LOL, seems like cb0363 beat me to it with some of his corrections in the face! I am just to damn slow, dammit.
Anyway, I have prepared something to post, so I still want to post it, which covers something of cb0363`s
corrections and something else.
Overall, good job, Cris Berserk I think the general look is very good, most of all I like the look of the arms
and the stomach very much. However I would still tweak it a bit and took the freedom to make several changes.
First of all, the legs seem to be a bit O shaped, I would counter this by extending their width a bit towards
the inside of the legs.
Also, in the original, her smile was much more pronounced than in your version, it looked almost like a grin,
which means that her teeth were more showing and her mouth was larger, which is what I changed.
Then I reduced her nose length a bit because in the original, it wasn't as long.
Also, in the original, her eyes had a more joyous expression just as in the emoticon ^-^, so I tried to make
the eyes more slanted to achieve this look.
For the record, I STILL think that her legs are too short in comparison to the rest of the body, but we covered
that already, and it seems that I can't convince anybody, so I dropped that criticism. Or maybe her arms are
too long? No matter, we will see if it looks right when she is animated, anyway.
Apart from that, good job Cris Berserk, and good luck to you for the rest of your Sonya interpretation.