A good comic needs more than witty dialogue. Unless the dialogue is witty enough, then you can get by. But this was only moderately witty dialogue. I mean, bashing Windows? How trite is that?
Actually I think the humor is the subtle kind of text that I've come to anticipate from ]{0MBAT. Was it his best work? No where near, but I think he did well enough to get a good chuckle. Nice job, old buddy.