Poem: The end to the depression

once again I started writting poems non-stop, so here's one I wrote up earlier today


The end to the depression

My poems, they all sound depresseing by sight,
but they're messages of how my soul slowly dies,
As I drift through this world,
as my sadness always build,
I wander in this sadness,
while moving on toward madness,
but looking for the prize,
the only thing that tells no lies,
it will make me feel so happy,
that it might cause my soul to start laughing,
to laugh for the first,
I would never feel at worst,
not after I meet her,
the girl I can't remeber,

I love her in the lands of dreams,
Even if she may be so far over seas,
I so badly wish just so my body would know,
Just only if sombody would show me the way I should go,
But the depression it lurks within me though,
never till this very day has it chose to let go,
I 'll keep those hopes of the girl I've seen,
I'll chase her till the day I bleed,
So now I leave you all with this in mind,
My depression will not end, not till I meet her in time...

wooow nine thumbs up.

Thats a nice poem, it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside

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ChiefThunder said:

Congratulations, you've just bumped a 22 month old thread. :mrgreen:

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