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    Bloodsport War Saga

    I've been working on this for a while, although it's still not done yet. I'll post each chapter once a week and everyone can check it out. Here is the first chapter:


    The First Struggle:
    Before man ever existed, a war began between Heaven and Hell. On one side, the generals of Heaven are holy angels Andela and Gabriel, and on the other side, the generals of Hell include the wraith Griladrolio, the war-craver Remug, and Satan's right hand demon, the Hellbringer. When the battle raged on, Hell was winning the fight; leaving the bloods of almost every holy soldiers they can kill everywhere. It continued on for thousands of years until man was caught on with peace and flourishing lands. But suddenly, the tides soon turned when Gabriel sacrificed himself to kill the Hellbringer and severely wounded Remug along with disintegrating every demon that is in the way of the solar blast. After discovering Gabriel's sacrifice and the Hellbringer's death, a powerful entity known as Lucifer comes out and spread terror to both holy soldiers and demons alike. Realizing what the struggle has done, both God and Satan decided to call a truce between them, ending the never-ending struggle for now and battled Lucifer. It was a hard battle, but fortunately, God and Satan was able to defeat Lucifer and seal him in another dimension and decided to divide the seal between themselves that if something happens to both of them, Lucifer will free once more. During this time in Heaven, God and the Holy Angel Generals mourn for the lost of Gabriel while in Hell, Griladrolio return to the 5th Dimension of Hell and Remug has fitted his wounds with cybernetic parts, now calling himself Remug-D6. Plus, the priests from both places prophesizes the return of the Hellbringer will bring forth back the war and tips the scale all over the universe. Knowing this might happen, some of the priests appointed mystic sorcerers, mages and warriors to form their own group known as the Sacred Counsel.

    Ok! How is it??
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    Re: Bloodsport War Saga

    Here's chapter two:

    The Birth of the Sacred Warriors:
    After a few years, a serpentian warlord known as Serpenzor wanted to conquer the whole universe with an iron fist. He has already taken over 43 planets and Earth is his next stop. Already know of his coming, the Sacred Counsel created the 9 sacred elemental powers, but the 5 main elements are fire, water, electric, earth and darkness to stop his progress. After it was created, the counsel chose warriors from all over the world, thus bringing the birth of the sacred warriors, to put an end to Serpenzor's reign of terror. It was a long hard fight between good and evil, but out of desperation, the sacred warriors combined their powers into one and seal Serpenzor away in a dimensional cage. Not only did they save Earth, but they also freed most of the planets that were already conquered by Serpenzor. Afterwards, the original sacred warriors locked their powers away in a place no one can reach to until the next generation of warriors are chosen to wield the ultimate powers and also entrusted their secrets to a tribe of alien hunters known as the Predators. Only they know where the power is and know when the time is right, to find the next chosen ones to hold the powers belonging to good.

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    Re: Bloodsport War Saga

    VFD there actually quite good. I really like the first part. You should keep writing them. look forward to reading more



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    Re: Bloodsport War Saga

    Sorry I took so long. For now on, I'll post whenever I'm ready and the chapter is complete. Here is the third chapter:

    Rise of the Dark Lord:
    Now a hundred thousand of years later to present day, although peace now exists on Earth, a strange meteor crashed land on an unknown desert region somewhere in Saudi Arabia. It looked like an ordinary meteor, but inside is filled with absolute evil and when the government tries to extract some pieces of the rock for experimenting, a Japanese Mage forcefully made her way through the barricades and tries to destroy it, but every one of her attempts failed. As a last resort, she sacrifices herself to seal the meteor and create a powerful barrier to prevent it from escaping just in case the seal breaks. After she passes away, instead of going to Heaven, she became one of the elder priests of the Sacred Counsel. Suddenly, a thief accidentally takes the seal off and unknowingly frees a hideous monster from another planet known as a Zorbian. The thief was at one point scared of it, but when it offered the price for freeing it, he was surprised and he wanted to work for it. Before it took him under its wing, the Zorbian asked for his name. He replied "its Edgar McResa" and wonders what its name. It said its name is Vascero. Edgar wonders how Vascero is going to get out of the barrier. Unknown to everyone even for the Mage, Vascero is also a Necromancer, a race who uses devastating black magic, showing it by easily destroying the barrier with a magical bloody sword. Wondering where he is, Edgar guided him around the world to show Vascero the business of the world. All of sudden, Vascero wanted to rule the world forever. First, he formed his underground business called Ventruder Inc. After forming it, his criminal empire swept all over Saudi Arabia, and all of sudden starting to spread all over the world becoming one of the top crime organizations of all and every gang now begins to call him the dark lord, because of his shadowy army and unusual black look. Soon after his rise, he took down and killed most world leaders and even civilians, regardless to strike fear to everyone who stands in the way of becoming the most powerful being of all.

    Author's comment:
    I know that most Necromancers could only bring the dead, but I wanted to do something a bit more with it besides just resurrecting.

    VFD-Patheon of Death and Destruction
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