is to admit it!!!

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    I was saying most poems that don't rhyme are good also, because I didn't want anyone to think that I feel poems must rhyme. I tried to make my Johnny Cage poem good. I'm glad you like it.
    I am IMAGE!

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    thank you malitor. i must say im happy to see this is going so far. i didnt think anyone would take to the poetry thing deadskull started. but its going well. nice one deadskull

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    Been gone for about a week but i'm back.

    Thanks to every one who liked my poem
    and nice poems every one who posted some.

    Here's my Sub-0 one I wrote after I posted the Noob one.

    Sub-0

    My frozen past is but a blur ,from wher I did not lead but
    serve, am not a ninja, but Lin-kue, but sought to be
    Grand-Master one day, my allies students and allies
    may die, but I shall fight to stay alive, so now I take
    this mighty name, from older brother long been slain.

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    Through Mileena's Eyes

    A Clone
    In the shadows watching Kitana on the Throne.
    I'm hungrey for her blood
    To throw what will be her lifeless corpse in the mud
    To drain her with my sai
    and make her look in her killers eye
    As she withers and begins to die
    Then everyone will see
    It is I whom will be
    Destructions key...

    All hail Princess Mileena

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    i did a poem about my created character!

    i am red,tanya's brother
    i fought tarkatans hordes ans saved her
    but baraka made me prisonner
    i was imprisonned in kahn's tower
    met him and made him an offer
    he couldn't refuse
    baraka was very confused
    i fought him, it was with pain
    but i won and let him lain
    on the ground
    tanya and me
    were free
    and live happily
    in edenia...
    i\'am french so forgive me if i do mistakes!

    everyone has a part of evil in him, the only thing you can do is to admit it!!!

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    i love this thread.... i must revive it.

    Shang T'sung

    Ancient souls shall i uphold,
    within my own? nothing but cold.
    and for all my power, my concience was sold.
    Sometimes i look old, sometimes in my prime,
    but my eminence and power transcends time.
    Sometimes i look young, thanks to heroes unsung,
    sometimes my defender takes lives with his tongue.
    and from my time as a servant,
    to my time as a master,
    thanks to my greed, my life ended much faster.

    With all of my might, i tried to keep what i won,
    But all was forgotten with the rising sun.
    For I am Shang T'sung.

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    This should be the offical poem thread, if there isnt one already.

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    goro

    i am big
    and freakin strong
    the 4 armed guy
    in the black n red thong
    i got more wives
    than playboy's hugh
    ive died more times
    than jesus too!

    tadaa, pure shakespeare :D

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    Quote Originally Posted by PuNkRoCkMKxX
    This should be the offical poem thread, if there isnt one already.
    I agree

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