But now for the topic at hand (or multiple, as it were), what do you guys look for when you read a story or are in the process of writing one? For me, I try to leave lots of loose ends in a story.. and start off with some strong action scene or dialogue. The loose ends are plot devices; things that seem unimportant but those will be referenced and be the jumping off points in the other two books of mine. Like, I killed off a few characters so I could *insert reason here* and they could *do these things*. Basically, I likes to add the suspense and mystery :mullet: What about you guys?
This is awesome! Glad that you made it bb, no one really visits the writers group lol. Can't wait to read all of your stories, I too planned on writing a series on the adventures of Shujinko, right from his childhood days to the very end, adding lots more detail and depth along with some of my stuff. Ill hopefully be able to start in a few months.
I feel like updating Bio-Raka. Did anyone actually read itXD?
I feel like updating Bio-Raka. Did anyone actually read itXD?
I think its a good idea if this thread was stickied, provided it is spam free and has serious talk only.
“What is this?” Guy thought. As the fires began to die off they revealed a imposing figure donning a black and goldish yellow armor complete with a intricate ninja mask reminiscent of a scorpion. Guy felt a hellish vibe surround him and he could feel the ghastly white eyes pierce his soul. Whoever this being was he was obviously an enemy.
“Scorpion.” The sorcerer called out. “Kill him.” The human-like figure did not respond but it did slowly advance towards Guy in a intimidating gait prompting the Bushinryu heir to assume a defensive stance ready for the worst to come.
“You think you can stand up to a hellspawn?” Scorpion barked
“That is the last mistake you will make in that mortal coil of yours!”
“I do not fear you demon!” Guy scoffed.“I will send you back to hell where you belong!”
was a nice fight intro, somewhat similar to my style of writing.
I just hope you put new paragraphs for every quote(Like i did in the quote), because that's how it works lol. No wall of text and I think it's good
Critical when you gonna get up and write Change of Blood
Walls of text are the bane of my existence, somehow every story I write ends up a big text brick.
*Pats Critical on the back* Me too man, me to :']