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    Rain: A Manifesto

    Been working on this story for a while. It's a work in progress but I was just looking for some feedback. This story is a 1st person account of Rain's life.

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4797677/1/Rain-A-Manifesto

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    Re: Rain: A Manifesto

    ^pretty good! One thing i would have liked is to have seen more of is his pride as a prince and as a demigod rather than so much focus on him being cowardly and seeking empathy.
    I would prefer him to have more of a sinister/pompous attitude toward others showing very little sympathy looking down of others because he is high born.
    But pretty good stuff!

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    Totally get where you are coming from! Don't worry, that prideful, posh and royalist attitude will be gradually coming soon. After all, he doesn't know he's highborn yet.

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    Re: Rain: A Manifesto

    Awesome stuff! Thank you for sharing this!

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    Re: Rain: A Manifesto

    Very nice. I love the aubiographies MK use to have. This is great stuff and makes me want to write now.

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    Re: Rain: A Manifesto

    Quote Originally Posted by rainreptile View Post
    Totally get where you are coming from! Don't worry, that prideful, posh and royalist attitude will be gradually coming soon. After all, he doesn't know he's highborn yet.
    Sounds good! I look forward to reading more

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    Re: Rain: A Manifesto

    Thank you guys for the comments. I'll let y'all know when the next chapter comes up.

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    Next chapter is up.

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    Re: Rain: A Manifesto

    I never go outside the MKX forum, my bookmark is even a direct acces to that forum lol, I'm glad I stepped out to the main forum page to find this, even though I haven't read it yet, I'm intrigued, I'll read it soon, after my bloody physics test.

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    Re: Rain: A Manifesto

    Haha. I do the same thing. If you're a Rain fan, I think you'll enjoy what I have in there so far. Good luck on your physics test!

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    Re: Rain: A Manifesto

    I am really enjoying this... nicely done

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    Re: Rain: A Manifesto

    Oh, thank you! More coming soon.

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    Re: Rain: A Manifesto

    I think that it's great so far. I love your writing style and development of Rain throughout the story. I hope that you continue.
    Respectez cette chatte parfaite.

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    Re: Rain: A Manifesto

    Another chapter or 2 have been posted up. Working on this slowly but surely.

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