Subz 711
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Those are pretty good ideas. I liked Jade's idea the best. I would like the woman in Jade's ending to be Delia, former protector of Edenia. Perhaps when she envisioned armageddon she could have realised that the future could still be inevitable even if one of her son's succeed in defeating Blaze. Thus as a safekeep she put away a part of her soul or an apparition at a secret place in edenia (in the same way she and Argus did during the events of armageddon to communicate with Taven, just that this Obelisk wasn't meant for him or his brother). Perhaps the part of her soul trapped in the obelisk manages to communicate with Jade's soul beyond the boundries of death (perhaps maybe Delia could have chosen Jade when she was born, thus putting in a good background) and explains to her what must be done to prevent armageddon and uses what ever power she has to bring Jade back to life.
That story is quite good as well and quite similar to one I had written awhile ago. Its more detailed with the sequence of events explained out, mainly involving the remaining and certain 3D era characters, with those who died remaining as undead, more or less. You can check it out at the link at my sig.
Also I included Shujinko in my story. There are actually a lot of changes that would require Shujinko's presence in MK10. For example, Earthrealm defences are very weak now since only Johnny Cage and Sonya are left as warriors of Raiden. In order to fortify the defences Raiden goes in search of ex members of The White Lotus Society, the secret organisation created by Raiden to combat other realm threats but faded away to oblivion during the events of MK1, as it lost some of its relevance as earthrealm was (seemingly) secure with Liu Kang's victory and many members left to pursure their own goals. Shujinko was a member of this organisation and so was Kai, both of whom Raiden is aware of. He can go to them for help in the course of which Shujinko decides to put his quest on hold temporarily to help defend earthrealm. This is what I think is a good route to go by.
Also another misconception I keep seeing is people saying if Shujinko is in the next MK, Onaga should be there as well. Remember Shujinko isn't really tied to him, in fact he has had a role in many of the major events upto deception. He helped Scorpion find Quan Chi in the Netherealm during the events of DA and he also unknowing had a role to play in helping Shinnok escape the netherealm. He can easily pitch in and out without the inclusion of Onaga.
Thanks, yeah the Delia idea is cool too. I was actually thinking more along the lines of this being the One Being. With Shujinko dead he must find a way to merge the Kamidogu. Thus, he uses the figure of a woman to talk to jade in the waking world.
While I HIGHLY disagree with the chapter format. I did go with it because that seems to be what Boon and Co. are sticking too.
My chapters go like this
1. Sareena
2. Sub-Zero
3. Bo Rai Cho
4. Li Mei
5. Ermac
6. Skarlet
7. Mileena
8. Jade (Jade awakens in outworld to find it under siege by Reiko, under Shinnok's order, she is guided by the woman to go and find Bo and the others, it also guides her to the portal to earthrealm once Outworld is taken over so that she can meet up with Raiden and the others. So Jade is pretty essential here.)
(Cut back to Earthrealm)
9. Fujin (Here we actually get a glimpse of the heavens. The elder gods are being slaughtered by Quan, Shinnok, and their forces. Fujin fights back. He defeats Quan and knocks him to his feet before Shinnok grabs him and throws him from the heavens. He then crashes down onto Earth where Kai sees him fall from the heavens. Kai rushes to go see what has happened.)
10. Kai
11. Kenshi
12. Cyrax (Here Sub-Zero and Sonya are sent to Lin Kuei HQ to find and recruit Cyrax to their cause. Raiden sends them on this mission because he believes his forces to still be weak. He also sends Sub-Zero because of his knowledge of the area and Sonya because she is the only one who can restore Cyrax mind.)
13. Sonya
14. Johnny Cage
15. Scorpion (This is the beginning of the end of the story. A civil war pretty much breaks out with ultimate rivalries playing out Mileena this time on the side of good facing a manipulated Kitana. Jade facing Tanya and Ermac facing Rain that's pretty much a war for Edenia. Skarlet vs Nitara. Sub Zero vs Scorpion. Noob vs Smoke[That's right Noob ends up fighting for good, but for a different agenda]. Sonya vs Jax. Mavado vs Kabal. Sareena vs Frost.)
16. Raiden
That should give you a guess of how my story turns out. I really just wanted to give the chapters but I figure a little descriptive could give an idea what some of them are for.
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